
Through the Red Mansion: the First Bastard of the Jia Family
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This is a story of a concubine struggling in the red building, counterattack and inspirational...
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Official(22)Scraped 17d ago
what to write
What did you write? More than 100 chapters later, it's still a waste.
It looked good at first, but then I realized that there was no emotional line at all. It was just a name, and it was just a narration, which was a waste of time.
It's not like writing a novel, it's like telling a story from a third perspective, just like writing a running account, what happened, and then the important events are very fast-paced, and there is no sense of substitution.
Chapter 100, except for a few, most of the fans have grown a knot of grass on the grave of Jia She and Jia Zhen, or have turned into a vegetative state. The bastard Fengliu called the abuser in the past. In chapter 100, Jia She is already worse than dead, the protagonist of this book. . .
Modern people's thoughts are different from those of the ancients
Modern people's thoughts are different from those of the ancients, and it is impossible for the protagonists to all listen to Jia She. Besides, Jia She couldn't be a fool. He was played around by Jia Zhen.
There's really no need to target Jia She (the deposed prince's attendant), he's just a nerd. During that period, Jia Daishan should have participated in the royal struggle (deposing the crown prince), but he was on the losing side. In the end, Jia Daishan hanged himself. The Duke's title was demoted to three levels in a row, allowing Jia She to seize the title. The assets of the Duke's government were inherited by Jia Zheng, and he could not participate in the military and imperial examinations for three generations. Why should Jia Baoyu's good reputation be promoted in a big way, just to attract people? A strong foreign aid marriage (Lin Ruhai, the Xue family took the bait), the Ning Mansion is almost the same, Jia Jing imprisoned the Taoist temple (it is very impressive for a martial arts scholar to pass the second rank Jinshi, must be the staff of the deposed prince, the demise of the Jia Mansion began in Ning, indicating that Jia Jing and the remnants of the deposed prince are still involved), only Jia Zhen should die
Jia Xu, Jia Zhangshi, Jia Dongxu, Jia Banggen are all cancers
Everything is fine, can you use less words? And with the development route set here, let alone saving Jia's family and Jin Chai, even he himself would have to die.
Drive high and go low, wasting my reading time
There are too many nonsense plots! Long-winded
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Official(22)Scraped 17d ago
what to write
What did you write? More than 100 chapters later, it's still a waste.
It looked good at first, but then I realized that there was no emotional line at all. It was just a name, and it was just a narration, which was a waste of time.
It's not like writing a novel, it's like telling a story from a third perspective, just like writing a running account, what happened, and then the important events are very fast-paced, and there is no sense of substitution.
Chapter 100, except for a few, most of the fans have grown a knot of grass on the grave of Jia She and Jia Zhen, or have turned into a vegetative state. The bastard Fengliu called the abuser in the past. In chapter 100, Jia She is already worse than dead, the protagonist of this book. . .
Modern people's thoughts are different from those of the ancients
Modern people's thoughts are different from those of the ancients, and it is impossible for the protagonists to all listen to Jia She. Besides, Jia She couldn't be a fool. He was played around by Jia Zhen.
There's really no need to target Jia She (the deposed prince's attendant), he's just a nerd. During that period, Jia Daishan should have participated in the royal struggle (deposing the crown prince), but he was on the losing side. In the end, Jia Daishan hanged himself. The Duke's title was demoted to three levels in a row, allowing Jia She to seize the title. The assets of the Duke's government were inherited by Jia Zheng, and he could not participate in the military and imperial examinations for three generations. Why should Jia Baoyu's good reputation be promoted in a big way, just to attract people? A strong foreign aid marriage (Lin Ruhai, the Xue family took the bait), the Ning Mansion is almost the same, Jia Jing imprisoned the Taoist temple (it is very impressive for a martial arts scholar to pass the second rank Jinshi, must be the staff of the deposed prince, the demise of the Jia Mansion began in Ning, indicating that Jia Jing and the remnants of the deposed prince are still involved), only Jia Zhen should die
Jia Xu, Jia Zhangshi, Jia Dongxu, Jia Banggen are all cancers
Everything is fine, can you use less words? And with the development route set here, let alone saving Jia's family and Jin Chai, even he himself would have to die.
Drive high and go low, wasting my reading time
There are too many nonsense plots! Long-winded









