The Golden Dragon King is in Full Glory, but Fighting 4

It feels like the protagonist has really never seen a woman. Not only does she keep a second-hand Gu Yuena, but she also helps others raise their son. I can only say that she is just a loser if she has power.

Bad review, let me complain, your name is useless, right? Named Tang Yao, the Tang family is very speechless, very speechless. The most speechless thing is that it is named after the Tang family. It feels very obvious. This person wants to replace Tang San, which is rubbish. I hate people named Tang because Tang San wrote such novels. I hate the Tang family very much.

The main reason is that it is disgusting to keep a second-hand product and it is not my own. It is not a question of whether it looks good or not. And since the author wants to keep Gu Yuena and Lan Yuxuan, these two disgusting things, disgusting readers, then just do it for love. Anyway, I guess the ratings for the losers who gain power as soon as they see the protagonist will not be good after writing it😕

Although it doesn't look good, at least it's not completely stone.

If I really want to write about Dou San and change the settings, I will write a few chapters specifically as a foreshadowing explanation. First, I travel to Dou San and change part of the plot. If the male protagonist wants to follow the Gu Yue line and change the plot, he must have the identity of a soul beast. Na'er line does not need it at the beginning. It directly borrows the original work to set up the spiritual imprint that Tang San put on Gu Yuena. The male lead directly takes over from Tang Wulin and accompanies Na'er for three years. Old Tang realizes that something is wrong and does not follow his plan. , Something went wrong in Na'er's step, and he found out that it was the protagonist, and then wiped it out for the protagonist (but there was no real death and resurrection after ten thousand years), and then used the spiritual brand to forcibly change Na'er's perception. Tang San was fully capable, and could easily do such a thing, and then continue with the bet and so on. Just a patch. Gu Yue and Na'er didn't have that close relationship with Tang Wulin because of the mental imprint, so those things didn't happen. Instead, memory fragments flashed over time. (You can raise Gu Yue's IQ.) I found something wrong. I also changed the Fantasy Dragon Knight. That thing is really disgusting. Just mention a few specific words. These are just foreshadowing. Just write an outline of the plot direction for the three parts of the fight, and then follow up. The general direction is the same as the original work. When Gu Yuena loses her memory in Dou Si, she can keep it and meet the protagonist. Then she can start to draw the main plot to gain favor, and then recover her memory later. Try to move the timeline of recovering memory a little earlier. About 1/3 of the plot is too slow and easy to be scolded. In addition, after losing her memory, she has been with the protagonist since her favorability is enough, and she has Na'er's real memory, so they can be together naturally. The specifics depend on the author. First of all, the Blue Salted Fish is not born. Strictly speaking, it is an artificial person created by the fusion of blood. The blood is the blood of the Silver Dragon King and the blood of the Golden Dragon King has nothing to do with Tang Wulin. Only then did I remember that in this setting, the protagonist is the Golden Dragon King himself. He can completely replace Tang Wulin and make one himself.

The author admires Prime Minister Cao very much, and the protagonist also has the legacy of Wei Wu

In fact, two ancient moons can be made, one is from Dou San, and the other is the original timeline. It can be made into a parallel timeline, but it has to be made into a second-hand one. It feels a bit difficult. I can only say that before writing, it is recommended to think more. Let's give it one star.

The plot is compactly written, especially the action at the end is very good, and the writing is okay.

The plot is not delayed, and the protagonist is not born.

The author should take a look at what other good fans have written, and stop worrying about married women when they are already fighting for the fourth time. Let's settle down and write again. The content of this book is really too poisonous.