Quickly Wear: the Male Protagonist Jue Si is Manipulated by a Pregnant Jiaojiao

Quickly Wear: the Male Protagonist Jue Si is Manipulated by a Pregnant Jiaojiao

by Cute Little Koi

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The new book "Evil Girl is Super Flirty, Four Bosses Compete in the Shura Field" Welcome to watch [1v1 quick travel + childbirth + double cleansing + sweet pet + cool article + crazy criticism] Nanzhi bound the childbirth system in order to become a billionaire, and has traveled through various worlds since then. World 1: The tyrant is a bit perverted. He goes crazy at any time at night and wants to kill her? Nanzhi: During the day, I am your little girl. At night, it depends on whether I beat you or not. World 2: The son-in-law she bullied for many years will become a cruel boss in the future? Nanzhi caressed her chubby belly, packed up her luggage and ran away all night. World 3: The lustful master has a sick and petite apprentice who bullies the master and kills his ancestors at the slightest disagreement? Nanzhi shivered: Disciple, before you die for your master, can you hug a few beautiful men? The young apprentice smiled: Is it because the apprentice is not beautiful enough?

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Knife-wielding Little Lolita19mo ago

Vampire Wife Handbook 24

Collide wanted to just ask her to reach out and get it. Who would have thought that she would suddenly ask him to send it in. It didn't matter to him if he thought about it, he promised not to look at her, put his pajamas away and left. Collide quickly found the hook and had just hung up his pajamas. He turned around and was walking to the door when there was a noise behind him. "Ah!" Realizing that she was in danger, he couldn't care less. He caught the girl who was about to slip in a flash. The girl was so frightened that she nestled into his arms, holding his collar tightly with her little hands, "I was scared to death, but luckily I have you." Collide's hand was still holding her waist, and his palm was smooth. The water on her body had not yet dried, and she was wet against him. She was naked, and her body was extremely soft against him, and Kollade's eyes began to turn red again. Just as he was about to leave and force himself to calm down, the girl suddenly raised her head and kissed his lips. She stared at him with very affectionate eyes: "Klade, kiss me like you did last night, okay?" It turns out she still remembers it all. Collide was stunned for a moment and did not move. Her eye sockets suddenly turned red, "I drank last night and was not very sober. I don't remember a lot of it. You didn't take the initiative to mention it this morning. Now you don't kiss me. Are you lying to me again?" As she spoke, tears suddenly appeared in her eyes and rolled down her cheeks. Collide felt his heart tremble. He lowered his eyes and kissed away the tears from the corners of her eyes, then took her lips in his mouth at the bitter taste. If Collide had restrained himself last night. Now, Nanzhi truly felt the horror of vampire passion. As they struggled together, Nanzhi felt that she could no longer breathe. The long and deep kiss caused drool to flow out. This was the first time she had done this. She shyly tried to wipe it off, but was licked from her chin to the corners of her lips by the other party, followed by a heavier and more urgent kiss. Nanzhi once wanted to regain some initiative, put her hands on his shoulders, and moved down. Just as she was about to unbutton his buttons, he completely lost control. He wrapped his coat around her body. Before Nanzhi could react, she felt dizzy. When she opened her eyes again, she was already back in her room. She was pressed into the soft bed. She didn't wash her hair, and the waterproof hood on her head had long been lost. At this moment, her long golden hair was spread under her body, as if rippling slightly. The buttons were unbuttoned one by one, and with the sound of clothes falling to the floor, the young man's hoarse voice sounded close to his ears. "No regrets." Nanzhi's eyes were wet, as if they were puddles of water. She replied to him extremely firmly: "Never." Collide's eyes seemed a little redder after receiving the promise. He took her lips and kissed her softly without stopping. Not sure