My Trash Can is Ancient

It looks a bit depressing, that white lotus. Although plastic bottles are not valuable in modern times, they were so valuable in ancient times and saved lives. When life is better, I don't have much gratitude. I only express some gratitude and worthless things in ancient times. At least half of the 100 taels sold from the bottle should be given to the gods, instead of asking the gods to give me everything I want, so that he can support himself and a village and seek more profits for himself. Benefit is right, but you can't always take the kindness of gods for granted. There will be a lot of goods when you don't pay for them. When modern people want some wood products and embroidery, they start to make their own free products. There are only a few wood products in the village. Why can't you spend more money to buy some in the town? If you contribute one thousandth of the goods, there will be no shortage. In the end, the two parties are Silly Baitian and Bai Lianhua. Haha →_→, let's complain, but the author's creativity is quite good, but it's just different from my values.

I always jump to read novels, but I didn't jump to this one. In fact, the novel written by the heroine Nono is quite good. The author can try to separate them. By the way, the fact that the eldest brother of the Li family turned into a girl really made me laugh out loud. I love reading novels written in large and small formats. The characters are well developed and the plot is to my liking. After reading the last chapter, I was a little stunned and didn't come back to my senses for a long time. It's really beautiful~(≧▽≦)/~

Saw it this morning. I prefer the plot of the heroine losing the porcelain vat and Wen Zixia's plot. The rest of the content is too mixed. I skipped the whole novel written by the female protagonist at the beginning and went straight to the back. I did the same thing when the heroine was writing the second novel. It's amazing that the porcelain vat can be left anywhere else. Suggestion 1: Omit the part of the novel written by the heroine. Does the author want us to read the novel written by you or the novel written by the heroine? Moreover, this way of reading cannot be integrated. Easy to mess. Or did the author write it just to make up the word count? I haven't read the content of the novel, so I guess it's not right. Tip 2: Only write in one place. Just the one from Wen Zixia. Didn't the heroine and her partner travel through time to live with them? Just write this. Or add this porcelain jar that can change time and space. Don't add too much, just occasionally. That's my opinion. This is my first time reviewing a novel in so many words. It's not easy. Give it five stars. I hope the author can see the suggestions and make improvements.

I don't like the idea of ​​inserting novels in between... So I gave up writing it.

Author, do you know that this good book of yours was originally a good-looking book, but it was ruined by all the messy things you inserted in it. When I, a bookworm of more than ten years, saw the front page, I thought I had found a book that was very suitable to my taste. I didn't expect to see you interspersed with many other books. Why don't you write a quick book? Why write this one? It's such a mess. I never write a book review because I really thought I found a really good book. Why do you have all those things in it? Those things make me unable to read it at all. One

How should I put it... There is no distinction between priorities and stories, and stories from several different worlds are interspersed at the same time, which makes people feel extremely confused. Usually I am reading a story, and then without noticing, the next sentence has changed to another story. Other typos and other problems are trivial. The most uncomfortable thing is that at the beginning, I was not familiar with various characters, and the story chapters jumped around, which was very confusing. It wasn't until I gradually became familiar with the main characters and events, and the author seemed to stop writing so confusingly, that I gradually got used to it.

What did the author think? It's a good joke that you made it like this. When you write a book, you write a book. Why do you put the book written by the heroine in the article?

I'm convinced. It's the first time I've read a novel and I'm so angry. I can't read much of the main text, so I'll make up the word count after half of it! !

I don't know what the author wants to write. I write a novel within a novel. The writing is so detailed and well-written. However, the result is not good and there are many typos. If you really want to write that story, you can write a separate novel. After reading your chapter, I will say that this is my style and I will not change it. , Having style is a good thing, but you should at least have a good foundation, and then look for style. If you write the story in it so badly, then you are just trying to count the words. The theme story is not rich in content, and the result is that you are still talking about it. You don't have the ability of a literary youth to suffer from the disease of a literary youth...

The novel within the novel takes up too many chapters. I don't want to read the novel inside.