Infinite Natural Disasters: I Became a God by Hoarding Goods Like Crazy

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I have been following this book since it was first serialized. I like to read this kind of novel that flows endlessly into a long novel. But the more I read, the more I feel a little weak (? The author's characterization is too one-sided. Compared with the skills of the protagonist, it is really weak. There is also the issue of human nature. Is there too much moral kidnapping in the end of the world? I know the author wants to create a good character image for the heroine, but is it too virginal? It's so difficult to be the villain of my daughter's blood (an ordinary person without superpowers). I have to accept the accusations of ordinary people and have to make up for my mistakes (I know it's meant to say that the base needs a certain order to maintain, otherwise it will collapse). Although it is cruel, this is the end of the world, and it is impossible for people with abilities to be equal to ordinary people. Not to mention the idea of other ordinary people in the article that you should protect me just because you have the ability. This kind of peace of mind is really uncomfortable to watch. In addition to the problems with characterization and humanity, there are also some problems with supporting characters. The number is redundant, and most of them are reduced to "tool people". They have neither independent and complete characters, nor are they closely related to the plot. I feel disconnected and tired when reading. This is my current feeling while reading this book. The core setting and protagonist of the story are very charming, I hope it gets better and better

It doesn't read fluently enough, and it's written in a flat and straightforward manner, and it seems to be similar to similar online articles. The sentences are relatively simple, the descriptions are not vivid enough, the use of personal pronouns is stiff, and the characters have no souls. Compared with the protagonists of similar works of the same type, the character of the protagonist is not "adapted" to the end of the world, and the resulting events are not handled decisively enough. Moreover, the author is probably not very good at writing battle descriptions. Some battle plots are briefly mentioned, which is somewhat detrimental to the consolidation of her character. The author's description of the protagonist contains many redundant details, but does not describe her character too much. The first-person language description used in "Habit" makes her seem to be talking to herself, like a puppet controlled by the "master god". There are a lot of redundant descriptions, which makes the progression of the plot seem draggy.

I thought the female channel's apocalyptic novels would be a little different. I remember a saying that evil thrives not because evil people are powerful, but because those who have the ability to do good choose not to do it. If a person does good deeds that will harm her own interests, no one can force her to do good deeds; but if a person does good deeds that will not harm her own interests, but she still chooses to be indifferent, no matter how she whitewashes it, it cannot change the fact that this is the depravity of human nature.

The self-talk and inner talk can be reduced to some descriptions. There is no need to put quotation marks on the psychological words. It can be replaced by a third-party narrative that feels smoother. There is also something about Chen Shangkang controlled by the puppet's spider silk that I don't quite understand: Is the controlled state continuous? In the early stage, there was no description of how to pass the copy when being controlled? Do you have no thoughts of your own when you are being controlled? I don't understand this control state... Can the author explain it?

Not bad, but the first-person self-description is a bit too much.

1. The heroine is decisive in killing and never drags her feet. 2. Every time I save someone, I do it only when it is useful. 3. The plot is smooth and exciting

The characters are one-sided, and the people around them are morally kidnapped. They are all yes-men🤗 and they don't have a sense of awe.

In the article, the heroine keeps talking to herself, talking to herself from beginning to end, and the words are very dense. It is really outrageous, and it is so annoying to watch. It is really the end of the world and it is too late to work and escape. Who can talk to herself like the heroine when she sees every thing or person? It is like a peaceful society, can't it be written as a psychological description... There is also food hoarding. In the second world, people eat either bread or steamed buns. How can you not stock up on high-calorie food?