if her warmth was transmitted to him, Nanzhi felt that his hand seemed to be getting hotter and hotter. Soon, Nanzhi fell into a daze, immersed in his sudden warmth, and lost the ability to think. "Don't be afraid." His voice sounded between her lips and teeth. Nanzhi realized something, her breathing became rapid in an instant, her brows furrowed severely, and her voice changed. My wife is too tough... Nanzhi felt like he was going to be broken. She took deep breaths several times, but the strange feeling still didn't change. Collide didn't seem to expect this to happen, and he felt uncomfortable. He looked down at her and looked very uncomfortable. Just as he was about to leave, she scratched his chest. "Yes, it must be possible..." How could you give up halfway? She calmed down again, but found that it still didn't work, so she could only sob: "Kiss me again." Collide kissed her lips again. In a short period of time, he had found a place that she liked. He followed it down, with extreme patience. Before long, the two seemed to find a point of agreement, and things became much smoother. The soundproofing of the room was excellent, but Nanzhi was still afraid. Because Kolled is really stronger than she imagined. At first, he took into account her discomfort and used gentle force, no different from ordinary people. But later, after she adapted, he seemed to be a different person. The bed board, which was of excellent quality, had begun to make a protesting sound, and would collapse sooner or later if it continued like this. When Nanzhi couldn't bear it anymore, she just pulled the bed curtain. The next moment, she tore off the curtain. The curtains were piled on them, and Nanzhi gradually lost any ability to resist. It was as if every nerve ending in her was held in his hand, and even her curled up toes were glowing pink. White lights flashed in her mind, her eyes were blurred, and she didn't react for a long time. But this night has just begun... Downstairs, Alya, who was almost asleep, suddenly sat up. "Xino, listen, is there any movement?" Xino, who had temporarily forgotten the gossip after spending two hours, listened carefully and said, "It seems to be coming from upstairs." Aaliya became anxious all of a sudden, "Could it be that Cynthia had a conflict with the adults again?" She lifted the quilt and got out of bed, "No, we have to go take a look." Xino followed suit and lifted the quilt, but just halfway through, she remembered those gossips again, and when she realized something, she suddenly called out to Aaliya. "Don't go." Xino said, "If anything happens, both adults and Cynthia will tell us." "That's right." Arya said, "If you interrupt me rashly, you will make me angry." Arya came back. Xino listened to the sounds coming from upstairs, and the more she listened, the more she felt something was wrong. She began to think wildly again. Although Aaliyah was also thinking wildly, the two of them were not thinking about the same channel at all. Later, Arya couldn't stand the sleepiness and gradually fell asleep. Only Xino was tortured to the point of collapse by the gossip. Later, when she was about to fall asleep, a dull sound suddenly came from upstairs. She was so frightened that she sat up. When she listened carefully again, the sound was gone. Later, there was no more sound. No one came down to call them. Xino fell asleep in a daze. Until the next morning, when she got up and went out to prepare breakfast, she suddenly saw Collide coming down from upstairs. She thought of the gossip again, and was afraid to let Colade look into her eyes. She was so frightened that she immediately lowered her head and started to salute. "Hello, sir." Collide's temper seemed to be a bit gentler than before. He said calmly: "It's enough to make breakfast for the two of you." Xino raised her head: "Ah, won't Cynthia get up to eat?" She never likes to sleep in. Collide didn't answer her, he just picked up the wine glass filled with plasma and tasted it with great temperament. Xino forgot about the gossip for the moment and didn't think too much. Just as he was about to walk into the kitchen, he heard Kelai say: "The bed in Cynthia's room is broken. Go and ask them to buy a sturdier one."

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Knife-wielding Little Lolita23mo ago

