
The Abandoned Daughter of the Miracle Doctor: Kill the Evil Emperor with a Kiss
by Yan Feixuan
About This Novel
A new book is coming: "The Master of Metaphysics Was Driven Crazy by the Obedient Naughty Dog" Welcome to read "Xiaoyu, you are my servant, no one can bully you as long as I am here!" "Then how about we torture the scum together and show our affection?" "My husband thinks so too." In her previous life, Lan Qingyu died due to the revelation of the divine tree Huangding. Once she traveled through time, she became the incompetent and good-for-nothing daughter of the Lan family. A talent test revealed that she had no spiritual roots, and her heartless and scumbag father cruelly abandoned her in the Netherworld Forest. Little did he know that at this time, she was quietly transforming, contracting divine beasts, refining elixirs, sitting in the omnipotent spiritual plant space, and countless beautiful men were coming to her. He is the decisive and decisive Shura King Leng of the opposite sex. The soul of the Demon Emperor was awakened by her kiss and has been haunted by her ever since.
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Official(237)Scraped 1mo ago
Play a game and see how many more you can take
I'm not Hua Qiangu, I don't have Bai Zihua I am not Bei Weiwei, there is no Xiao Nai
Lack of character
If you don't like the heroine, you can be a little crazy, but when you don't have the capital, being crazy like this is simply a lack of IQ, so what if you have talent, lack of strength is not equal to zero. When you reveal a trump card when you are unfamiliar with the place, others can hire a master to kill you in seconds. This is called overconfidence. The author is great, don't you think the first few chapters are a failure for the entire article? The idea is okay, but the description of the character's personality is not very good. I suggest you try more to figure out how to portray a character with a clear personality that everyone can like. Maybe I think from a different angle than others, but only when all aspects are considered can a truly good article be written.
It's so unpleasant!
I just finished reading the whole article under the author's haste, and it's really full of loopholes! I feel very disappointed🙀👿😻 so I can't help but want to complain, the author forgives me🤞🤞🤞 The heroine said she wanted to form and cultivate her own force, where is it? Is it the Magic Sound Gate? It can be said that the Demonic Sound Sect was established by Cang Lin for the Netherworld Demon Lord and has nothing to do with the heroine. What about the group of strong men that the principal of Aotian College helped her train? She completed the task but didn't accept it, and only let her father monitor her. Isn't this a joke? Since you don't believe that people just don't use it in the first place, this matter ultimately came to nothing. What about the people in the space that Huangjue helped train? As a result, those who deserved to be killed in the battlefield of gods and demons were killed in order to keep the secrets of the space, and the remaining people were absorbed by the Demonic Sound Sect, but in the end it was to no avail. The male protagonist actually owns the entire Demon Realm and the Demonic Sound Sect. From the beginning to the end, the author never allowed the female protagonist to have her own powerful power, which was a waste of Huang Jue's efforts. What a pit! ! ! The strength of the heroine! Is the God of War advanced? The author has never introduced what levels are above the God of War. In short, the author did not let the heroine reach the peak at this moment, and stayed at the high level of God of War. The Ancient God Tower disappeared like this, and the rich vitality was gone. Even the seventh floor of the Ancient God Tower was not opened, let alone the situation inside. The author did not even touch upon it, and in the end it was fruitless. What a pit! ! ! Forget it, but in the end the author came up with a trap. He never expected that the author would make Huang Jue leave the heroine in this way. And the foreshadowing laid by the author does not match the final ending. The author has vaguely revealed before that the Nether Demon Lord has devoured the poisonous souls of all the disciples of the blood alliance, which is a great help for the male and female protagonists in fighting against the Nether Demon Lord. So