The Heaven-defying Fox Treasure: the Miracle Doctor's Mother Lost Her Horse Again

I just want to ask the author, others are trying their best to kill your son. Used to practice elixirs. If you meet your enemy, will you spare his life? If you feel weak for a moment, others will come back and kill your son again. After five years of time travel and five years of forbearance, as soon as he appeared on the scene, he was severely injured by others, and his son was also seriously injured. What kind of plot is this? The other son is obviously around and looks nothing like his own child, but he is exactly the same age and has exactly the same eyes. Why can't he think more or ask more questions? So quickly I felt that this was not your son. After the male protagonist slept with the female protagonist, he never showed up. He only appeared when the female protagonist gave birth to a baby, and as soon as he appeared, he snatched the child away. This kind of scumbag, no matter how clean he is, he is not suitable to be a male protagonist, right?

The strength also changes from time to time. The heroine clearly broke through the ninth level in that Niuling magma, and after more than 2,600 chapters, she was at the eighth level when she faced Zhan Taihao. Also, didn't Nangong Jin say he was in the middle of the seventh level in Nanning City, and in the assessment, he said he was in the sixth level. It's really a mess

To be honest, it was quite attractive at the beginning, and the heroine was very beautiful in the battle, and she refused to admit defeat and was not proud. However, after two thousand chapters, it was written by another person. It was clear that the heroine had already entered the ninth level at the volcano in the early stage. As a result, the Kyushu Banquet became the eighth level again. I suspected that it was written by another person. There is also Nangong Jin, who was already in the middle of the seventh level when he appeared. The Jiuzhou Banquet has become the sixth level again. It is a complete nonsense. Moreover, this one is already a trap and has no ending, so it is not recommended.

Can the author stop repeating himself all the time? Don't you think there's too much nonsense?

Dear author, can you update more every day and update faster? I feel like it's not enough~

The progress of the work is slow, more than 2,000 chapters have been written for several months without being finished. The child is still over five years old, and the heroine has never known that Buli is her son (then you don't find the whereabouts of the child who was taken away by the prince? You only care about falling in love???) And the explanation is too Many, in fact, sometimes it is not necessary. If you can understand it (or you can throw it into a pretentious way, or make it short, otherwise it will be suspected of a low word count), it is easy to make a drama. It was originally substituted, but suddenly the author's God's point of view explained it, it was very fragmented, and it immediately became a drama. Furthermore, sometimes the heroine becomes wise inexplicably? He Buli is the older brother, so why do you feel inferior to Xiao Mo in everything? Thousands of chapters have gone by without explaining why Xiao Mo is a little fox and Bu Li is a human being, so much so that the heroine doesn't believe that Bu Li is her child. And then the heroine's strength is different in different chapters of the eighth and ninth levels? . . . We could understand Gungun's words before they broke up, and even used Gungun as a sounding board to curse each other. Why did he need Xiao Mo to translate for him later? ? ? Is it written that the characters were replaced or the author forgot to set the setting and forget about the plot development? ? ? Finally, the update was discontinued! ! ! ! I've followed more than 2,000 chapters and there's no ending, so I'm going to stop updating? ? ? ! ! ! . . . (I had to skip reading it because it was too long-winded. Thousands of chapters only describe what happened in a few months. The plot has almost no progress... Although some of the heroine's distress scenes are well written, the plot line is too long and it is easy to get tired...)

I think the first part is pretty good. The female protagonist is more rational, but some details are not rigorous enough. It's been a long time since I saw such a normal male protagonist who is funny and can joke. Apart from anything else, I really like this male protagonist, but his love for the female protagonist is a bit hasty. He should be more gradual. , And what I think is more annoying is that the heroine's level changes. Wasn't the heroine at level seven when she first appeared? Later, she was promoted to the peak of level eight at the giant dragon in the cold pool, one step away from level nine. She was promoted to the middle of level nine at Guniuling, but when it came time to enter the secret realm, it was said that the heroine was only at level eight? ? I'm really confused

3,000 people, 100 people in each circle, just 30 circles, where are the 300? Jun Wuchen is far superior to Xiantian, and even Master Dayu and Lei can't beat Xiantian by even half a step?

I really hate the scene where the male and female protagonists quarrel, it's really annoying to watch. The attitudes of the heroine and the hero are indescribably separated. It was okay in the early stage, but it was really unbearable in the later stage.

To sum up in one sentence, the old lady's foot-binding cloth.