
Elf: Opening Gym Battle
About This Novel
Traveling to the world of dreams, with the goal of being the strongest in the world, starting from the gym leader in the dark city. Note: Although this book begins with the Gym Leader, it will not go into too much detail about the gym plot (the World Gym Competition does not count), but will serve as a springboard (so those who are entangled with the attributes of the gym do not need to) wait until Yuryudu becomes the champion of the Kanto region, then becomes the Four Heavenly Kings of the Kanto region, and then defeats Yuryuto to become the champion of the Kanto region... This is such a process, I hope everyone will like it. (Pokémon, Pokemon, Trainer, Pokémon, Elf World...)
What Readers Think
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Official(29)Scraped 23d ago
come on
Come on! You must write well. I like this book very much.
It's okay. Some places are a bit stiff and have the flavor of vernacular writing.
There is quite a lot of room for improvement. If I get a perfect score of about four out of ten, then I won't give it a low rating. Four stars is about right, so you can say it's an encouragement.
My review of this book
This book is very exciting. It tells the story of a young man's journey to becoming a concern at first, and then improving his strength and reaching the literary level. Moreover, the system does not appear much. This is a very good feature. I really like to read it.
Elf: Opening Gym Battle
Is there a dark city in the Kanto region? I only watched the anime (so long ago that I have almost forgotten the plot).
It's pretty good in the Pokémon literature.
The author of the previous chapters can take a look,
As an author, did you forget something? (๑•̌.•̑๑)ˀ̣ˀ̣, you lost your novice gift pack, and the rewards for building the gym in the main quest were gone (꒪Д꒪)ノ, I saw that the author didn't even remember Chapter 9🌚🌚🌚
The elf battle is too bluntly written
It's really not good, the battle between elves is like playing a game
Come on, come on, come on, the author is great
Come on, come on, come on, come on, the author is great
Water water water water water water water water water
Rating
Community(0)
Official(29)Scraped 23d ago
come on
Come on! You must write well. I like this book very much.
It's okay. Some places are a bit stiff and have the flavor of vernacular writing.
There is quite a lot of room for improvement. If I get a perfect score of about four out of ten, then I won't give it a low rating. Four stars is about right, so you can say it's an encouragement.
My review of this book
This book is very exciting. It tells the story of a young man's journey to becoming a concern at first, and then improving his strength and reaching the literary level. Moreover, the system does not appear much. This is a very good feature. I really like to read it.
Elf: Opening Gym Battle
Is there a dark city in the Kanto region? I only watched the anime (so long ago that I have almost forgotten the plot).
It's pretty good in the Pokémon literature.
The author of the previous chapters can take a look,
As an author, did you forget something? (๑•̌.•̑๑)ˀ̣ˀ̣, you lost your novice gift pack, and the rewards for building the gym in the main quest were gone (꒪Д꒪)ノ, I saw that the author didn't even remember Chapter 9🌚🌚🌚
The elf battle is too bluntly written
It's really not good, the battle between elves is like playing a game
Come on, come on, come on, the author is great
Come on, come on, come on, come on, the author is great
Water water water water water water water water water