why does the author not follow this rhythm? What if the Nether Demon Lord is not allowed to suddenly become poisonous under certain circumstances (like an army of monsters, demonic energy is the nemesis of wounds), and then the Nether Demon Lord is defeated and eventually beheaded by the male and female protagonists? Instead, let the Nether Demon Lord blow himself up only to be discovered to have been poisoned? This inconsistency is very frustrating! What's more, the author shouldn't have sacrificed Huang Jue at all. Huang Jue, as the heroine's master and her biggest trump card, is gone like this. It's really not a good thing! ! ! I would like to ask, what kind of charm and mystery can the heroine have without the sacred tree, the ancient divine tower, the medical book, and the spiritual plant space? Has the author ever thought about it? Isn't it a bit unreasonable that the Queen of Feathers doesn't even have a decent artifact? After Qi Huangjue left, the heroine had nothing at all! Firstly, the Huangding Cauldron was lost for elixir refining, secondly the ancient elixir recipe disappeared, then the spiritual plant elixir disappeared, and finally the Holy Land for Cultivation disappeared. Not to mention that all the heroine's possessions are in the space, including the World-Destroying Divine Sword, the Nirvana Whip, and the Phantom Divine Needle. Even if there is no room for the male protagonist, what about the inheritance between the two of them a hundred years later? Finally, regarding Lan Qingze, does the author have any grudge against him? His parents, sister, uncle, and good friends all have their own happiness, and they even have a younger brother who can be his son. However, the author didn't give him his own happiness in the end. He had to be both a daddy and a brother, and only gave him a mediocre life. Isn't this a grudge? Anyway, I felt weird after reading the whole story.
Don't like the heroine
This heroine is so crazy before she even practices, and has no self-awareness at all.
Is it really okay for the heroine's mother to be thrown into a mass grave after her death? Wouldn't the brother and sister secretly find and bury them? The heroine's arrogance at the beginning made me think that there could be a cheat, but in the end, she was still beaten badly. Without the capital of arrogance, she would be seeking death.
This woman is silly, a little conceited, and not pretty.
Did the heroine not consider her own strength and consequences when she was crazy?
The heroine's cultivation is so slow and there are a lot of troubles. The heroine doesn't know how to make alchemy. She only learned it after time travel, and she has not made any progress. She didn't know anything in modern times. What did she learn in modern times? She still didn't understand it after traveling through time. She wasted time in vain, couldn't defeat anything, and was arrogant. In the end, it was Mo Yao who solved it.
I can't understand it at all. There is no cause and effect, no fuse, and I suddenly go to another thing.
No language
I cheated my own mother from the very beginning. I thought the heroine could protect herself. She scolded her so much, but it turned out. . . . He is so awesome even though he has no strength. He really deserves it. He has the halo of the protagonist and will never die no matter what he does. I can't stand it anymore.
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Official(237)Scraped 1mo ago
Play a game and see how many more you can take
I'm not Hua Qiangu, I don't have Bai Zihua I am not Bei Weiwei, there is no Xiao Nai
Lack of character
If you don't like the heroine, you can be a little crazy, but when you don't have the capital, being crazy like this is simply a lack of IQ, so what if you have talent, lack of strength is not equal to zero. When you reveal a trump card when you are unfamiliar with the place, others can hire a master to kill you in seconds. This is called overconfidence. The author is great, don't you think the first few chapters are a failure for the entire article? The idea is okay, but the description of the character's personality is not very good. I suggest you try more to figure out how to portray a character with a clear personality that everyone can like. Maybe I think from a different angle than others, but only when all aspects are considered can a truly good article be written.
It's so unpleasant!
