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About This Novel
A high school student named Xiaoyu's growth path after his life has undergone tremendous changes... Well There should be everything in this novel... ♂@"&?.[.※@Q]" All of them, right? Well... Maybe someone has read "Rebirth and the Return of Peace" Xiaoyu's character is in it The original author has authorized...
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Official(11)Scraped 8d ago
reminder post
Xiaoyu, it's time to update. Look how long it has been since you updated QAQ
While you're still adjusting, here are a few suggestions
About character creation: ① The character image must be done well! The first impression of the character is very important. Unless you want to play with contrasting cuteness, you must finalize the character's personality from the beginning. Moreover, even if you play with contrasting cuteness, you must pay attention to the scale and don't go off track. ② The difference in character personality. You may be a little confused about this, but it is necessary! When you are creating a character, you can first write down the character's personality on paper, and then imagine how the person with this character should handle things, what expressions he likes to use, etc. Wait, for example, a cute girl may be a foodie who likes to be coquettish and cute, or she may have a cold personality. The most common thing she does is to be expressionless, and she will analyze calmly even when encountering big problems. If she is unhappy, she will just snort. You can try more. ③ Regarding character attributes, this may be a bit similar to personality, but you can watch anime, such as Sanwu, which is an attribute (if you don't understand, you can ask Du Niang). Design their attributes for each character. They can be the same, but they must be different in details, so that the characters will be full and readers will not feel that you are just writing about one person. ④ Regarding detail processing, you can design a symbolic action for each character, such as scratching the face when nervous, curling the lips when angry, sneering when feeling ridiculed... It's all OK! But don't add them all to one person, or you won't be able to tell them apart. That's basically it! A good character should be full of flesh and blood. You should treat each character as a child. Whether they are the protagonist, supporting role or villain, they should have shortcomings and advantages. This will make it easier to impress readers.
Update soon...
Look at Xuemo, it was updated almost daily before. I'm looking at you. I'm still putting off updating my code every day. I can't live anymore... (Manual correction)
Generally good, writing style needs to be improved
I'd like to mention some minor issues. First of all, the character image is a bit vague. You have to grasp what personality that character is and whether that character is the main character. Also, words such as villains should not appear in the characters' mouths. They should be described with words such as "enemy" and "friend". Secondly, the pace of the plot is slightly faster. If you want to express the friendship between the Wolf King and the human, you can use longer words to describe it, and remember to be lyrical, so that it can arouse resonance. Of course, I can't find any pitfalls. Since I'm very sensitive to the characters, I have some opinions. Finally, the personality of each character must be well shaped, otherwise it will become stereotyped, that is, each character feels the same, and that's it, come on, kid.
reminder building
Specially used for Give a razor blade to an author who is addicted to Genshin Impact (dog head saves life)
Come on Xiaoyu
Xiaoyu, come on, Xuanming, I'm looking forward to your return. Come on for the high school entrance exam! ! ! Ouch!
calling the author
The author is still online. Please reply and let me take a look.
What about you, the author? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Author, please update quickly. Look at how many books you have published in the same period have been updated.
sweeping graves
It proves that I have visited the tomb several times to commemorate...
School starts tomorrow
Hey, I can't give out recommendation tickets (blade) since school starts tomorrow.
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Community(0)
Official(11)Scraped 8d ago
reminder post
Xiaoyu, it's time to update. Look how long it has been since you updated QAQ
While you're still adjusting, here are a few suggestions
About character creation: ① The character image must be done well! The first impression of the character is very important. Unless you want to play with contrasting cuteness, you must finalize the character's personality from the beginning. Moreover, even if you play with contrasting cuteness, you must pay attention to the scale and don't go off track. ② The difference in character personality. You may be a little confused about this, but it is necessary! When you are creating a character, you can first write down the character's personality on paper, and then imagine how the person with this character should handle things, what expressions he likes to use, etc. Wait, for example, a cute girl may be a foodie who likes to be coquettish and cute, or she may have a cold personality. The most common thing she does is to be expressionless, and she will analyze calmly even when encountering big problems. If she is unhappy, she will just snort. You can try more. ③ Regarding character attributes, this may be a bit similar to personality, but you can watch anime, such as Sanwu, which is an attribute (if you don't understand, you can ask Du Niang). Design their attributes for each character. They can be the same, but they must be different in details, so that the characters will be full and readers will not feel that you are just writing about one person. ④ Regarding detail processing, you can design a symbolic action for each character, such as scratching the face when nervous, curling the lips when angry, sneering when feeling ridiculed... It's all OK! But don't add them all to one person, or you won't be able to tell them apart. That's basically it! A good character should be full of flesh and blood. You should treat each character as a child. Whether they are the protagonist, supporting role or villain, they should have shortcomings and advantages. This will make it easier to impress readers.
Update soon...
Look at Xuemo, it was updated almost daily before. I'm looking at you. I'm still putting off updating my code every day. I can't live anymore... (Manual correction)
Generally good, writing style needs to be improved
I'd like to mention some minor issues. First of all, the character image is a bit vague. You have to grasp what personality that character is and whether that character is the main character. Also, words such as villains should not appear in the characters' mouths. They should be described with words such as "enemy" and "friend". Secondly, the pace of the plot is slightly faster. If you want to express the friendship between the Wolf King and the human, you can use longer words to describe it, and remember to be lyrical, so that it can arouse resonance. Of course, I can't find any pitfalls. Since I'm very sensitive to the characters, I have some opinions. Finally, the personality of each character must be well shaped, otherwise it will become stereotyped, that is, each character feels the same, and that's it, come on, kid.
reminder building
Specially used for Give a razor blade to an author who is addicted to Genshin Impact (dog head saves life)
Come on Xiaoyu
Xiaoyu, come on, Xuanming, I'm looking forward to your return. Come on for the high school entrance exam! ! ! Ouch!
calling the author
The author is still online. Please reply and let me take a look.
What about you, the author? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Author, please update quickly. Look at how many books you have published in the same period have been updated.
sweeping graves
It proves that I have visited the tomb several times to commemorate...
School starts tomorrow
Hey, I can't give out recommendation tickets (blade) since school starts tomorrow.
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