Wraith Upgrade Path

More than 200 chapters later, the heroine still has no skills to shine, either relying on her familiarity with the plot or relying on others. At the end of each story, there is a long paragraph of verbosity. It's annoying, but there's no need for us to go. The heroine is very holy and arrogant. She is always self-righteous. She always makes decisions for others inexplicably, or gives others so-called grace. Isn't it just because the evil ghost king has a good temper? ? ? Especially after the nanny's utopia ended, I was so angry that I laughed so hard! ! The devil king is all around you - no matter what you do, you still think that you are righteous and act according to your own ideas. Originally, I felt uncomfortable when I called myself "myself" earlier, but when I saw this paragraph, it completely hit the mark.

I read a novel about a girl who was robbed of her fiancé by her best friend, and then slandered her in various ways. Finally committed suicide. Seek help from petitioners. The petitioner allows her to live a wanton life. The girl said while drinking Meng Po soup. Can I not ask for wealth in my next life, but ask for a pair of eyes that can see through people's hearts? Our pursuit is happiness, our purpose is joy I am just an ordinary woman, my man is an ordinary man, we are all ordinary people. A woman's love depends on her ears, and a man's love depends on his appearance. This is a man who was disfigured in order to save his husband but did not receive treatment and was eventually abandoned. Because she wants to prove that her man will not dislike her or get tired of her.

Am I the only one who thinks the heroine is very Bailian? She agrees to whatever others ask her for.

But every time the heroine collects her grievances, she must ask for grace for everyone. Wouldn't it be too holy? After all, there is no love without reason and hatred without reason in the world.

It seems to lack a bit of feeling and the kind of attraction that makes people read on.

I don't like the God of Love in the final ending. The God of War and the God of Dreams have been in love with Xiao Bai for tens of thousands of years. The God of Meng has been married to Xiao Bai for three lives. The God of War has always been with Xiao Bai in the mirror. Why is it that the child's love arrows are randomly matched with other people's women? I think it's a bit forced. If I don't like this, it's better to be single.

As the King of Ghosts, the male protagonist is a bit too easy to talk to, especially when he doesn't like the female protagonist at the beginning and responds to her every request, which is really fake. The heroine is also a bit too virginal

The male protagonist is the evil ghost king, right?

To be honest, I'm a little disappointed. It's fun to watch from the front, but when you get to the back, it's really hard to describe. When I watched it on another account before, the first half was really exciting, like the reveal of the face of love supremacy, the decisive battle with a high-ranking mistress, the nanny's dream utopia, the opposite of the one who is taller than the devil, and sitting in the courtyard singing about the empty city plan. It's really beautiful to watch. But later on (don't complain, this is a sincere suggestion) it really fell apart. There are still some shortcomings. For example, in the story "The Taoist is one foot high and the devil is one foot high," Miao Dan and Guidu's language appears many times, and the word "why" appears many times. She is a typical patriarchal rural woman who is illiterate. In some cases, using the word "why" is slightly inconsistent with the character. For another example, I just feel like there are a lot of pitfalls, enmmm... Also, in the dimension of Big Planting Little Lovely Wife, I just don't understand why Jiang Muxue continues to stay when she clearly has the ability to leave Gu Yu's house. I think this is a small flaw. Then, she wrote a small note saying that Jiang Muxue did not give any woman she disliked. Isn't it a small note for women she doesn't like? Well, it might be a little confusing, so I'll give you a picture to sort it out. Original text: small note ↓ A woman who is pleasing to the eye I think: small note ↓ Dislike people After all, taking this little note is not a good thing. Also, I think it would be a bit awkward to position the heroine as someone with a hard heart after being hurt by a scumbag, and to be impressed by the repeated hardships of those scumbags who have done wrong things in the plane, and to think that their bad deeds are excusable. Another thing is that the author has a lot of typos, so be sure to pay attention to this. There is one more! I think my imagination is a little too big? Well, the heroine was actually a night goddess before! ? It feels a bit, uh... (Let me tell you first, don't be angry when I talk about the author). It's just a plot that I exhausted my brain and put it together with all my strength. Of course, it could also be the setting that the author had thought of beforehand, so that's my problem. Emmmm... Overall, the full text is pretty good. It's a lot of fun, some of the story themes are very novel, and the author's writing is good. Some planes really give people a very, very refreshing feeling. Of course, this book is finished. There are too many words, so it is impossible to rewrite them one by one. I just want to share my thoughts after reading the book. Of course I didn't give it five stars, I hope the author doesn't care too much. I gave it a four-star rating. Well, I'm still very satisfied with this book. The reason for giving it four stars is that I hope the author still has room for improvement. Well, the author probably has no plans to write on this subject in the near future. I still very much hope that the author can open a new book on the subject of the fourth article. Of course, our heroine Jiang Muxue herself is very fond of her. Well, my favorites in the whole story are Tang Li and the Evil Ghost King~ By the way, for a prince like Tang Li, would you please give me a dozen? The above are all my own personal evaluations. There may be some deviations. I hope the author will be generous. (Well, it's really a sincere evaluation, so don't criticize it.)

[Author, you! Out! Come! Dad, who is the male protagonist? If you don't tell me, the baby will cry for you!