Super Military Industrial Overlord

Not bad. The story is very, very logical. The professional knowledge is also good. It doesn't feel anticlimactic or very sci-fi. Anyway, I like it very much.

Too much nonsense, Rory. It feels like I'm trying to make up the word count.

What the hell, such an awesome character is reborn. Don't let him play with high technology and make guns and cannons throughout the story. Then you write about the War of Resistance. I wonder if an ant, no matter how strong it is, is still an ant. There is also a relationship department where a big shot in an industry is only 50. The heroines who write the singles either have a clear goal (ex-wife or ex-girlfriend), or have a good family background or are stunning. Just stop liking your protagonist if you don't like it at first. If you like me, should I accept you? There is no such thing as a friend in need. Why are your ears so soft? If you're writing about a shitty rebirth, just go write about campus. Tired of reading the whole nonsense! Also, your novels all use the same template and the outline is the same. Can't you change it? Can't stand it any longer and cut it off. When writing a novel, details are very important, so why don't you write it like a soap opera? From the late Qing Dynasty to the present, China has gone through several stages, and the changes in people's hearts have also been different. It's okay, just look for some film and television literature from different eras. Otherwise it would be a drama

The "super military-industrial empire" that copied the gourd didn't even change the title of the book. It's typical of changing the soup without changing the medicine. The number of chapters they wrote is almost twice as many as yours. Talent

A bunch of nonsense, a metaphor that lasts a long time! ! ! !

Where did the General Staff's equipment department come from? There is only one General Assembly Department, which is at the same level as the General Staff Department

Too protracted and too many technical terms

When will the exemption be limited?

Can you write well? It's so slow.

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