The Queen's Four Little Husbands 40

"Why a good concubine?" He doesn't want to be second. I don't want to be a concubine either. "Want to be a royal husband?" Suyu was noncommittal. "Then please behave well, sir." Nanzhi had no intention of letting go. In her heart, he was not the most special. This answer made Suyu unhappy. He lowered his head and kissed her, then pushed her against the window sill as if to vent his anger. Just when he was about to pull off her clothes, his stomach suddenly turned, and he couldn't help but go to the side and retched. Nanzhi knew that his pregnancy had finally come. Nanzhi asked someone to pass on the imperial doctor. A child born by a shark is five months longer than a human. Suyu's situation is special. She is now six months pregnant, but the imperial doctor can only diagnose her pulse for two months. "Congratulations, Your Majesty, the good concubine is more than two months pregnant." Nanzhi was overjoyed: "Reward!" Everyone in Liangfei's palace rewarded her. Everyone is happy. Only Suyu caressed his belly, but still didn't come back to his senses. How could he be pregnant? Although it is strange, everything seems to be traceable. The thunder that killed the fifth princess was not caused by him. His magic power is slowly weakening. On the day of delivery, the mana will be completely gone. He will become a real human being. From the supreme king of the sea with boundless power to a helpless human being, are you scared? Suyu looked at the happy Nanzhi and gently caressed the child in his belly. It's strange, his mentality seems to have changed. Not only did I not feel panic, I even felt a little happy and expectant. Sheng's mother went to tell Sheng Yan immediately about the news of Suyu's pregnancy. "You already have a good concubine and a good concubine, why is your belly so unsatisfactory?" Seeing Sheng's mother's reproachful eyes, Sheng Yan felt uncomfortable. He stroked his unresponsive belly, feeling a little discouraged. He and Nanzhi have been together the longest, but why haven't they gotten pregnant yet? "I'll prescribe you some fertility drugs, three times a day." Sheng's mother wrote a prescription for the medicine and ordered the palace servants to prepare it. When she left, she couldn't help but warn: "Although you are the first of the four concubines, the position of the emperor's husband is still vacant. You should quickly think of a way to let the queen pamper you. When the time comes, the position of the emperor's husband..." "Mother!" Sheng Yan's voice became louder in vain. He didn't like that Sheng's mother always forced him to fight for power. Nanzhi doesn't like him like this either. "Go back quickly and don't come here again." This was the first time that Sheng Yan was angry with himself since he became the virtuous concubine. Just as Sheng's mother was about to teach him a few words, a voice came from outside. "Her Majesty the Queen has arrived!" Sheng's mother had no choice but to quickly calm down her expression and salute Nanzhi who walked in with a flattering look. But Nanzhi didn't even look at her and walked straight towards Sheng Yan. Although Sheng's mother felt a little uncomfortable, she felt relieved to see that Nanzhi's attitude towards Sheng Yan was still as good as ever. Now Concubine Liang and Concubine De are pregnant and cannot sleep with them. As long as Sheng Yan drinks medicine every day and works hard to win favor, she will definitely get pregnant. It would be nice to have a daughter then. You can also fight for inheritance rights. Thinking like this, Sheng's mother suddenly heard Nanzhi's scolding voice: "Mr. Sheng, why don't you go back?" Seeing Nanzhi's cold eyes, Sheng's mother was frightened and quickly left. After Sheng's mother left, Sheng Yan apologized to Nazhi apologetically. "Sorry, I won't let her come next time." He was afraid that Nanzhi would misunderstand something, so Nanzhi found it funny how he was anxious to defend. "She is her, you are you, I still have the ability to distinguish." Nanzhi pulled him to sit down, not doubting him at all, "Ayan, I know who you are, and I promise you that I will never doubt you." Sheng Yan silently leaned on her shoulder, his eyes red, "My wife." [Ding, Sheng Yan's favorability value is 99%. Nanzhi kissed his forehead, "As for the child, don't worry, we will have it soon. When the child is born, you can name the child yourself." Sheng Yan's eyes lit up. [Ding, Sheng Yan's favorability value is 100%. ... "The wife." As soon as Nanzhi returned to the dormitory, he was hugged from behind. Nie Jue imitated Sheng Yan's voice and asked gently, "What about me, will you doubt me?" It's as childish as ever. Nanzhi was in a good mood and patted his hand, "Of course not." Nie Jue was happy. He leaned in her ear and said happily: "Then the wife will also give me a child?" Before Nanzhi could agree, he was picked up in the air and walked towards the bed step by step. Everyone in the harem thought that Nanzhi would not go to Shufei Palace and that Nie Jue was not favored. Not at all. This guy obviously stayed in her dormitory every night and slept on the same bed with her. The candles in the room were clearly extinguished, and the shadows on the curtains were shaking. Nanzhi found that the four of them had many similarities. For example, in this matter, she could always enjoy herself, even if she was a little unable to do it. Nie Jue didn't want children, he just wanted more companionship and love from Nanzhi. It seems that in this way, I can be more important. Since becoming pregnant, Shaoxi's taste and temperament have changed. One moment he wanted to eat spicy food, and the next moment he wanted to eat sour food. When you can't eat what you want, you will be depressed for a long time. He became worried about gains and losses and always wanted to cling to Nanzhi. His reasons for looking for Nanzhi are different every day. "I had another nightmare last night. After I woke up, I was so scared that I couldn't sleep. Can you stay with me tonight?" "I've been having some pain in my chest recently. Is it relapsed? Can you help me take a look?" "The child kicked me again and said he missed his mother." Nanzhi discovered that he was Gong Dou's best player. That pitiful look made her heartbroken. After all, she had been pregnant before. Although there was help from the system, which could avoid a lot of impact, Nanzhi still knew how hard it was to be pregnant. Therefore, she was particularly considerate of Shaoxi and Suyu and almost obeyed their requests. Of course, certain unreasonable requests are excluded. Suyu: "I want to eat fish." "Okay, I'll let someone do it." "No." Suyu looked arrogant, "I want to eat alive." Nanzhi:...... Pregnant women are the largest. Nanzhi took a deep breath and tried to be gentle and considerate: "You can't eat live things. There are too many live parasites, which are not good for you and the baby." Suyu snorted coldly and ignored her. Nanzhi had no choice but to go up and hug him. "Be good, you can eat it after you give birth." Nanzhi coaxed him for a long time, but someone from De Fei Palace came to see her again. "Your Majesty, it's not good. Concubine De insists on watching Xiao Hei run. Xiao Hei is so tired that he is foaming at the mouth." Xiaohei was the horse that Nanzhi had tamed at that time. When Nanzhi arrived at the horse training ground, Xiao Hei was lying on the ground, breathing hard. Shaoxi frowned, still unhappy. When Xiao Hei saw Nanzhi, his eyes lit up as if he had seen his savior. "Your man is crazy. Please save me quickly. If you keep running, I will see the King of Hell soon." In fact, Xiao Hei only listened to Nanzhi's words, but Shaoxi was her concubine, and now she was pregnant again. She was afraid that she would not run away, which would make her angry. But it didn't know that Shaoxi would be so stubborn. Now he is still pointing at it and complaining with a sigh of relief: "Your Majesty, it bullied me!" This Lao Deng. Xiao Hei almost didn't come up and poked him in the air.

