Perfect Coaching

I can write about other things, but it's a little hard for me to read socially. Wouldn't it be better to write about my own daughter? I also want to write about other people's daughters. Those who know are other people's daughters. Those who don't know think that the protagonist's two daughters and two children know each other and play together for a day. After that, it was okay to go out and play around a little bit. It was a bit exaggerated when you wrote about someone else's daughter feeling like she lives in your house. And at most, she is an acquaintance. The protagonist and the other person's mother are not familiar with each other. They just met each other and played in the amusement park for a day. They treat others like this. Is there such a good thing in this world? And it's not the protagonist's daughter who takes the initiative to strike up a conversation, it's the other party's daughter, so how can it be written more reliably? Is her daughter the protagonist's biological child? Other people's parents don't know how to feel pain, so they rely on the protagonist to feel pain? Why should the protagonist be so nice to someone else's daughter? Cute? Pretty? Or do you get along with the protagonist's daughter? There are many things that are beautiful and cute. When you meet someone who takes the initiative to get to know a pig-footed daughter, do you have to be nice to others?

That year, two groups got into a fight near the entrance of a KTV. In the chaos, a girl was knocked to the ground. I rushed up to pick her up and walked to the corner. Unfortunately, I was mistakenly stabbed in the back by someone. I endured the severe pain and carried her to a safe place! Later we met and fell in love! Every time after I finished, she would snuggle in my arms and caress the scars on my back! I thought this was love until she fell in love with a rich man! On the day of her wedding, I went to the tattoo shop to cover up this scar. From then on, there was no more love in my world! But I'm not sad at all, because I made it all up!

I feel that the protagonist has a problem with the education of his children. In Chapter 137, when eating at someone else's house, two children went to the kitchen to eat secretly. This kind of thing is very uneducated. Doting on your daughter is one thing, but you must also have a certain temper. If you do something wrong, you must educate her. Don't follow her in everything, otherwise she will grow up to be a unruly princess.

The narration accounts for 80%, the main plot 10%, and the subplot 10%. Summary: This is a magical book that makes people abandon the book in a minute!

You said this novel is very interesting, but the problem is that you can check people's talents, why don't you check them all? They write that talents are so important in that world, but they don't focus on talents. It turns out that students are so important, why don't you first clarify the situation of students? No matter how good the class bonus is, shouldn't the talent problem that students care about most be solved? Doesn't it mean that the earlier we detect it, the better?

It's just that the pace is a little slow, and the main character in over 900 chapters is still second-rate🙃

It was pretty good at first, but it became more and more watery as I read on. Millet grains run through the entire novel from beginning to end. Almost every chapter has a large part about Xiaomi Li and Mengmeng. Can you imagine that most of each chapter of a novel with more than a thousand chapters is devoted to how to spoil children? ? ? I saw a kind of morbid pampering. I was really tired of watching the two little princesses in the book. There were too many scenes.

Why do you need to give money to the school? I'm waiting for your reply.

I've only read a few chapters and it seems pretty good so far. I prefer to read this type of book, but I just hope that the author will be less clichéd and less bloody.

Drunk dreams become empty and you will drink wine, Paint a beautiful dream in heaven.