
Little Master in the Red Mansion
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The new book "Red Mansion, Gray and Serious Brother Rong", everyone is welcome to read and make corrections.
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Official(33)Scraped 16d ago
After reading the first few chapters, I realized that the main character is also a young master and has traveled through time. He is being manipulated by several female maids. It doesn't matter. I can't stand it.
Can you at least have some common sense and write about Red Mansions?
I don't ask you to have any good writing skills or good ideas, but can you at least have some common sense? The first point is, can Ping'er be given away at will? [Emot=default,18/], that is the maid of the first wife, equivalent to Wang Xifeng's sister. If you want to send him out, you can't do it without Jia Lian's consent. And what is Ping'er? It is Wang Xifeng's hand. Wang Xifeng puts usury money, so Everything is handled through Ping'er, and then there is the Juren Examination, buddy, the Juren Examination, which happens once every three years. You win the exam for the third time. You are at least 19 at this time. Brother, it's not once a year. Brother, I really can't stand it. There are too many common sense mistakes. It's hard to stand writing this kind of historical article.
Stop writing about Red Mansion fans, it's too poisonous. It's really unique that you can write Jia She in a reasonable way.
What kind of thing is this written? Is the protagonist so crotch-stretching and so cowardly? That's just a piece of cake!
The writing is messy and confused.
Um, withdrawn. This pig's feet are really frustrating, being played with by a pretty boy.
I've finished reading Chapter 45. It's not interesting and the goal is not clear.
It's quite good. I didn't want to read it after reading the comments. I didn't really read any novels, so I just clicked on it and took a look. The result was surprisingly good. It's written like this. It has surpassed many Red Mansion novels. I don't know what they are picking on.
The author is quite stingy. I just said that the beginning of this book is not as good as the previous one, so my comment was deleted. My last book was still full.
nice.
In fact, when I read the author's book, I always bring in the characters from the Central Edition of Dream of Red Mansions. I feel that this book is more interesting
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Official(33)Scraped 16d ago
After reading the first few chapters, I realized that the main character is also a young master and has traveled through time. He is being manipulated by several female maids. It doesn't matter. I can't stand it.
Can you at least have some common sense and write about Red Mansions?
I don't ask you to have any good writing skills or good ideas, but can you at least have some common sense? The first point is, can Ping'er be given away at will? [Emot=default,18/], that is the maid of the first wife, equivalent to Wang Xifeng's sister. If you want to send him out, you can't do it without Jia Lian's consent. And what is Ping'er? It is Wang Xifeng's hand. Wang Xifeng puts usury money, so Everything is handled through Ping'er, and then there is the Juren Examination, buddy, the Juren Examination, which happens once every three years. You win the exam for the third time. You are at least 19 at this time. Brother, it's not once a year. Brother, I really can't stand it. There are too many common sense mistakes. It's hard to stand writing this kind of historical article.
Stop writing about Red Mansion fans, it's too poisonous. It's really unique that you can write Jia She in a reasonable way.
What kind of thing is this written? Is the protagonist so crotch-stretching and so cowardly? That's just a piece of cake!
The writing is messy and confused.
Um, withdrawn. This pig's feet are really frustrating, being played with by a pretty boy.
I've finished reading Chapter 45. It's not interesting and the goal is not clear.
It's quite good. I didn't want to read it after reading the comments. I didn't really read any novels, so I just clicked on it and took a look. The result was surprisingly good. It's written like this. It has surpassed many Red Mansion novels. I don't know what they are picking on.
The author is quite stingy. I just said that the beginning of this book is not as good as the previous one, so my comment was deleted. My last book was still full.
nice.
In fact, when I read the author's book, I always bring in the characters from the Central Edition of Dream of Red Mansions. I feel that this book is more interesting













