Carry Jade Pendant
by My Bun
About This Novel
Jianjie Wang Haiming, unintentionally opened the family heirloom - the jade pendant space! There is clear river water in the space, which can accelerate the growth of animals and plants. The dew dripping from the small world tree can cure all diseases. The inexplicably simple stone slab possesses the skills inherited from ancient times. In fact, being a farmer is quite popular. You can walk your dog and cultivate the fields. There are fruits and birds and animals all over the mountains and fields, as well as gorgeous wild flowers and sentimental cabins in the woods. A comfortable life, so many beauties...
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Official(36)Scraped 1mo ago
Confuse
It seems like I saw an acquaintance in a book
Trash written by the protagonist
The protagonist has acquired the skills and gained space, but he has to fight back passively. The author should read the space skills written by others. The protagonist you wrote is not ruthless enough and ends up fighting back passively. The protagonist is blind and arrogant but has the ability to take the initiative. If a story like this makes the supporting character not take human life seriously, the protagonist should be written to be more ruthless and use violence to fight violence. I have read such novels
The donkey's words are wrong, the sentences are not fluent, there is no storyline, and the jump is too big.
Rubbish
I just want to say to the author that you are not suitable to write such a novel. This novel is rubbish and unfinished.
Holy shit! One hundred thousand dollars is worth millions! ! !
I made a typo. Come on, write a novel.
Poor writing, no storyline
Was someone eating the junction between each chapter? Things were not finished at the end of the previous chapter, but they were completely gone at the beginning of the next chapter. I don't know what I was writing.
Brother, you are not suitable for writing novels. What should I think of your non-sequential sentences?
Brother, you are not suitable for writing novels. What should I think of your non-sequential sentences?
(??Ω??)?♡
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Community(0)
Official(36)Scraped 1mo ago
Confuse
It seems like I saw an acquaintance in a book
Trash written by the protagonist
The protagonist has acquired the skills and gained space, but he has to fight back passively. The author should read the space skills written by others. The protagonist you wrote is not ruthless enough and ends up fighting back passively. The protagonist is blind and arrogant but has the ability to take the initiative. If a story like this makes the supporting character not take human life seriously, the protagonist should be written to be more ruthless and use violence to fight violence. I have read such novels
The donkey's words are wrong, the sentences are not fluent, there is no storyline, and the jump is too big.
Rubbish
I just want to say to the author that you are not suitable to write such a novel. This novel is rubbish and unfinished.
Holy shit! One hundred thousand dollars is worth millions! ! !
I made a typo. Come on, write a novel.
Poor writing, no storyline
Was someone eating the junction between each chapter? Things were not finished at the end of the previous chapter, but they were completely gone at the beginning of the next chapter. I don't know what I was writing.
Brother, you are not suitable for writing novels. What should I think of your non-sequential sentences?
Brother, you are not suitable for writing novels. What should I think of your non-sequential sentences?
(??Ω??)?♡
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