Shenhao: Concentration Can Bring Benefits

It's a pity that it's not a single female protagonist. Maybe I'm too old and don't have any feelings for multiple women. It's a pity that this is an interesting new book. I look forward to the author's single female protagonist book.

There are too many daily writings and too dense, not enough plot advancement, not enough excitement, and it feels a bit like a running story. I skipped reading it. The two heroines are clearly described in detail, but I feel disconnected from the characters. The first few dozen pictures I saw were great, but when the heroine came out, the more I watched, the less interested I was. I thought about it carefully, you This is a mistake in the plot, the priorities are a bit reversed. It's not that it's wrong to spend a lot of time describing the heroine, but the way you spend a lot of time describing the clothes is outrageous. It's too watery. It doesn't advance the plot and has no excitement. It's not a warm and sweet daily article. I don't know what you are writing. The long description of the clothes is too dramatic and makes people feel separated.

The beginning is okay, but the further you look at it, the less immersive it becomes. Maybe the protagonist is written too perfectly, and the starting point is too high. It is no longer allowed to have such a low character description of the protagonist, even if it is an accident that causes the protagonist to be in two different situations. The pure scumbag route currently described is completely inconsistent with the protagonist's origin and behavior style. There is no way to continue watching for now

It's not as brainless as traditional novels. The male protagonist makes great progress every day and can write well.

Just so-so, the pace is too slow and unrealistic

It's okay, the pace is too slow and I'm only a sophomore in high school. The protagonist advises against having an affair in high school. He grew up during the college entrance examination holiday and became a male god. After that, he drove to college and started a life of luxury. The male protagonist's parents are a point. If I can't write it well, I'll just hide it if I suggest how to deal with it. Once it's written, it's another cool point. However, in terms of handling, it is best for the male protagonist to have the same household registration as his grandmother, otherwise according to the law, he must support his parents no matter what. This law is a poisonous point. If you don't support me, I will support you until you grow old.

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It's too plain, like an assembly line

I feel like it doesn't quite fit the character of the male protagonist. I've already charged up my book coins, but I can't watch it anymore.

It's really good, it's pretty good-looking, but it's just a little lacking and not enough to look at.