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Knife-wielding Little Lolita27mo ago

Hey guys, a new book is on the shelves today. Can you vote for Little Koi?

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Knife-wielding Little Lolita27mo ago

Hello everyone, the little koi is here again, this time it's about giving birth to cubs. It's just because I think the cubs are cute, and I don't mean to advise you to have cubs. In reality, we can all give birth to babies according to our own ideas. There is no need to force ourselves. I love you and I like to give you good reviews. If you have any aspects you want to see, please leave them in the comments. I will choose them as appropriate. [Emot=default,07/]

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Dreams Come True_ca21mo ago

The author is great

It would be too lonely for the heroine to return to real life after completing all the tasks by herself. Please arrange a great man for her. It's not that no CP is bad. When I watched it, I felt that the heroine was just a tool, an expert in emotionally cold acting. (My personal feeling) I don't want Nanzhi in the author's novel to be a lonely person. I hope she can get a good home. Rather than just being a tool who only cares about giving birth to babies, she is the flesh-and-blood Nazhi described by the author. Don't criticize me. There are 1,000 Harry Potters among 1,000 people. We don't all have the same thoughts. All we can do is find similar people and people with similar thoughts. Also, please come on! ! ! ! Just let them delete the negative reviews. You and they are not on the same page. They will only criticize you from a high point and point fingers at you. Those comments are nothing to look at. Come on! ! Come on! ! It's the best!

