Financial Freedom Starts from Graduation

The plot arrangement is cliched, the author's aesthetic is very average, and Goldfinger's creativity is okay, but it turned out to be a tacky nouveau riche pretentious article.

The writing in the first few chapters was okay, quite novel and interesting. The plot behind it is so clichéd and bloody that I can't stand it anymore.

Urban Shenhao novels, a few key points in my personal opinion 1 The number of female protagonists is 5 to 10, of which one or two who are positioned as vase lovers and pets are enough. If there are two, it is best to be sisters with appropriate professions, competitive, and clear signs to distinguish them from novels of the same type. There must be one or two female protagonists who can be the boss (mainly background, ability, family status) to attend important occasions, otherwise a teacher doctor After all, children are not suitable for important occasions (their age means that they must not be Nobel Prize-level expert professors. Unless their background is urban ancient martial arts, they still have to abide by realistic logic). The rest of the heroines are set by the author themselves. Doctors, teachers, college counselors, lawyers, young women with children, anything else can be used, except for taking care of children. Young women, the rest are all set to be pure in body and mind. Married women are not poisonous, but they are not married, and they are not married for the first time. The character of Shang Yanyan is not something ordinary people can write, and most people will not understand it if they copy it. As well as the important heroine issue, I hope it is written about the heroine, not a woman, some one-night stand, Xiaowang Red, 80-point beauties and the like should be avoided as much as possible, they are all awesome, these are a bit downgraded. Too many female protagonists make people feel that the female protagonist is worthless, and they will be bored in the middle and later stages. Who can remember dozens of female protagonists clearly, and the author himself has written them in a mess. A goddess appears in the early stage, wow, heroine, and a goddess appears in the middle and late stages. Wow, who is this? I have no impression, the protagonist woman? Basically, many people won't be able to catch up in the middle and late stages of this kind of thing. 2 For the male protagonist himself, don't set him up to be a cuckold. Ninety-nine times, such protagonists rely on the system to counterattack. Without the system, they are nothing. They are not even comparable to normal people. They are limited products that are better than little fairies. It is best to show the shining points of the male protagonist, such as his maturity in dealing with people and his various characteristics. Growing up, focusing on improving one's own quality in daily self-cultivation, top university students, etc., Not necessarily self-made business tycoons, but at least the kind of outstanding talents that normal students need to work hard to reach. System cheats are just the icing on the cake. Of course, business tycoons and entrepreneurial budding stars are also good 3 The male-headed family, don't worry about the protagonists, parents are terminally ill, divorced, family debts are serious, there are as few relatives as possible, there is a father who is troubled, a mother who has remarried, a sister who cannot afford to go to school, and a protagonist who cannot afford to eat. Most people who read novels have better family conditions than this. Most normal families still have no worries about food and clothing. Most readers read novels. I'm not here to sympathize with the protagonist. There are also relatives who are against the gods. They can be as few as possible. In most families, the relatives are not particularly close, but at least the relationship is not too bad. They will visit the house to give gifts during the holidays. People who really have relatives who are against the gods don't want to feel sad again when they read the novel. The relatives against the gods are only disgusting in addition to promoting the plot. There are so many villains that can be set, so there is no need to harm your relatives. 4. Plots, especially those that violate realistic logic, should be avoided as much as possible. Some urban novels are good in the early stage, but in the middle stage, the army cooperates to smuggle arms. As a result, they are attacked by Yingjiabao and local forces in a small African country. They suffer heavy losses and many brothers are injured. In anger, they use high technology with the help of the system. Weapons wiped out local forces and destroyed the US military. I was happy to see it at the time, but I always felt a bit embarrassed. It felt more reasonable to use economic means to trigger an economic crisis in the United States. It would be normal for the urban protagonist Bubble Goddess to make a fortune and promote the country's economic development. On the other hand, there are international disputes over smuggling of arms. What should be considered in other types of novels, as well as kidnappings by business rivals, murders and arson, gangsters looking for trouble, and all kinds of pretentiousness, such as mentally retarded rich second generation, dog-legged waiters, are all modern civilized and law-governed societies. Too many of these things seem to be against the law. Domestic is not foreign, and there is no such thing. There are so many scenes of kidnapping and killing. Business competition has long gone by the era of bloody accumulation of capital. There may be civil violations, but there are really not many criminal violations. They are all murders without blood. Personal safety can be guaranteed most of the time. As for pretending to be slapped in the face, one or two times is fine. If you write too much, it will be like having too many women, which is annoying.

With a rating of 8.8, I was deceived. To be honest, there is not much that attracts me. Goldfinger is very creative, but the rewards are not satisfactory. Except for the money, few of them are of great help to the protagonist. I don't know what the author is writing, and there is nothing written about the career line. It is just a 10% share of a WCN organization, and I pretended to slap him in the face several times. I was so embarrassed for the protagonist, ✘ He didn't pretend, there was no way to get slapped in the face, and he had nothing but money. In the end, the system had to come out to clear the floor. The most important thing was that the protagonist had to go and hire someone to file a lawsuit for his wife, which didn't give any prestige at all. It was really humiliating to have to be left out in the cold. The daily life is also boring. You can't learn some hobbies to enrich yourself and use your charm to attract high-quality women. Don't always play some money-worshiping girls. They are not attractive except for being beautiful and boring. As for what kind of women are the most attractive, I don't need to say. The female protagonists (I don't know if they count as female protagonists) have distinct personalities, and their personalities will not change drastically like other novels. All the women have the same personality.

I'm so stupid. I really can't stand it after reading Chapter 5. If I want to buy clothes, I trust 🐔's aesthetics, but I don't trust the shopping guide's aesthetics. Does the author not know what a shopping guide does? When Ji Tou calls, he can clearly explain it with just one phone call, but he doesn't answer the phone and doesn't explain it. The protagonist buys a watch. I'm so stupid. I'm really impressed by the aesthetics. I thought they were electronic watches. 40 Is too expensive for me. 400,000? Then the chicken head came after me, and asked 🐔 to apologize to the client, and he looked down on the protagonist, thinking that the protagonist's worth was just that, and I was convinced. How much someone is worth has nothing to do with you? If you are worth a lot, you will get more money for whoring? I can't stand it anymore after seeing this. I can guess the development later on. It's nothing more than the protagonist pretending to be a slap in the face. *** Such an old routine. He can't even pretend to be awesome.

The plot of Hangcheng is really cliché. Every girl has to be licked. The female characters are not very likable either. She kneels down to lick the so-called internet celebrity. Don't you know what the advantages of your book are compared to similar genres? The character portrayal in the first part is so good. I won't follow it for the time being. Just keep it and see what happens next.

It's so funny, there's no need to chase it, it's just killing us readers' time, I'm really good at writing, just make a phone call and read four or five chapters, are you kidding me?

The dog-licking mentality is so disgusting. Since you have thoughts about Ding Yi, don't write so many women and become a god. What's more rare is emotional single-mindedness, not like a husky.

It's starting to make me sick. It's like the Xiuxian novel that keeps opening new maps. The author keeps opening new maps, which makes it a confusing batch. There are those who have boyfriends, husbands, children, those who are sick, those who engage in nightclubs, those who do pedicures, those who do live broadcasts. I can't wait for the passing bitch to bite me, the author is so fucking taboo. If you don't have taboos, you can let the system give you a strong backbone. Haha, what's your logic when writing about a normal person opening so many harems?

Going so slowly, it looked pretty good at first, but going so slow doesn't feel good at all.