The System Borrows Its Ability from Me

1. The opening is a little bit toxic, and many book lovers should have abandoned the book right away. 2. As a refreshing article, this book is qualified and does not undermine the intelligence. The villain's IQ is online. 3. The protagonist of this book does not have a sister. The recent novels about supporting sisters have made me miserable. So comfortable! ! ! 4. There is no heroine, which is great, and there is no bloody plot, which is great! 5. The background and main line are logical. In a world crisis, there should be no too much incompetence and rational competition. After all, if there is still internal strife in the face of all the races in the world, the human race will be gone long ago!

It's better to just watch or not watch. This kind of routine is suspicious of fake numbers and is disgusting.

I can only say that the paper was not well written. Did you write a paper and publish everything you learned and realized? You don't have any trump cards at all, and let everyone know you?

A hundred years after the world changed, the immortal realm was established. The protagonist only broke through a small realm a few months after becoming a warrior at the age of seventeen, and he turned out to be a genius. The fantasy world breaks through more slowly as time goes by. Those who break through the immortal realm in a hundred years are nothing.

The writing style is relatively simple, and the opening is framed in a routine, without any new ideas, and there are some things that can be mentioned in one stroke, such as that section of the paper. Things that I don't understand or can't write well are described using some very simple adjectives and a shocking style. I know this is a common problem with novice writers, but I still can't help but want to say it, and it makes me sick. Another drawback is that the characterization is too poor. I hope the author understands that what you are writing is a novel. Your characters should speak in a tone that suits their identity. You can minimize psychological descriptions and don't let the characters talk to themselves. Use some expressions or actions or details of the environment to express the characters' psychology. That's all I have to say. I hope the author will write with care and not code words just for the sake of code words, so that there will be less white-knuckle writing that is criticized by people in the Internet literary world.

The early setting was abandoned in the middle. It was said at the beginning that resources were difficult to obtain. After tens of thousands of martial arts points for the first time, it collapsed. The resources were piled up for cultivation. The various visualization diagrams at the beginning were gone in the middle. It was directly converted from Taoism to playing with swords. It looked messy. I changed the map without thinking and started the conspiracy theory under the shadow of Jiuyou. The protagonist destroyed various conspiracies and colleagues to strengthen himself. If he wanted to show that Jiuyou As for the invasion, you have all the worlds in full bloom. Wherever the protagonist goes, the world is attacked, and all other worlds are safe and sound. There is no need to talk about the level of the skills. Just realize it directly. There are all kinds of magical powers, a lot of strange things, and there is no basis for them at all. You are strong as you say, and there are various exchange meetings. After each exchange, the protagonist benefits a lot, but then it cannot be reflected at all later, and many foreshadowings are gone. It is very speechless.

Nothing interesting to see, bland,. . . After reading a few chapters, it wasn't attractive.

It looked okay at first, but then it became more and more confusing. It was so confusing that I couldn't stand it anymore. I could write two or three pages for a small application. It was a great job.

Finally I encountered such a situation once.

Don't write this kind of thing. It's boring, tiring and boring to read. What are you trying to do?