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Knife-wielding Little Lolita23mo ago

The Queen's Four Little Husbands 41

Shaoxi always likes to find various reasons to pester Nanzhi, which makes Sheng Yan very dissatisfied. If it weren't for the fact that he couldn't be angry because he had a child in his belly, Sheng Yan would have pissed him off a long time ago. But Sheng Yan, who looks generous on the surface, always droops his eyelids and looks aggrieved every time he sees Nan Zhi. Nanzhi didn't lie. Among the four gods, she did like Sheng Yan the most. She couldn't see him like this, and she wanted to bully him at the first sight. Shaoxi got pregnant behind Suyu, but gave birth before him. Although their body structure is not suitable for giving birth to children, it is not difficult with the blessing of the goddess Yunruo. It's just that the process is still a bit more difficult. Shaoxi was in pain all night. If Nanzhi hadn't mixed the pain-relieving medicine for him to drink, the baby would have been almost dystocia. Because it was the first time to give birth, it took a long time. It took Shaoxi twelve full hours to give birth to the twins. "Congratulations to Her Majesty the Queen and Concubine De, they are two lovely princesses." Even though Nanzhi had told him that the curse had disappeared, Shaoxi was still worried deep in his heart. It wasn't until two girls were born instead of boys that the huge stone in Shaoxi's heart slowly disappeared. "Your Majesty, our daughter is very cute." Shaoxi lay in Nanzhi's arms, his face pale and weak, but his eyes were full of love when he looked at his two daughters. He learned a lot about babies before giving birth. I thought the baby would be wrinkled and ugly when born. No. The two babies were both pink and tender, looking at them with wide eyes. But not long after, they became sleepy, yawned, tilted their heads and fell asleep. Looking at the two cute babies, Nanzhi's eyes were also gentle, "Thank you for your hard work." "Floating on the long river makes me forget to return, thinking about it endlessly makes me admire it more." Shao Xi's eyes fell on Nan Zhi's face, the love in his eyes could no longer be hidden, "Let the children's names be Yun Mian and Yun Mu." What it feels like to like someone. Probably because he traveled thousands of miles to this foreign country and hesitated countless times, but still fell in love with her without hesitation. Because of her, she doesn't want to go back to Beidi, she just wants to stay here and be with her forever. Nanzhi liked these two daughters very much, so he gave them titles as soon as they were one month old. Yunmian was named Princess Changping. Yunmu was named Princess Changle. And because of her meritorious service in childbirth, Shaoxi was promoted from the virtuous concubine to the virtuous concubine, and suddenly became the highest-ranking among the four concubines. Shaoxi was very happy. During the confinement period, Nanzhi tried her best to stay with him to prevent him from suffering from postpartum depression. Because they are men, they cannot have breast milk. The babies drink spring water from the Yunruo River, which contains a lot of nutrients that babies need. Nanzhi also exchanged some potions for strengthening the body and added them to it, hoping that they would grow up healthily. The whole palace was immersed in joy. Even Sheng Yan, who hated Shaoxi the most, would often come to De Fei's palace to see the children. No one would dislike the pink and tender little goose. Suyu looked at the child and stroked his already pregnant belly. He seemed to be looking forward to the birth of the child more and more. It's just that at the full moon banquet of the two little princesses, some uninvited guests came. Since Shaoxi killed the envoy, the envoy in Beidi, who had been waiting to return, lost news about Shaoxi. This time I specially sent someone to Yun Country to see what was going on. Who would have thought that as soon as they arrived in the capital, they would hear that Shaoxi had already been married to Yun Guo, and now he was named a noble concubine because of his meritorious service in childbirth. The envoy did not find out clearly and thought that Shaoxi had given birth to a son. Thinking that the plan was successful, he was so happy that he hurried into the palace to congratulate Nanzhi hypocritically. "Congratulations to Her Majesty the Queen on the birth of a prince. I wish your Majesty the Yun Kingdom prosperity and prosperity for generations to come." "You are interested, but there is one thing you said wrong." Nan Zhiyun drank wine lightly, "I am not a prince, but a princess." The Beidi envoy was stunned: "..." No, how could it be a princess? But soon the envoy was slapped in the face by the truth and became dizzy. All the ministers who came to congratulate him congratulated Nazhi. Not a single word was mentioned about the prince in their mouths, they were all princesses. The envoys' eyes darkened, and he hurriedly found a reason to visit Shaoxi. Shaoxi was not as haggard as expected except for being a little weaker. "Ninth Prince, what's going on?" As soon as the envoy entered, there were voices of questioning. Seeing his anxious look, Shao Xi was in a good mood and he didn't mind provoking him again. "The one who is king now must be Myna." The prince of the Beidi royal family could not live to be twenty. The eighth prince is only a few days older than Shaoxi and will soon be twenty. "Go back and tell Ba Ge and the other royal brothers that the plan failed." "... Ninth Prince, what do you mean?" Shaoxi's mouth slowly opened into a gloating smile: "It means... Beidi is hopeless." Although he was from Beidi, Beidi had never been kind to him. It's just that the royal family was destroyed and replaced by others. History changes, this is very common. He is not so righteous, and he is even less likely to be willing to go to hell to help those who hurt him. Two more months later, it was finally time for Suyu to give birth. Because they were triplets, giving birth to Suyu was more difficult than Shaoxi. Nanzhi also gave him medicine to relieve pain. But to be reasonable, she didn't eliminate all his pain. After fifteen hours, Suyu gave birth to triplets, two daughters and one boy. It's just that it's different from the children Shaoxi gave birth to. The three children were wrinkled and looked ugly. The fatherly love that emerged in Suyu almost died. Seeing his unhappy look, Nanzhi wanted to laugh. She brought the ugliest baby boy over and said, "Don't you think he still looks cute?" "... Cute." "Then give me a hug." Suyu frowned and refused: "Keep it far away." Nanzhi thought that he might be the first person to think his child was ugly. She held the baby carefully and coaxed: "The baby is not ugly, he will become very beautiful in two days." Shaoxi initially laughed at Suyu's child for being ugly, but soon he stopped laughing. Suyu is the most beautiful mermaid. Even though he is slowly turning into a human now, his genes will not change. Sure enough, not long after, the skin of the three babies stretched out day by day, becoming white and fat, with big eyes rolling around, and they were extremely cute. Both daughters have turquoise curly hair, but the son's eyes have different pupils, one blue and one black. He is naturally stern and looks like a noble white cat. If it were in the past, if you saw different colors and eyes, you would definitely be regarded as a monster. But now, Nanzhi has banned the hunting of sharks and allowed intermarriage between sharks and humans. The identity of the sharks in Suyu has also been announced, so no one dares to say that the princess and prince are monsters. It even gave many sharks hope of giving birth to human children.

