Online Game Thorn

Is the machine master who believes in hegemony a machine tyrant?

My author is amazing! ! ! ! After reading Chapter 10, I didn't want to read anymore. There were so many introductions and they were full of nonsense. I didn't even dare to think about how to read the paid chapters! ! ! ! After buying it, take a look and read the next chapter. There is too much nonsense. ? ? ? Hehe

I don't know what you are writing about. I saw ten of them and I really don't want to read them. You are the worst novelist I have ever seen.

I started to describe how important my sister is and more than 500 chapters were not included in the game. And those fourteen pieces of fourth-grade cloth, have you forgotten them? It still talks about the three things that must be done, and the other thing is that as of now, one of the protagonist's thorns is active, and the other thorns are gone. Also, if you can't win in a fight, just say "I can't die" and then break through. Once or twice, luckily it was like this every time. Is it over once the skill is at full level 100? The protagonists are all emperors. He is still a gangster in the real world. What about the happy life you promised? There are more than 500 chapters about female protagonists, not a single one. There is no ambiguity, just writing about subordinates. What do you want to express and wait for them to get together? What about those Tyrant Thorns that are used by ordinary Tyrants to collect so many skill books? , And more. I won't write anymore. I'll just ask you to rate your own work. Can it pass?

What can I say about this book by the author? The plot is the same as that of other online game novels, but the subject matter is really different. There are some touching points, but like other books, there are countless holes left unfilled. It was finished hastily, and most of the interesting pitfalls were ignored and finished directly. The first few hundred chapters are all about the twists and turns. When it comes to the later chapters, we don't need any plot and just go through it. This is embarrassing. The foreshadowing in the first few hundred chapters is not as much as the substantive content in the next one or two chapters. The plot is basically a game, and there is basically nothing in reality. The girlfriend gets it at the first sight, and the master dies in an instant. To be honest, author, I feel that the substantive content of the plot you wrote is not as much as the introduction of weapons and skills. The Lord of the World is really 666. After all the plotting, he made a wedding dress for the protagonist just because he killed the protagonist's master, and then he died with hatred. If he died once and his account was cancelled, did he really no longer need the Soul Locking Bell? (Writing comments and babbling in the middle of the night is really something that only boring people like me can do, right?) Then the whole article was completed in two turns. How sloppy are you, the author? ! The meeting between brother and sister in the game took hundreds of chapters and you ended it in just one chapter. How careless are you? ! Insufficient funds wouldn't make it so sloppy, right? ! Only two of the three major thorn weapons were released. Is this a big pitfall? ! Master Guan Zhong died so happily, author, I want to send you a blade? ! Are the early friends already unable to keep up with the protagonist after only their second turn? ! Brother Dongyue Feng is just gone? ! The protagonist spent hundreds of chapters in the beginning and finally made one and two changes, and in the last few dozen chapters he was completely amazing? ! You, the author, are so full of flaws that I can no longer complain. (To be honest, I have nothing to do and have written more than 500 words, but I am also drunk. Writing a review is like writing an essay. I really have nothing to do.) No more nagging, the 600-word mark has passed.

I don't like Buddhism and Taoism. Chinese people have their own beliefs, foreign things.

There are very few people writing about Chinese culture these days, come on, Rabbit! If you have any recommendation votes, I'll give them to you.

The protagonist's sister hasn't come back yet, forget about Mei xx. Now this baby with a leisurely pace has to be good with the Light Ranger. That dragon girl is basically useless if you haven't come out until now. If you want to dig a hole, just bury it. Don't you have an outline? It's really good to get the coupon today and see the free stuff. It's really not worth it if I spend money on the later stuff.

Finished watching it, it's very good

You can see from the front, but from the back? Pretending to be cool and slapping people in the face, all kinds of verbal abuse, all kinds of pretending to be cold, all kinds of invincible, all kinds of invincible aura started... Then to be honest, I can't write the curse words. The author should be an Internet troll to write it. I admire you!