
After Sharing the Dream, the Dignitaries Were Laughed at by Passers-by
About This Novel
After a rebirth, Su Wanwan became a passerby in the group favorite, becoming a 300-pound, lazy and lazy fake daughter of a wealthy family. The plot of this article is too bloody. They are all under the skirt of the heroine. She is just a background, a tool to promote emotions, but she is innocently forced to jump into the sea... Su Wanwan was so miserable that she decided to lose weight and take revenge. During the day, she is a fat woman that everyone hates, but at night she dreams of different marriage partners. Leng Ao's boss grabbed her hand and touched the scar: Feeling distressed? Carve your name. The unruly actor intertwined his fingers with hers and locked them beside her: Do you want to find other men? Baby. The crazy doctor put his arm around her waist and squeezed her hard: Is it bad to be a wife? Your face seems to be red... A Buddhist in Beijing returned to secular life one night and played with Buddhist beads: Like it? Which one do you like... The chief perfumer caressed her hair, charming: Sister smells so good, I like Sister the most. ... The five marriage partners are cold during the day and beg her for mercy at night. Su Wanwan counterattacked and became a goddess, broke off the engagement and left. As a result, five men who disliked her went crazy and arrested her! Su Wanwan didn't understand, what went wrong? Why is it all OOC!
What Readers Think
Rating
Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 2d ago
It's really good. I recommend everyone to watch it.
After looking at the settings, it's okay, but the name Liu Ruyan is really easy to create a scene. You can call it Liu Ru or Liu Yan. These three words together are very strange. Also, regarding the male protagonist, the plot of the male protagonist should be lengthened, and should not be revealed all at once. This way the story will be tighter, but the general content cannot be seen. The chapters in the middle jump too fast, less than 5 pictures, and about three days have passed. Write more carefully and try to intersperse some content in it. The order of the appearance of the male protagonist is best to have a profile description. Well, the most important thing is that running at 300 pounds is probably not possible. Walking is okay, but I have to say that compared to the previous book, the description of this book has improved a lot.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 2d ago
It's really good. I recommend everyone to watch it.
After looking at the settings, it's okay, but the name Liu Ruyan is really easy to create a scene. You can call it Liu Ru or Liu Yan. These three words together are very strange. Also, regarding the male protagonist, the plot of the male protagonist should be lengthened, and should not be revealed all at once. This way the story will be tighter, but the general content cannot be seen. The chapters in the middle jump too fast, less than 5 pictures, and about three days have passed. Write more carefully and try to intersperse some content in it. The order of the appearance of the male protagonist is best to have a profile description. Well, the most important thing is that running at 300 pounds is probably not possible. Walking is okay, but I have to say that compared to the previous book, the description of this book has improved a lot.