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一束山雾19mo ago

It seems that it has gone from being a sweet story about giving birth and pampering, to sometimes being weird and strange. It is neither very sweet nor very satisfying when I read it, and I feel a little indescribable. I have read the world of Flower of the High Mountain for the time being. I thought it was a sweet e-sports online dating, and I thought it was a sweet entertainment industry, but it ended up being interspersed with everything. I felt even more uncomfortable when I stepped in, and because it said 1v1 was not a fixed CP, I felt that after so many worlds, how could I change my heart for sincerity? As a result, basically every male protagonist said that he could not see a trace of love in the eyes of the female protagonist. I didn't know whether he was reading a sweet pet novel or watching someone pretending to be affectionate towards another person. When I read a sweet pet novel, I just want that sweet and unconscious aunt's smile. But the further you get to the later worlds, the less this feeling becomes. The later worlds feel like they have to add more plot settings to make the two of them have more twists and turns. The main twists and turns are not unforgettable, nor do they feel that the storyline is fuller and pave the way for the plot. The enthusiasm for reading has dropped a lot, but overall it is still very good.

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月亮在唱歌26mo ago

A quick travel novel worth reading

It's really good to watch and worth recommending. I've finished reading the first two planes and the author hasn't finished updating the third plane yet, so I plan to wait until the end of the third plane before reading it again. Please give me a lot of encouragement from the author to update it.

