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Official(207)Scraped 16d ago
Even though I like fantasy novels, this author depicts a virtual space word for word, which shows that the author is very rich in emotions, which I admire very much. I hope all readers will support me.
Suddenly very touched
Author, you let Xiao Lizi and Youyou be together like this...
Very good, not bad
Is there really no villain in this novel?
From the first word to the last word, I didn't see a villain. There are mysterious people, but no bad guys; there are magical things, but no intrigues. Are the direct disciples of Qianmen Sect worse off than the handyman disciples? Isn't this bad... I always feel that the author's three views are not generally righteous, and the world of immortality is actually quite harmonious and beautiful, at least for now.
What interesting tasks will the heroine receive? Looking forward to the author's updates (=^ェ^=)
The work needs to be renamed
I want to change "You Yue Lian: You Yue Lian: I don't know who I want to ask for, but who I want to ask for" to "Yu Yue Lian: I don't know who I want to ask for, but who I want to ask for", and turn it into a "Yu Yue Lian" series. There will be a second part after this one is finished.
I think
Mu Xi's feelings for Li Yueming and Hu Youyou are different. He regards Hu Youyou as his sister, and Li Yueming as his neighbor's brother. Generally speaking, Mu Xi values Hu Youyou more.
The story of the Chaos Spirit Beast is very well written!
However, why do I feel that I am suspected of making up the numbers? ?
Isn't it said that Zi Tong is the last high-level monster in the world? Why is there still a father?
It's time to revise again
In order to make the story more complete and the logic clearer, I will modify some of the previous details. The changes are not major, so those who have already seen the latter do not need to look back. Attached is a picture. I think this picture is more similar to Li Yueming's image. A little more delicate is his usual appearance, and a little more evil is his real appearance.
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Community(0)
Official(207)Scraped 16d ago
Even though I like fantasy novels, this author depicts a virtual space word for word, which shows that the author is very rich in emotions, which I admire very much. I hope all readers will support me.
Suddenly very touched
Author, you let Xiao Lizi and Youyou be together like this...
Very good, not bad
Is there really no villain in this novel?
From the first word to the last word, I didn't see a villain. There are mysterious people, but no bad guys; there are magical things, but no intrigues. Are the direct disciples of Qianmen Sect worse off than the handyman disciples? Isn't this bad... I always feel that the author's three views are not generally righteous, and the world of immortality is actually quite harmonious and beautiful, at least for now.
What interesting tasks will the heroine receive? Looking forward to the author's updates (=^ェ^=)
The work needs to be renamed
I want to change "You Yue Lian: You Yue Lian: I don't know who I want to ask for, but who I want to ask for" to "Yu Yue Lian: I don't know who I want to ask for, but who I want to ask for", and turn it into a "Yu Yue Lian" series. There will be a second part after this one is finished.
I think
Mu Xi's feelings for Li Yueming and Hu Youyou are different. He regards Hu Youyou as his sister, and Li Yueming as his neighbor's brother. Generally speaking, Mu Xi values Hu Youyou more.
The story of the Chaos Spirit Beast is very well written!
However, why do I feel that I am suspected of making up the numbers? ?
Isn't it said that Zi Tong is the last high-level monster in the world? Why is there still a father?
It's time to revise again
In order to make the story more complete and the logic clearer, I will modify some of the previous details. The changes are not major, so those who have already seen the latter do not need to look back. Attached is a picture. I think this picture is more similar to Li Yueming's image. A little more delicate is his usual appearance, and a little more evil is his real appearance.