Although the author said he is a newcomer, I felt uncomfortable reading the first dozen chapters. The heroine gave me a very strange feeling, as if the author wanted to portray an ordinary person with some clever characters, but the actual effect really made the heroine look stupid. Then there are some parts of the description, which are really painful to watch. I still can't figure out what kind of character the author wants to create for the heroine. Is she a humble ordinary person, a girl with a little cleverness, or a silly and sweet girl. For the first dozen chapters, I suspected that the heroine was schizophrenic, how could she be so uncomfortable. One moment he was smart, and the next moment he was so stupid that I doubted he was the same person. To be honest, if I couldn't bear it, I wouldn't write a book review. This is my first time writing a book review, and it is a long review. I can understand some reasons for hand addiction, which causes some parts to be treated differently from other articles. But I can't accept a book that was so strange and irritating as the one I read earlier. Some parts really don't look like they were written by a human being, and I was really exhausted from reading them. And those who praised it in the comment section, haven't they read the normal article? This is a very normal apocalyptic plot, and the characters are also very normal. Where is the flesh and blood and where is the excitement? I even suspected that it was brushed. I even regretted that I was greedy for cheap. I shouldn't have selected this one in the free zone, but this one happened to be what I was most interested in. If I had known this earlier, I would have rather read mindless sadistic stories and wife-chasing crematorium stories. I was really exhausted. The rating is due to the newbie being lenient. Five stars, one deducted for plot, one deducted for characters, one deducted for writing, leaving two stars. If you are not a newbie, I would like to give one star. It is really exhausting. I will take advantage of the limited time limit to continue watching it. If it is good later, I will change the review, but if it doesn't work, I will really persuade me to quit. It's been a long time since I've seen such an uncomfortable piece of writing. All the awkward writing I wrote in fifth grade was more pleasing to the eye than this one. Also, the above is purely my opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize me. If you do, I will assume that you are a fake person. Second editor: ... I still can't understand it. I read 16 chapters of this thing in more than an hour😥If you like the silly and sweet little heroine, you can read it. If it matches your taste😶I will give the heroine the whole object later and let the heroine be a spoiled wife. I won't feel abnormal😶But I read it even though I know it is S. I am also an M. But I want to see how this thing has 500 chapters. Let me learn from it😶 Part Three: It feels much more comfortable without reading the text. The most favorable comments should be those who listen to the book. But listening to books is really more comfortable than reading text. From listening to the book, I can tell that the settings are okay. The second copy is a little better than the first, but there are still some problems. If you want to read it, I recommend listening to the book. But that man's name is Jing Ningyu. I didn't remember the name. I just heard the pronunciation of it from the book. It's really stupid. It makes me feel more uncomfortable than the heroine. She's so stupid that she's dumb and stupid. Not all rich people are fools😔But I don't know why most authors like to write the rich young master's daughter as a fool😔But because of the supporting role, I feel that the heroine is much smarter👍I suggest the author write more to highlight the protagonist's intelligence👍And the heroine is sometimes smart and sometimes stupid. Can we unify the protagonist's personality and behavior? 😕But I hope this book will get better as it gets written, otherwise I'm sorry, I plan to read it in the remaining 10 hours of the limited edition. Part Four: The limited exemption is about to end, and after hearing about 100 chapters, I will consider becoming a member to read it later. The overall level of the article increases around 50 chapters, which is probably the second half of the fourth copy. I don't know about the rest, but the overall plot and setting are indeed better than before, but I have already listened to the text, and I can't read it clearly. The narrative after chapter 50 is enough to add one star, because I do see progress. For example, the protagonist does not have the obvious ups and downs of IQ, and is stupid and smart. Then the characters are more three-dimensional than before, and the narrative is better than the first three. But there are still flaws. For example, the explanation of the main plot of the dungeon is very confusing. I can understand it, but it feels useless. Every time it feels like it's about to expand, the copy ends. For example, the part about brothers and sisters in the third dungeon, and the setting of spiritual recovery in the fourth dungeon. It gives me the feeling that I have an idea, but it is very difficult to write it, and I can only think of ways to change the topic. But what deserves praise is the fourth dungeon. The heroine used the truth to destroy the villain. It was really unexpected and it was indeed a reversal. This is also the reason why I am willing to continue watching 🤔 I want to see if it will continue to improve or if it will just be like this. Because some of the ideas are interesting, I want to see if they can be expanded, or if this is just the end of the road and no progress will be made. I'm sure the progress doesn't need to be delayed, but it's better not to rush it too much. The author is in a rush for every copy, but it starts to slow down later. But this slowdown is due to "missions". Setting a few tasks and then arranging the protagonists to do them one by one forcibly supplements the world view and story length. So I think the author is really bad at writing the dungeon, but there is indeed progress, which can be praised, and the world view of the dungeon is becoming more and more interesting. (You asked me before? I said too little before, I don't even know what the hell is going on😄I can only rely on those words + my own imagination😃) It is recommended to start reading from the third or fourth copy. The first one is useless, the second one is okay, but I can only laugh at the characterization. The third bug doesn't seem to be lacking much, and it's better than before. Yeah, that's it. I'll make up for it later depending on the situation. If you haven't added it, you forgot it, or you just don't want to read it😄