One Piece: Super Monk

It's a pity. Such a good book, it would be a pity not to keep updating it.

It's a world we take for granted again, the monk knows too much about the Pirate King! Are the precepts and rules that we promised to abstain from the seven emotions and six desires, greed, anger, obsession, and hatred, etc. Clear? Could it be that besides chanting sutras in the morning, the monk is just waiting to catch up on One Piece? Are you still practicing martial arts? It is better to let the protagonist become a monk halfway. You don't have to worry about these things. Then you are reborn as a child. Who made the monk's robe for the protagonist to live alone? There are a few monks in modern times who have this ability. It goes without saying that eating meat requires blood. There are no Shaolin monks who can eat meat and still have strong martial arts. , I have already despised the Buddhist precepts, and it is not very awkward to still wear the skin of a monk. Not everyone has the grandeur, fraternity, persistence and freedom of Jigong. It is better to just set the bald head to miss the past life, and live the rest of the life as you like. Then there is Zoro, the original story seems to be from the next village! With that kind of cool and arrogant character, wouldn't it be more appropriate to be an orphan and then eat a lot of food and never hold back on those who bully him or bully others? He has defeated all the invincible opponents in the next village. Who stipulates that there is only one village? Usopp counts as one, but Luffy still has another city? Why did you find a father for Suo Da, and then Suo Da went to the next village to beat someone invincible, and then went back to his own village to play? Thinking about it all is wrong, why not set Soda's father to reappear in the new world. Soda should also have a powerful father in the blood-related pirate world. The protagonist went to help people deliver things to the next village and met Soda who was fighting. Finally, what is the point of choosing a camp? If you are not a revolutionary in terms of eliminating evil, it is more appropriate? And the most annoying thing is that because a pirate kills the person who picks up the protagonist, he is not a pirate. Do you directly regard One Piece as evil? How about going to have a head-to-head fight with Luffy later, and what the heck is it that Genshiro becomes a Wano? With the strength of the twenty-one swordsmen and the great swordsman, is it possible that Hawkeye, foil swords, etc. Are all from Wano? Then also write down why you settled in that village in the East China Sea. There were neither resources nor talent to open a martial arts gym. Isn't it more likely that the great swordsman either saw through the government or failed in swordsmanship and returned to his hometown to live in seclusion? Domineering and three colors are required together. The domineering color is not a bad one, okay! If Genshiro knew this and had the strength of the great swordsman, he would already be a Yonko! If the plot setting and characters deviate from reality and the original work, it will be uninteresting.

A pretty good book

It's better not to write a book in order to make money

In the beginning, human beings are inherently good, and the author is a bad guy. If you don't update, I don't like it, the author has no choice but to take care of it.

The order of hell collapsed and the heaven system descended. Qitian was "unfortunately" selected by the heavenly system to regain hell, and from then on he lived a life of wine, money and women. When others are trying to pick up girls, girls are trying to pick up Qi Tian. When others are trying to pretend to be compared, Qitian doesn't need to pretend to be compared, because he is the biggest comparison in the world. (The best heaven system) Super exciting!

The book you wrote, author, is very nice and in line with my wishes, but you don't insist on writing it... As for your new book, I can only say "haha". If one day you can't persevere anymore, wouldn't I be in the trap again...

It's a pity, I really like it. If you didn't insist on writing it, how could you not know that more people would read this book?

Ah, it's such a pity that I stopped writing.

How can it be so easy to write 20,000 to 30,000 words and stop writing if it doesn't become popular? That's how writing a book is. People who can persist in writing may not necessarily become popular, but those who can't persist will definitely have no chance.