After Traveling Through Time, the Real Daughter Became a Scientific Research Boss

Can rnm refund my membership money? The whole book was promoted through tweets at the beginning. I thought it was about the heroine's revenge. The first chapter kills her mother with bare hands and then she guides the younger brother. It's quite interesting. After reading the tweets and charging money, all the highlights are in the tweets. I read this book with the mentality of watching the heroine's revenge. But most of the book traveled to other parallel time and space. During the revenge, the villains all acted like they had used intelligence. There was a male protagonist who wanted to kidnap the heroine, but the heroine called the police and solved the villain and went in. Later, it was said that the fiancé was actually not too bad to him, so he didn't want to take revenge. It was some stupid plot. Can the author give me a refund? ! !

What a vicious plot. I just wanted to see what happened to Jiang Yuntian's family. But this is what happened. If you don't write this plot mainly, don't name it after this title. Use this introduction. It's disgusting. I have never seen such a speechless plot. One star is too much.

I was attracted by the main plot of the Jiang family, and I really like the process of the heroine being slapped in the face and upgrading. Actually, I don't understand at all that the Jiang family should have extraordinary names if they are named consecutively. Why is the last one a table? This name is too difficult to pronounce, and it seems that the family has suddenly become uneducated. The most unacceptable thing is probably that the main line is written and digressed to write other lines. The author has been dragging the progress of this main line, writing bit by bit, but what everyone wants to see is the complete main line. Who can accept this method of tearing apart a little here and a little there to let the readers piece it together. Halfway through the story, the main plot fiancé Shen Huai'an has not yet come out, and when describing Jiang Mingzhu, her tea art White Lotus level was set too high. Many people who watched the video were still in the early stages of tea appreciation and thought Jiang Mingzhu was good and automatically ignored Jiang Mingzhu's behavior of knowing three things and running with the ball in her previous life. Finally, I have a question. Since it has developed into a fast time travel, why not completely treat the Jiang family as the first story and finish it before continuing with the second story in the second world? Why should I unpack the first story and write something like this at the back of each world? As a result, the article written is really confusing, because everyone has to remember several story lines, and then the main line suddenly comes out again after forgetting about it, and I simply don't know what to say.

I really recommend it. I like the style of this book very much. The heroine does not procrastinate in her work. She takes revenge and saves those who are defined as vicious by the novel world but the female counterpart is also the most innocent. It is so refreshing to read. The system is right. The male and female protagonists are not necessarily honest people. They do many unreasonable things under the aura of the male and female protagonists, but it makes people think it is natural. If you take off the halo filter, will you still take it for granted? Are the vicious female protagonists in today's novels really vicious? Isn't this what the author wants to make people think is vicious? This is a great article, and there are no things that make people criticize it. It's very refreshing! ! ! I highly recommend this book. It's really good. The three views are very correct. That's what I'm saying. Come on, dear friends, no cp is the right thing! I don't believe this book! I wish your article a big hit, I wrote this book first! She came under the stars and the moon, just to save those female partners who were stuck in the quagmire and couldn't prove it.

Ugly (the following is not directed at the author, only at this book) The title of the book is True and False Thousand Gold, and the introduction is also True and False Thousand Gold. If you want to highlight the essence of the fast-traveling novel, can you change the name and the introduction? The plot is extremely messy. The main plot of the real and fake daughter is progressing well, but in the middle of the movie, it suddenly starts to travel quickly. The main plot doesn't even have an ending at the end. Why can't we cross the main line first and then branch out? This will give a much better look and feel, and it will also be more convenient for people who don't want to read other side stories. Finally, let's talk about some minor issues. There are often grammatical errors. For example, in a certain chapter, the reason why the heroine cannot be touched is: "The country is very important to the heroine" and the order is reversed. There are also names Jiang Erfan and Jiang Eryue, which mean extraordinary excellence. But I don't understand. Does the name Jiang Erzuo have any meaning? This is not something that a wealthy family can take out. Every time I see it, I feel like it's a drama. Of course, there may be some points that I didn't expect, so I won't say anything. To sum it up, this is the most unpleasant and ugliest piece of writing I have ever read. If it weren't for the 8 yuan, I wouldn't be bothered to flip through the pages to find the main line among the branch lines and pass it.

It's pretty good, but I'm speechless. I really don't understand why I didn't wear it after the story ended. I abandoned it halfway through.

It's a bad ending. If the data is not good, it's just a eunuch. I suggest the author think about why the data is not good. It's better to finish it and prepare a new book as soon as possible after running out of inspiration. Don't procrastinate. It even feels like the previous world routine, just changing the names of the people. The subsequent plot is boring and boring. It feels like the villain is looking for trouble and then gets slapped in the face by the heroine. I can only say that the membership is in vain. The sisters who tweeted me must avoid lightning. They thought it was the main heroine but turned out to be mentally retarded. Don't waste money in vain. The author's writing style makes people feel comfortable. It is neither good nor bad. I will still read the new book. I hope it will not be like this book.

The author is going to take a further course of study. Write half of the main storyline of Revenge, and then run to fast travel. Who taught you this? After coming back from fast time travel, the main plot is also bad. It is better to turn this main line into a small world of fast time travel. This is a story that makes you feel unhappy. The villain also likes to write about subduing his wits and committing suicide. Forget it. But just before the climax of the article, where the villain is punished after his death, you write another story. How confident are you that you can retain readers I finally jumped to the main plot, and found that the main plot was also bad, and the only small advantage was gone

The story about the Jiang family is after the chapter "What a Luck". After reading it, jump to chapter seventy-nine.

The main plot is undoubtedly enjoyable. If you don't take revenge on the Holy Mother, there may be some logic problems, but it does not affect the perception. It is indeed very novel. The branch plot is opened before the main plot is over. It combines the true and false daughter's fast travel with a little bit of infinite flow. It is too complicated and incompetent. I was attracted here just to see the true and false daughter, so I skipped the other worlds directly. , I have no desire to read it at all, and I even wanted to abandon the article at one point. The length of the branch line is really a bit long, and the various props are like Pinduoduo. Copper coins turn into silver coins and turn into gold coins... It is similar to the routine of a bad meal I read a long time ago. When the world ends, go to the next level, but because this is still the beginning, it is understandable to bury the thread. In the end, I hope there will be no cp🙏