Quickly Travel Through the Journey of Fulfilling Your Wishes in Life

I like to read this type of fast-traveling novels, counterattacks, slaps in the face, anything. More than 90% of the current fast-traveling novels are about flirting with the male protagonist and doing tasks. I hate books with male protagonists the most. It's so annoying to read. 🤔🤔🤔It's so annoying. It's hard to find another novel of this type like Dazai. Why are there so few novels like "Quick-Time Traveling: The Road to Hope"?

I read a little bit of this book. This gives me the following feeling: ⅠDisadvantages (self-perception) ①There are too many typos. ②The story is not rigorous enough, and the readers may find it abrupt and easy to get into trouble. ③The character of the heroine is not well written and not outstanding enough. Ⅱ Recommendation (incomplete and not necessarily correct) ①I think you should read some fast-traveling articles by some great masters. You can watch how the master writes it, and then try to write it yourself. (Jane masters the writing methods of great masters) ② When writing, you can put yourself in someone else's shoes and think about what would happen if you traveled through time. There may be negative emotions, but this is writing a novel, so it's all about positive emotions. Thinking about it this way, the heroine's character should be ① cold and powerful ② optimistic and lively ③ cute and funny, etc. (Remember, the heroine is not Xiaobai, the Holy Mother, or Bailian) ③ You should check it carefully when writing to prevent typos. ④When writing each short story in the quick travel article, you should write it based on reality. (Search for weird stuff on your mobile phone more often) This can greatly reduce the situation where the article looks awkward! ⅢFinally, the overall text is quite good. I also admire you for persisting all the way till now! I hope your articles will get better and better as you write them, and become more and more exciting!

I feel like the author is probably a newbie who just started writing articles, so it's considered a mid- to long-term review. 1. There are too many typos. I hope the author can check it after finishing writing. 2. The sentence segmentation is wrong and cannot be completely connected into one sentence. Sometimes one sentence is split into two sentences and the sentence does not make sense. 3. Character: Regarding the character of the heroine, this is a fast-travel novel. No matter what kind of person the heroine was before, after a long time traveling through so many worlds, the heroine's character will definitely become mature. She may not necessarily be indifferent, but she will never be so childish and immature. No one is the same, but after looking at hundreds of pictures, I have experienced dozens of different worlds. Finally, the heroine still has a short memory, trusts people casually, and makes some stupid mistakes. 4. World setting. When the author sets the world, the setting of each world is relatively complete. The story of each world is so complete that each unit story can be written into a full-length novel. In short, the process is very complete, and the ending is very sloppy. It feels like a big mess, and then just let it end. 5. The synopsis of the story is very complete, and the writing style is also good👍. It is quite attractive to me. Many of the stories in it are not enough to read. I hope the story is more complete and not unfinished! It's just that these problems do exist in the article. This is my personal opinion (a kind reminder from a reader) Finally, I wish you work hard in writing and become a god as soon as possible

A very plain book, or close to life. The heroine is also very ordinary. Even though she has traveled through many worlds, she has always been the same. He doesn't have any extraordinary abilities, and he doesn't have too strong methods. He is just a person who has integrated into the identity of the original owner. He has no characteristics and is very bland. The heroine fulfills the wish of the person who makes the wish, step by step, no matter what the status, no matter what the conditions, she does things that are suitable for that era. There is no cheat code, and the system only rarely shows up, but there are too many typos, some of which are outrageous. For example, the heroine's name can be wrongly spelled in many ways, and there are no other words to mention. Generally speaking, the heroine's character is that of a mortal. Even if she had too much hatred to avenge her, she would not kill them all. He can remain indifferent to being slapped in the face, and as long as his life is not harmed by being plotted against, he can finally sit at the same table and give advice to others. No matter how miserable the experiences of many people who made a wish are, it seems that the sinners survived in the end, and they may feel that the punishment was not enough. There are a lot of scumbag men, and in the end the heroine is together. Another example is the story of the Qing Dynasty in which the heroine is accompanied by a husband for several consecutive times. There are also quite a lot of stories from the 1950s and 1960s, and I wrote several of them in a row which made me tired of reading them, so I skipped through them later. Not to mention ancient times, heroines have been married to multiple wives, concubines and so on, and they have multiple daughters and one husband. Even in modern times, some husbands who have cheated on their wives will be forgiven by the heroine in the end because she regrets it, and then give him a child or something. Some are girlfriends, such as men who change clothes. The original owner possessed by the heroine is an innocent girl, but the heroine looks for this kind of man because she likes it. To be honest, the heroine is beautiful and can do anything. Men don't have to look for this kind of man. As for the kind where both parties are innocent, there are very few, at least from the eight or nine hundred chapters I read, there are very few that I can remember. Probably because they were drugged by polygamists, so I can't remember them. As for the heroine's second marriage and finding a good unmarried man, there are not many. Overall, there are too many scumbags. The female protagonist is a person with upright views. She just doesn't feel good about taking revenge. She just does tasks and tasks along the way. There is no change. Her personality has not become stronger or stronger. She is just an ordinary person.

First of all, the author's writing style is, well, it's hard to describe in one sentence. It's like a primary school student who doesn't know how to use punctuation marks. Some of the storylines are still imitating plots and don't pay attention to details. The heroine's outlook on life is also problematic. You can write short stories about time travel, but you haven't perfected every story at all. Just like the heroine's child in the first article, does she like it? How many times has she seen that child? Has she written it? If the heroine divorces the man privately, will there be no trouble later? The whole article is written in a mess. Although I like cool articles, I also ask you to be an author with basically three views. I don't understand how you got the recommendation!

I don't understand why there is no cp and no male protagonist, but almost every world gets married, and there are a lot of love dramas?

Female pigs have no perspective at all

Please read the chapter about the heroine and her sister in Chapter 1334. Oh my god, the original Lord Tianyuan had a grudge against Rushuang, but the heroine actually helped her. If she didn't attack her, forget it. At least, she had to have no interaction with her. This is my third comment today. The author's writing style is still a bit too lacking in skills. The more I read, the more annoyed I get.

What grade is the author in this year? How much homework? There should be a lot. But I thought primary school students wouldn't have a lot of homework. Alas, it's so miserable.

The heroine has experienced the whole world, but she is still a little naive. Experience is not consistent with psychological growth. Too weak