The Fusion of the Heavens Begins with Xiaoao
by Pink Durian
About This Novel
Ye Zhan, who had just graduated from college and was wearing a "yellow robe", had the amazing opportunity to live in a familiar yet unfamiliar world. With the powerful talent given by chance, Ye Zhan successfully reached the top of the world, but found that his journey had just begun.
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Official(6)Scraped 1mo ago
In fact, my writing skills are okay, but I'm just afraid of you being a eunuch! After all, you never finish a book, it happens every time! Is it really good?
The sea is full of water. It is rambling here and there. Every chapter has to deviate from the main line and fill a large pot of water. The plot is dragging and incomprehensible.
What did you write? The logic doesn't make sense and the feelings are ungrateful. I'm looking for a mistress.
The outline is very good, but the content is draggy, as if the content is just trying to make up the number of words.
What is written here? If you want to explain, you should finish your words first. Halfway through the exchange, there was a lot of explanation. Finish the conversation after explaining. What the hell? Do you think your writing is good?
The protagonist is so powerful and useless, he can't even protect his own people, the portrayal is too selfish.
From Dr. Wang at the beginning to Feng Qingyang in the middle and those who died on the way to retake Peach Blossom Island, the protagonist is quite selfish and is obviously so strong. In horizontal comparison, if I can do one move for a second, Dongfang Invincible probably only has two or three more moves. It's really funny that so many people died after beating a group of little Karami 😂
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Community(0)
Official(6)Scraped 1mo ago
In fact, my writing skills are okay, but I'm just afraid of you being a eunuch! After all, you never finish a book, it happens every time! Is it really good?
The sea is full of water. It is rambling here and there. Every chapter has to deviate from the main line and fill a large pot of water. The plot is dragging and incomprehensible.
What did you write? The logic doesn't make sense and the feelings are ungrateful. I'm looking for a mistress.
The outline is very good, but the content is draggy, as if the content is just trying to make up the number of words.
What is written here? If you want to explain, you should finish your words first. Halfway through the exchange, there was a lot of explanation. Finish the conversation after explaining. What the hell? Do you think your writing is good?
The protagonist is so powerful and useless, he can't even protect his own people, the portrayal is too selfish.
From Dr. Wang at the beginning to Feng Qingyang in the middle and those who died on the way to retake Peach Blossom Island, the protagonist is quite selfish and is obviously so strong. In horizontal comparison, if I can do one move for a second, Dongfang Invincible probably only has two or three more moves. It's really funny that so many people died after beating a group of little Karami 😂
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