The Five Dynasties Begins with the Battle of Gaoping
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When autumn comes on the eighth day of the ninth lunar month, hundreds of flowers will bloom. The fragrance will penetrate Chang'an, and the whole city will be filled with golden armor. The troubled times of the Five Dynasties began, the events of the Later Zhou Dynasty and the Southern Tang Dynasty, Zhou Shizong's great talents and great strategies, starting from the Battle of Gaoping. The heroes were divided among themselves, with Khitan and Northern Han in the north, Southern Tang and Wuyue in the south, and Houshu, which was relatively peaceful and livable. He Yun follows his uncle He Hui on how to turn the tide from high levels and how to make a living in troubled times.
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Official(3)Scraped 1d ago
After reading dozens of chapters, I finally understand why each of your chapters is short and feeble. It's because you wrote the upper and lower chapters separately. The two chapters are clearly the story of one story, but you chose to divide it into two chapters. This makes it appear that your writing skills are poor and you have no culture. One chapter is so short and there are no words in it, but you still write it in two chapters. There is no ending to the previous chapter, and you continue to write the next one. You have not laid the groundwork, and you have wasted the opportunity to increase the word count. I hope you can learn from it and change it in the future. Don't make each chapter so short and weak, don't divide it into so many chapters. Increase the word count first. Don't always think that writing more will make you look awesome. You can't even mention the words. It's useless no matter how much you write. You must have an outline.
This book is copied. Except for the names of the people, the plot is basically the same.
You also need to write about the time. Before you describe something, you need to lay the groundwork for the time. You also need to write down what you want to do. No, you can describe it in one sentence and just write about the thing directly. Do you know why every chapter of yours is short and weak, with few words? Is it because you have no foreshadowing and need to carefully describe what is to be written next, but just write it in one stroke? , If you write like this, your word count will never increase. Each one will be short and weak, and you will lack the sense of reading.
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Official(3)Scraped 1d ago
After reading dozens of chapters, I finally understand why each of your chapters is short and feeble. It's because you wrote the upper and lower chapters separately. The two chapters are clearly the story of one story, but you chose to divide it into two chapters. This makes it appear that your writing skills are poor and you have no culture. One chapter is so short and there are no words in it, but you still write it in two chapters. There is no ending to the previous chapter, and you continue to write the next one. You have not laid the groundwork, and you have wasted the opportunity to increase the word count. I hope you can learn from it and change it in the future. Don't make each chapter so short and weak, don't divide it into so many chapters. Increase the word count first. Don't always think that writing more will make you look awesome. You can't even mention the words. It's useless no matter how much you write. You must have an outline.
This book is copied. Except for the names of the people, the plot is basically the same.
You also need to write about the time. Before you describe something, you need to lay the groundwork for the time. You also need to write down what you want to do. No, you can describe it in one sentence and just write about the thing directly. Do you know why every chapter of yours is short and weak, with few words? Is it because you have no foreshadowing and need to carefully describe what is to be written next, but just write it in one stroke? , If you write like this, your word count will never increase. Each one will be short and weak, and you will lack the sense of reading.
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