The Red Mansion Begins with a Concubine

1. Your biological mother was killed and you didn't even think about taking revenge. 2. I found a foreign girl. Those who knew she was a slave, but those who didn't knew she thought she was his real wife. 3. The imperial examination is the same as no imperial examination. The family does not pay attention to it, and there is no reward for killing Japanese pirates. 4. Emotionally indifferent, unclear about Lin Daiyu, allowing Jia Baoyu to get entangled. 5. Allowing the Jia family to rebel and decline is not like a time traveler. 6. The Ning Mansion and Dafang ransacked their homes and allowed the female family members to enter the Jiaofang Division. Qin Keqing, Wang Xifeng, Jia Yingchun, and Jia Xichun all went to the Jiaofang Division. The protagonist just watched, but instead killed his mother's enemy, Mrs. Wang, Jia Zheng, who looked down on the protagonist, and Baoyu who pestered your woman.

I've written almost 1/7 of the book's plot. The protagonist is still seven years old and has just realized that he can't just save money and survive. Should I say that the words "water" are all in front of it? Or should I say that this plot is forcing intelligence and treating the readers as fools. If an archaeological graduate student thinks that his children can save money in the feudal family business, you might as well write that a 7-year-old is wearing a 7-year-old. There are a lot of inexplicable poisonous plots and clichéd plots, and it is impossible to tell who is referencing whom; there are also many intellectual errors, just like an actor falls down or loses his pants while a good play is being performed, which makes people sigh. I looked through the table of contents and found that I have written chapter 370. Have you just finished the provincial examination? Your plot progress... Is abandoned

In ancient times, people were not allowed to accumulate private wealth. Regardless of selling calligraphy and painting, or doing business, the money they earned had to be handed over. Otherwise it would be extremely unfilial. And the retroactive period is a lifetime. For example, if you earn five taels of silver from shopping at the age of five, buy books and pens, and you are discovered at the age of 55, you will still be dismissed from office. Social death. Being the first assistant is no exception. Do you think Jia Lian is stupid? Don't they know how to do business? Isn't it possible that people can't find skilled slaves? Why do poor people pawn things off and not do business? Because you have to hand over the money after the work is done, and you get the reputation of running a cheap business. There are only heads of families like Jia She and Jia Zheng. Like Mrs. Wang Wang Xifeng who has a dowry. To operate. Jia Amnesty and Jia Zheng's servants running the business must also be included in the government. Mrs. Wang, Wang Xifeng runs a dowry business.

What Jiang Zhi wrote was just a bunch of ideas, as well as the chapter about counterattack and the frustration. What the hell are you writing? As a man who travels through the Jia family, you don't know what the Jia family will look like in the future? The protagonist is only seven years old when he travels back in time! You don't write about the protagonist going to school, but you write about a group of women competing for power? What's the difference between that and that trash Jia Baoyu? Why are you fighting over a 20-year-old man? If you, a male member of the Jia family, ask to learn from the Jia family, won't the Jia family let you go? If you want to write a Red Mansions fanfic and want the characters of Red Mansions, are Xue Baochai and Lin Daiyu from Jinling and Yangzhou, who are the imperial examination areas, enough? You can definitely go to the south to study and find these two people, and build the main story while studying. But what did you write? Write about a child who is not over ten years old and fighting for power in a deep house? What do you think, author? If you really want to write, you can do it after you have achieved fame and official status. Tell me what the protagonist can do if he's not over ten years old? Who wants to work with him? He is not Jia Baoyu, even if he does it, he can kill you with just one sentence to Mrs. Jia. What's the use of what the protagonist does? The writing makes no sense

La, the main character is the Holy Mother, and she doesn't have any decisiveness in killing. When you were in the Jia Mansion, you were always the one who felt aggrieved. Now that you are out of the house, you still don't develop your own power and business. Why do you keep suppressing the protagonist and continue to feel aggrieved?

I was already very angry at work and wanted to see the bastard turn over to feel better. I read more than a hundred chapters, Now I am full of anger.

Unless the Wang family is killed, Mrs. Wang and Wang Xifeng will not be able to justify it, and the Jia family will not step on their toes, so I will not be a son of a human being. . . More than three hundred chapters are still frustrating. . . The author should not write more and more useless. . . Don't make the protagonist look like a dog, thank you

Well, there isn't much that can be seen in the Red Mansion.

It can be seen from the first chapter that the author's cultural level is not high. The Twenty-Four Histories is not a book, but a collective name for a series of history books. Your fictional history does not include the Ming and Qing Dynasties. Where did the Twenty-Four Histories come from?

It takes 37 years to go from being a child to a first-level official in the officialdom. How old do you want to be when you start going to school before you can rescue the Jia family before the house is raided?