At the Beginning, He Mistakenly Regarded Li Shimin as His Eldest Cousin

The writing is comfortable and the plot is routine, but I just stick to routines. Only routines can win people's hearts. Don't be influenced by others. The writing is actually good and I feel it's okay. I hope you stick to it and work hard.

It's brainless and illogical. First of all, it can't be disguised at all. The spiritual temperament, clothing, and appearance of a wealthy family are completely different from ordinary people. And Cheng Yaojin's figure can tell whether he is good at joining the army or not at a glance. Secondly, didn't you say you want to develop in an obscene way? Then why are you so big-hearted? A cheap cousin whom you have never met directly gives him the method of making money. Don't you know how to investigate and test it? What if he is a spy for the noble family? Third, don't add random modern jokes to ancient texts like this, as it will be very inconsistent. Fourth, don't be different from what was written in the previous article. Your previous literature was wretched and developed, but what happened later? You know that you are brainless and pretentious, and you don't know how to protect intellectual property rights. In ancient times, there were no patents. Your starting point is suitable for farming flow, behind-the-scenes flow, and technology tree climbing. But you wrote a cool article. You, a reclusive person, wrote a cool article that pretends to be cool and slaps you in the face. It makes the protagonist have a very low IQ, okay?

The emperor is made to look like a fool, and the ministers are all stupid, so it makes the male protagonist appear smart!

What if Li Shimin takes his wife and children to find the protagonist? You must know that when we first met, there were only three of them, so Queen Changsun was okay. But his children are already so big. . .

What the hell are you writing? Li Shimin is the emperor for eternity, so Zheng Ge, Liu Che, and Zhu Yuanzhang cannot be the emperor for eternity?

The first is about the Great Qin Empire and the events of the Ming Dynasty. These serious historical writings are still of a good standard. They have loopholes and tendencies, but the writing style is also fascinating. The second is a new series in July, Ge Qin. The author is a postgraduate student in history. The writing is good and connotative. It is a mixture of time-travel and refreshing stories. The third is that the writing style is good, and the clever time-travel novels are cool, such as the best servants and the son-in-law. They use imaginary history and cannot learn anything, but they are well written and can have fun. Fourth, this article is like this. It really misses the subject matter. Really, I have read several books about Li Shimin in the Tang Dynasty. The historical level of these authors is neither above nor below, and the character descriptions are really witty.

Even if you are copying a book, you have to change your name, right? Is it so blatant😗😗

Everyone is so smart 🤣After reading one or two chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. Shuangwen is not like this, right?

There is a problem in the first chapter. Li Shimin just coincidentally asked the villagers, and the villagers coincidentally turned out to be idiots with no brains.

1. Forcibly reducing intelligence and handling the incident without logic. This is not writing a cool article. 2. The story development is deliberately fast-paced, and details are completely absent. 3. It would be bad to add too much modernization complex. For example, Cheng Yaojin mentioned the silver coin of the eldest grandson. Li Shimin's performance in the article was not as majestic as an emperor at all. Also, the behavior shown by the eldest princess in the process of contact with the protagonist was not at all what a princess should be. Although the Tang Dynasty was a relatively open period, it had not yet reached the point where a woman could hit someone's chest with her fist not long after they met a strange man. If you can endure the above details, I will read it when I am short of books. However, a good book requires careful attention to the details. Readers will be able to feel whether they put in the effort or not.