We Who Have Just Grown Up
by Aya Muxi
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Official(14)Scraped 2mo ago
The logic and language are confusing... I can't stand it.
The two chapters of Lingxi seem like me, I don't like making friends; my parents don't understand me at all, in their eyes there are only grades and results! I once imagined: If I die, will the world change because of my disappearance? But now I understand, the world is so big, if one more of me is not more, if one less of me is not more, maybe no one will care about my existence! From now on, I will no longer be the (excellent) me in the eyes of others! I make my own decisions about my own life. No matter what others think of me, I am who I am and I don't need to make any changes because of others!
I like this kind of true story, but I think it's better to narrate it in the first person! 😊Awesome👍
This is not a novel, it is just the story of some people. In fact, it is difficult to avoid being straightforward when describing this matter. The author is only writing the structure when writing, and the real content and memories belong only to him. We don't have to be too demanding when reading. Everyone has his own stage, which is like the general history "Nothing is permanent in the world, but the mirror corrects the clothes." We have our own perceptions, and we may recall that person that day and that month. The real story is written by ourselves.
Wouldn't it be better to write it as a novel, rather than just a straightforward narrative? For example, give the characters names, even if they are not real, and apply appropriate artistic processing, such as adding psychological descriptions and detailed descriptions. For example, you can imagine the way the sun shines on a girl's hair, which is to set up a specific scene and concretize the actions. This does not mean that to be true, you can only lay out the events. When Sima Qian wrote the historical records, he had not personally experienced those events, but the actions and language of the characters were all written as if they were in front of his eyes. It's just reasonable artistic processing.
So far, I have only read Chapter 6. The most touching part is Chapter 45, Ling hope. It feels like a very real story, and some of the stories here are very similar to real-life situations. A person who is very important to me is sad to be separated, but as long as I have myself and the other person in my heart, I will think of the other person no matter what I do, and I will think of the other person unconsciously in everything. Even if the new environment, everything around me is different, and I have new good friends, as long as I still remember the other person, it will be fine. Dear author, I just read the book review. Although you may not have a lot of time to update the book, it will be good as long as you update it. I really like this book you wrote after reading it, although I haven't finished it yet (embarrassing), come on!
I just read the first chapter and I don't understand it. Is it a problem with my reading? I always feel a little confused.
I support your story, and I also like the ordinary feeling without too many routines. I hope you can keep writing and your writing will get better and better.
I feel like the author's personal pronouns are a bit confusing, but the story is wonderful! Already great!
This is the first time I read a novel like this, and it feels like reading someone else's diary It is a story of growth, but also the changes in people's hearts.
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Official(14)Scraped 2mo ago
The logic and language are confusing... I can't stand it.
The two chapters of Lingxi seem like me, I don't like making friends; my parents don't understand me at all, in their eyes there are only grades and results! I once imagined: If I die, will the world change because of my disappearance? But now I understand, the world is so big, if one more of me is not more, if one less of me is not more, maybe no one will care about my existence! From now on, I will no longer be the (excellent) me in the eyes of others! I make my own decisions about my own life. No matter what others think of me, I am who I am and I don't need to make any changes because of others!
I like this kind of true story, but I think it's better to narrate it in the first person! 😊Awesome👍
This is not a novel, it is just the story of some people. In fact, it is difficult to avoid being straightforward when describing this matter. The author is only writing the structure when writing, and the real content and memories belong only to him. We don't have to be too demanding when reading. Everyone has his own stage, which is like the general history "Nothing is permanent in the world, but the mirror corrects the clothes." We have our own perceptions, and we may recall that person that day and that month. The real story is written by ourselves.
Wouldn't it be better to write it as a novel, rather than just a straightforward narrative? For example, give the characters names, even if they are not real, and apply appropriate artistic processing, such as adding psychological descriptions and detailed descriptions. For example, you can imagine the way the sun shines on a girl's hair, which is to set up a specific scene and concretize the actions. This does not mean that to be true, you can only lay out the events. When Sima Qian wrote the historical records, he had not personally experienced those events, but the actions and language of the characters were all written as if they were in front of his eyes. It's just reasonable artistic processing.
So far, I have only read Chapter 6. The most touching part is Chapter 45, Ling hope. It feels like a very real story, and some of the stories here are very similar to real-life situations. A person who is very important to me is sad to be separated, but as long as I have myself and the other person in my heart, I will think of the other person no matter what I do, and I will think of the other person unconsciously in everything. Even if the new environment, everything around me is different, and I have new good friends, as long as I still remember the other person, it will be fine. Dear author, I just read the book review. Although you may not have a lot of time to update the book, it will be good as long as you update it. I really like this book you wrote after reading it, although I haven't finished it yet (embarrassing), come on!
I just read the first chapter and I don't understand it. Is it a problem with my reading? I always feel a little confused.
I support your story, and I also like the ordinary feeling without too many routines. I hope you can keep writing and your writing will get better and better.
I feel like the author's personal pronouns are a bit confusing, but the story is wonderful! Already great!
This is the first time I read a novel like this, and it feels like reading someone else's diary It is a story of growth, but also the changes in people's hearts.
