Siheyuan, Was Defeated at the Beginning
by 574981
About This Novel
Is traveling through "Siheyuaner" a piece of cake? No, this is the beginning of the collapse of heaven... People care about their house, and their future is in their hands. There is no system, and they have to face all kinds of calculations. They don't even have the skills to make a living, and they have a large family and relatives to support. Let's see how the protagonist walks out of his life in the beginning of the collapse of heaven...
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Official(3)Scraped 17d ago
After reading a few chapters, it got off to a bad start. Yi Zhonghai's character is a moral god, LYB. What am I seeing? The gangsters in the courtyard and the factory tyrants were the most ruthless and reckless. What about the calculation? What about moral kidnapping?
When I heard Chapter 21, I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist is a complete loser! People have sued you for occupying a state house. You show them the private property certificate and then let them go? Workers in the working-class era are written like wimps by you, and you still hate time-travelers. An old man told you to end this matter right here? What else to write: Not sure if the deaf old lady is a martyr. Are you a time traveler? Haven't read the original work? Haven't read the same article? Even if you haven't seen these, you should have some idea, right? Don't you think about whether that old Bangzi is a martyr?
Not a good start! Especially the dialogue between the protagonist and the protagonist's mother at the beginning. It made me frown a little bit. The protagonist's mother is smart enough to talk to the protagonist! You can also draw inferences from one instance to ask what the protagonist said! Can he be suppressed by Yi Zhonghai? Can you be kidnapped by morality? What's more, there is a neighbor in the courtyard who is similar to the protagonist's home! Wouldn't the protagonist's mother learn to deal with Yi Zhonghai? And there are typos! I don't understand how you, the author, could make typos. Isn't it good to read the plot you wrote over and over again? Go read it silently? Or did you make typos on purpose, and then a lot of people commented and reminded you?
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Official(3)Scraped 17d ago
After reading a few chapters, it got off to a bad start. Yi Zhonghai's character is a moral god, LYB. What am I seeing? The gangsters in the courtyard and the factory tyrants were the most ruthless and reckless. What about the calculation? What about moral kidnapping?
When I heard Chapter 21, I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist is a complete loser! People have sued you for occupying a state house. You show them the private property certificate and then let them go? Workers in the working-class era are written like wimps by you, and you still hate time-travelers. An old man told you to end this matter right here? What else to write: Not sure if the deaf old lady is a martyr. Are you a time traveler? Haven't read the original work? Haven't read the same article? Even if you haven't seen these, you should have some idea, right? Don't you think about whether that old Bangzi is a martyr?
Not a good start! Especially the dialogue between the protagonist and the protagonist's mother at the beginning. It made me frown a little bit. The protagonist's mother is smart enough to talk to the protagonist! You can also draw inferences from one instance to ask what the protagonist said! Can he be suppressed by Yi Zhonghai? Can you be kidnapped by morality? What's more, there is a neighbor in the courtyard who is similar to the protagonist's home! Wouldn't the protagonist's mother learn to deal with Yi Zhonghai? And there are typos! I don't understand how you, the author, could make typos. Isn't it good to read the plot you wrote over and over again? Go read it silently? Or did you make typos on purpose, and then a lot of people commented and reminded you?
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