I just finished reading the whole article under the author's haste, and it's really full of loopholes! I feel very disappointed🙀👿😻 so I can't help but want to complain, the author forgives me🤞🤞🤞 The heroine said she wanted to form and cultivate her own force, where is it? Is it the Magic Sound Gate? It can be said that the Demonic Sound Sect was established by Cang Lin for the Netherworld Demon Lord and has nothing to do with the heroine. What about the group of strong men that the principal of Aotian College helped her train? She completed the task but didn't accept it, and only let her father monitor her. Isn't this a joke? Since you don't believe that people just don't use it in the first place, this matter ultimately came to nothing. What about the people in the space that Huangjue helped train? As a result, those who deserved to be killed in the battlefield of gods and demons were killed in order to keep the secrets of the space, and the remaining people were absorbed by the Demonic Sound Sect, but in the end it was to no avail. The male protagonist actually owns the entire Demon Realm and the Demonic Sound Sect. From the beginning to the end, the author never allowed the female protagonist to have her own powerful power, which was a waste of Huang Jue's efforts. What a pit! ! ! The strength of the heroine! Is the God of War advanced? The author has never introduced what levels are above the God of War. In short, the author did not let the heroine reach the peak at this moment, and stayed at the high level of God of War. The Ancient God Tower disappeared like this, and the rich vitality was gone. Even the seventh floor of the Ancient God Tower was not opened, let alone the situation inside. The author did not even touch upon it, and in the end it was fruitless. What a pit! ! ! Forget it, but in the end the author came up with a trap. He never expected that the author would make Huang Jue leave the heroine in this way. And the foreshadowing laid by the author does not match the final ending. The author has vaguely revealed before that the Nether Demon Lord has devoured the poisonous souls of all the disciples of the blood alliance, which is a great help for the male and female protagonists in fighting against the Nether Demon Lord. So why does the author not follow this rhythm? What if the Nether Demon Lord is not allowed to suddenly become poisonous under certain circumstances (like an army of monsters, demonic energy is the nemesis of wounds), and then the Nether Demon Lord is defeated and eventually beheaded by the male and female protagonists? Instead, let the Nether Demon Lord blow himself up only to be discovered to have been poisoned? This inconsistency is very frustrating! What's more, the author shouldn't have sacrificed Huang Jue at all. Huang Jue, as the heroine's master and her biggest trump card, is gone like this. It's really not a good thing! ! ! I would like to ask, what kind of charm and mystery can the heroine have without the sacred tree, the ancient divine tower, the medical book, and the spiritual plant space? Has the author ever thought about it? Isn't it a bit unreasonable that the Queen of Feathers doesn't even have a decent artifact? After Qi Huangjue left, the heroine had nothing at all! Firstly, the Huangding Cauldron was lost for elixir refining, secondly the ancient elixir recipe disappeared, then the spiritual plant elixir disappeared, and finally the Holy Land for Cultivation disappeared. Not to mention that all the heroine's possessions are in the space, including the World-Destroying Divine Sword, the Nirvana Whip, and the Phantom Divine Needle. Even if there is no room for the male protagonist, what about the inheritance between the two of them a hundred years later? Finally, regarding Lan Qingze, does the author have any grudge against him? His parents, sister, uncle, and good friends all have their own happiness, and they even have a younger brother who can be his son. However, the author didn't give him his own happiness in the end. He had to be both a daddy and a brother, and only gave him a mediocre life. Isn't this a grudge? Anyway, I felt weird after reading the whole story.
Don't like the heroine
This heroine is so crazy before she even practices, and has no self-awareness at all.
Is it really okay for the heroine's mother to be thrown into a mass grave after her death? Wouldn't the brother and sister secretly find and bury them? The heroine's arrogance at the beginning made me think that there could be a cheat, but in the end, she was still beaten badly. Without the capital of arrogance, she would be seeking death.
This woman is silly, a little conceited, and not pretty.
Did the heroine not consider her own strength and consequences when she was crazy?
The heroine's cultivation is so slow and there are a lot of troubles. The heroine doesn't know how to make alchemy. She only learned it after time travel, and she has not made any progress. She didn't know anything in modern times. What did she learn in modern times? She still didn't understand it after traveling through time. She wasted time in vain, couldn't defeat anything, and was arrogant. In the end, it was Mo Yao who solved it.
I can't understand it at all. There is no cause and effect, no fuse, and I suddenly go to another thing.
No language
I cheated my own mother from the very beginning. I thought the heroine could protect herself. She scolded her so much, but it turned out. . . . He is so awesome even though he has no strength. He really deserves it. He has the halo of the protagonist and will never die no matter what he does. I can't stand it anymore.