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Who Forced My Online Name Again!5mo ago

If you like the female protagonist, watch it. If you like two strong characters, take a detour first.

I saw the Queen's four little husbands. But the female protagonist in this plane looks weird. If you change the genders of the four male protagonists and the female protagonist, wouldn't this be a proper male harem story? What's the difference between this and the big pig's hooves who only care about themselves? Even if the male protagonist is more extreme, the methods used by the female protagonist are also extreme. It would be okay if it was the kind of female protagonist, but for someone like me who likes two strong characters, the more I watch it, the more awkward it becomes. If two people like each other, don't they achieve mutual success? Why is this torturing the other person? In order to make the other party surrender, use this method, holy shit. It's like that kind of cool harem story where the male protagonist meets a stronger female protagonist, and then wants the female protagonist to surrender, so he finds another female protagonist and kisses another girl in front of the female protagonist (?) And then forces the female protagonist to make a choice to become a member of his harem. [Emot=default,54/] Let me ask you, if you want to make the heroine attractive, it shouldn't be like this. If the stronger party is willing to become a member of the harem, it is okay, because he is really charming, but if you do it the other way around, it will directly change the taste. The characters are not well developed and cannot be described in detail. For example, when the male protagonist encountered difficulties, the system there did not receive it. By the time it was known, the male protagonist had already begun to suffer (?) The co-author had to wait until the other person had suffered enough before going over. Is this an afterthought? There are others, I won't go into details. I thought the writing was no good at first, but I could still read it because it was just a boring way to pass the time. The further you read, the more awkward it becomes. For old bookworms, as long as the subject matter you write is more novel and not awkward. But, the subject matter is novel, but not that novel at all. My family, I will run away first. Keep up the good work, author, there is still room for improvement.

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Knife-wielding Little Lolita21mo ago

