The Female Half-fairy's Hardcover Yang Qi Jar

Hay The plot is very flamboyant. Although the writing style is good, the ability of the ambush writer is not good. Suddenly, an information point is revealed, which makes people wonder if they have missed something, and the emotions are superficial. The emotions of the protagonist are just a paragraph, and it is over after reading it. Moreover, the fighting scene in the first unit is very careless. In the end, the background setting of the male and female protagonists is terrible, and the writing is not amazing. I suggest the author polish it more. Then there is the unclear explanation of the characters. I read three chapters before I was sure that the dog was a cat... Then there is the male protagonist. It is designed to create suspense about the identity of the male protagonist, but the writing is too popular and does not create suspense for people at all. It makes people feel like they are trying to find out... Finally, there is the heroine, who is vague and has unknown strength (I originally thought that the half-immortal was talking about the heroine's magic power, but after reading a few chapters, I feel more inclined to the heroine's profession?), Plus at best she is a beauty, at worst she is a nymphomaniac. If the author does not control it well, the heroine may collapse...

Urban supernatural, female channel, ٩(๑`н´๑)۶ Plot flow, CP is optional Recommendation index: 🍗🍗🍗🍗🍗 Plot synopsis: Damn it, the accurate split-mouth cannon is a sick and bad half-immortal Yi Shuangyi × Hardcover yang gas tank seeking death by force, kind-hearted prison guard Li Tian; When a poor half-immortal who is sick and has no conscience meets a prison captain of unknown origin who is comparable to a monster: Li Tian: "One hundred thousand yuan, do you want to arrest him or not?" Yi Shuangyi: "... When will we start working in the Li Brigade? I'll lend you my little brat, and I'll lend you my stinky bitch!" He raised his head and said, "... Half Immortal, can you please stop selling us so quickly..." Gouzi: "Meow! Yi Shuangyi, can you change back to a vertebrate!" Unit text format, keywords: urban supernatural, crime, ghosts and gods, good and evil, reincarnation --Don't see each other in life, don't think about farewell in death. I will hand it over to you in my short life and end my power. --You are in danger, and I did it. I couldn't see who the person I killed was. But I could hear every "goodbye" he said.