After Rebirth, She Conquered the World

When I saw the early articles, I thought there were less characters. However, later on when the heroine appeared in the love letter variety show... I can say without exaggeration that there were too many characters. It felt like it was repeating over and over again... Also, isn't the heroine very strong? Why can't you fight those weaklings? Let it be hacked, the heroine has incredible powers... Why not cover it up and let everyone know that he has powerful elixirs... Author, every disease you have is terminal gastric cancer and other terminal diseases that cannot be cured. The heroine was cured in a minute... There is no airtight wall in the world... A big tree attracts the wind... The content is really exaggerated... It can easily cause discomfort to readers, including me, who was very optimistic about this novel before. (Personally, don't spray it)

1. The plot at the beginning is a bit awkward and not clearly described (for example, when you just restarted... Shouldn't it be very confusing? I personally think that the heroine will not think it is similar to a fantasy?... For example, you were in a good modern world, and suddenly you were dizzy and opened your eyes again, and you were in a cartoon world... Wouldn't you think it was a dream) 2. The article has good ideas and is eye-catching. (The heroine traveled to the world of cultivation in her previous life and then back again. The topic is very attractive.) 3. Too exaggerated [Terminal cancer... Saved by a pill] I want to say here that it is easy to be criticized. He is a businessman and gives 10 million casually. I can understand this, but wouldn't he suspect that there is a big force behind the heroine and bribed all the hospitals in this city...? There is also the heroine who traveled to the world of cultivation and casually told her mother. The heroine's mother had no suspicion and believed it very much... The author is great... This is the age of technology. 3. Pay attention to language communication 4. There is less hydrology, but the language and description of actions still need to be learned like those big names. Finally!!! Remember to revise the article, especially the beginning... This must be good. If the description is unclear or too exaggerated, it will easily lose readers regardless of the actual situation. I still like this type. I will change it later and get some copywriting. I think it is very good. I hope this book becomes popular!

Seeing how the heroine feels now, she is very stupid and anyone can step on her. I don't see the great use of being reborn. Also, doesn't anyone doubt that those medicines are against the heavens? People's hearts should also be very complicated. It's impossible to say that there are people who don't know about such a good medicine and don't want to take it for themselves.

Everyone asked, should Wang Keying's disease be cured?

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I... The rhythm is very chaotic. Sometimes it is slow where it should be fast, and it is skipped where it should be 🤐. Also, I doubt how the heroine survives in the Immortal Continent. Just tell her mother that she is reborn. She thinks her mother can be trusted, but her mother You actually believe it, just like one day your relatives told you ""I am reborn"", who would believe it, isn't this a fool? Moreover, the heroine directly sells medicine on the street, and also tells others that it can cure all diseases and cancer, and the noise she makes seems like I'm afraid that if others don't know, and the experiment is successful in the end, they won't be arrested. Don't every hospital have patient data? Wouldn't the doctor be suspicious and report it? The male protagonist's illness suddenly recovered, but the heroine didn't say that she wanted to struggle during the process? The heroine didn't think about the hero's identity before giving him the medicine, and she knew the hero's identity when she saw the villa.

The content of the book is too exaggerated, the writing is not clear, the heroine's personal plot progresses too quickly, and the other protagonists do not show their characteristics.

How much money do you give people to give you good reviews? The article is bad, written in a mess, and it gives me a headache to read it. . . . . .

I really don't understand the heroine, why does she live like a weirdo when she is clearly capable? Space is useless and cultivation is not mentioned? It was cool at the beginning, but then it became a weak chicken phenomenon... It was nothing like what I had experienced in Rebirth III, it was like a real college student, a bit fake. The image of the heroine is getting weaker and weaker. Are you not familiar with Hua Yanshen? It seems that you are not familiar with Anhang, right? Still playing a small role? Speechless, are you going to let the heroine counterattack next to the heroine to form an inspirational story?

It's fast-paced and mindless, and the heroine doesn't look very smart. The pills are given to you as soon as you ask, and they fly as soon as you ask. It's super speechless.