The general regretted 31

She had obviously turned into a puddle of water long ago, but Mu Yao still had difficulty walking. Most delicious food requires some effort. Now, if he wanted to eat her, he would have to use all his skills. It wasn't until she couldn't help but kiss him, hug him, and wrap her legs around him that Mu Yao pinched her waist... The unfamiliar yet familiar sense of aggression made Nanzhi frown in pain. There is still such a mismatch between the two. Mu Yao was afraid of her pain and wanted to stop, but she, who was always weak, hugged his shoulders. She bit his right shoulder, which still had the teeth marks left by her previous bite. Only this time, she was awake and unwilling to exert force. She scratched his scarred back and murmured something on her lips. Mu Yao had amazing eyesight and could see her lips clearly. She was calling him "husband." At that moment, Mu Yao suddenly lost his mind and grabbed her leg desperately... Nanzhi's fingertips tightened, and her body trembled pitifully. This fragile look further aroused the man's agitation. Mu Yao lowered his head and kissed her, crushing her voice into the long night. In the past twenty-three years, Mu Yao had not had this desire. But he has no interest in women in this world, and the zao-heat in his body has been weighing him down all year round. He has tried to relieve it on his own, but it is only a drop in the bucket and extremely difficult to relieve. Many times, he was so uncomfortable that he felt like exploding, so he could only fight on the battlefield to divert his attention. Now, he finally met his antidote. The ultimate forbearance brings the ultimate desire and madness. That night, he didn't know how many times he caught her. She didn't dare to cry at first, but it wasn't until he said she was allowed to cry on this matter that she dared to whimper in protest. But Mu Yao knew that she was not really upset. In just a few times, they had become more and more compatible with each other, and she couldn't bear to see him leave. Later, when he saw that she was really tired, he was able to let her go. Nanzhi was so tired that when she fell asleep, she felt that Mu Yao was simply cleaning her body. After everything was done, Mu Yao hugged her and fell asleep. He hadn't had a good night's sleep in several days, and now holding his lost lover in his arms, Mu Yao finally fell asleep peacefully. When he regained consciousness the next day, he felt a hand touching his face. The familiar touch made him relax his guard. Mu Yao, who hadn't realized that he had been exposed, grabbed the soft little hand, turned over, and subconsciously put his arm around the girl's waist. "Be good, sleep a little longer." Nanzhi didn't move him anymore, just lay in his arms and stared at him. Mu Yao, who had shaved his beard, was extremely masculine, with thick sword eyebrows, narrow eyes, a high nose bridge, lips that were neither thick nor thin, with a hint of crimson color, and sharp cheek curves, which were perfect. On his wheat-colored skin, there were still scratches left by Nanzhi last night. Together with those messy scars, he looked wild. Nanzhi had to admit that Mu Yao was very charming and she was very satisfied. It's a pity that I can't take it back. It wasn't until Mu Yao suddenly remembered that he had shaved his beard that he was too ugly for Nanzhi to see, and he realized that before going to bed, he had untied the belt around Nanzhi's eyes, that he suddenly woke up. He sat up and saw Nanzhi staring at him unblinkingly, and he just felt miserable. He is not the kind of person who cares about appearance, but because of her, he doesn't want her to see his ugly side. Now that he has seen it all, he can't stop it. He can only sigh and say: "Isn't it ugly?" Nanzhi nodded. Really ugly. Mu Yao felt uncomfortable, but on the surface he seemed indifferent, "It's okay. When the beard grows out, it won't be ugly anymore." Speaking so indifferently, those eyes had already revealed all his emotions. The general who killed many people on the battlefield was actually afraid that he would not look good. Nanzhi found it funny and took his hand to write, "The general is not ugly at all." Mu Yao's brows twitched: "Then you nodded just now?" [The general is so handsome. I was stunned and didn't react. The corner of Mu Yao's mouth curled up: "Is this really true?" Nanzhi nodded solemnly. Mu Yao happily pushed her into his arms. Nanzhi pressed her face against his soft chest muscles and heard him say forcefully: "In the future, you are not allowed to call me general, but husband." 003, Who looked at them disgustedly, couldn't help but said: [Zhizhi, your points can already be exchanged for speaking potions. "Don't you think it's weird to say it all of a sudden?" [But don't you feel uncomfortable like this? Nanzhi smiled, but there was no warmth in his eyes, "I'll get used to it gradually." A lot of things can be gotten used to. Get used to disappointment and stop having expectations. Once you get used to being alone, you no longer fantasize about having someone to accompany you and care about you. However, what if we get used to this world and their warm embrace? Really, I worked overtime and became more enthusiastic. This task is too much. If she were allowed to rest in one plane for a month, she would have gone to RT-Mart to kill fish and become a cold and heartless human. When Nanzhi called her husband through lip language, he was caught by Mu Yao and kissed her hard for a long time. Nanzhi could understand, after all, men who experienced these things for the first time would never be satisfied. It's just that her old waist really can't bear it. And it still hurts there, and it hurts whenever I move. Mu Yao also knew that he had indeed gone too far last night. He found a doctor to check Nanzhi's pulse. Fortunately, Nanzhi was only weak and not injured. When the doctor left, Mu Yao still looked at him and said something to him. When he came back again, he already had a bottle of ointment in his hand. "Take off your clothes and I'll give you some medicine." He said shameful words with an expressionless face. Nanzhi blushed as red as an apple. [Husband, I will do it myself. "You can't see it, so I'll do it." When Mu Yao said this, he was serious and didn't think much about it at all. Nanzhi looked at him with a determined attitude and couldn't stop him. But when she noticed the cool ointment being applied along his rough fingers, she was still a little nervous and shrank in discomfort. "Don't move." Mu Yao grabbed her and applied it carefully. Even though the two of them had done more shameful things than this, this was the first time in so many worlds that they were stared at like this. Nanzhi was really shy. She raised her hand to push him away, but his eyes were distracted and she lost her strength. In fact, Mu Yao didn't feel well either. In his eyes, she was perfect in every way, and every part of her was the ultimate temptation for him. God knows how difficult it is for him to endure giving her medicine like this. But last night was too much for Lao Lei, and it was no longer suitable for her to come again. He suppressed the impulse in his body, applied medicine to her, and put her clothes on, and then the restless tremor subsided.

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