I Opened up the Path of Spiritual Practice on Earth

I couldn't stand it when I read about cultivation, it's so ridiculous! It cost 5 billion yuan to set up a security company and 5 billion yuan to set up a training center. (Author, do you know how high 10 billion is on the ground?) To train these 60 security guards. These security guards range from 75 to 18 years old. They are all old, weak, sick and disabled, and each of them earns a monthly salary of 40,000 yuan! Ordinarily, even with such generous treatment, 10 billion in salary alone would be enough for them to squander for 400 years. After spending 1 billion to buy the most advanced training equipment in the world (60 yoga mats, because no other equipment was used during the training from beginning to end) and teach everyone to practice yoga, are you finally going to tell the truth that your money is Vietnamese dong? When practicing yoga, I prepared some secret recipe medicine for everyone (to put it bluntly, it's just a ginseng soup! There's nothing else except different measurements), and then I experimented with whether it's better to eat it before or after a meal, or whether it's better to feed it while practicing! Is this fucking necessary to experiment? Don't the other two have no effect? ​​What an obvious thing, if someone feeds you, just eat it, and if no one feeds you, just drink it! Is there a difference between 3 and 4? Anyway, it is not equal to 0. Anyway, it has an effect. Use whatever conditions you want! Look at the careful research on this one! Medicinal wine is calculated in milligrams. To summarize: the protagonist spent 10 billion yuan embezzled from the company (suspected to be Vietnamese dong or something, otherwise it would not be so cost-effective.) To hire 60 old, weak and disabled people to conduct experiments on his theory! The theoretical technique he summarized is: lie on the yoga mat and do yoga! You practice such awesome skills, are you planning to destroy the earth?

I would like to give some suggestions to the author. The exercises created by the protagonist have different effects on different people, so the author will follow. Write about some special physiques on the earth and create their own exercises based on the protagonist's exercises, thereby perfecting each path of practice.

How to put it this way, I personally am very neutral when reading books. Good ones are good, and bad ones are bad. Someone in the comment area said that there are many poisonous spots, but they are all relatively small. There are indeed many and small! In the first seven or eight pictures, the female news reporter inexplicably planted an inexplicable seed in the protagonist. It was simply inexplicable! The chance of appearing later is very high, but there is no foreshadowing at all, and some inexplicable feelings arise between the two parties! It's simply inexplicably outrageous! In the book, many people complain that this part is unreasonable and that part is inappropriate, but it is true, but this book is at least in my opinion the overall framework is not bad, so I don't know if there will be a system later, but there is a golden finger... I won't go into details about the plot, but in short, there are indeed a lot of obstacles, but very few. If you don't want to read it, you can skip it. There are almost no poisonous points that will affect the plot of this book, so you don't need to pay attention to it.

I am not a perfect person, and my thoughts cannot represent everyone. However, most book friends think that there is a high probability that there is a real problem. The world has spent some time to modify several toxic places. If you have not read it, you can continue reading. If you have already read it, you do not need to look back. It will not affect the main plot. Thank you for your support. As long as it does not affect the main framework of the issue, please give your opinions. If many people agree, I will change it and make progress together.

Everything else is fine, but can you not write emotional scenes? If you can't write them well, then don't write them!

The advantage is that the subject matter is good, but the disadvantage is that the writing is mediocre and a bit toxic. The most unacceptable thing is the protagonist's dog-like qualities. Do you think women are superior to others?

The subject matter is quite good, but the content is hard to read.

A person who likes to do research and a person who wants to have sex with women when he sees them, these two personalities are very dramatic together! Not considering human nature has always been a common situation among domestic online authors! Although a lot of Internet cool articles were successful at the beginning, that was during the pioneering period of Internet literature, when readers could read pornographic articles to climax. Now that there are so many Internet articles, readers prefer to read stories that can stand up to scrutiny. They are not the kind of plots in ancient times where a dog licker becomes a general and achieves great feats without being feared by the emperor. It is a matter of course for mentally retarded readers! Most good film and television scripts and online novels can withstand scrutiny at the time of the plot, and better ones should consider human nature. After reading novels for so many years, I roughly divide novels into three categories. The first category: the plot is reasonable, can withstand scrutiny, and considers human nature to reflect social phenomena (of course, the above may not allow reaction!). Second Class: The plot is reasonable, can withstand scrutiny, and takes human nature into account. Third level: The plot is reasonable and can withstand scrutiny. If based on this level, online novels would now have a score of over 90%!

This book is already a eunuch and you still have the nerve to promote the new book

I read a novel on my computer a long time ago. I forgot the name of the main character. At the beginning, he was struck by lightning during the Faraday Cage experiment. Later, his wisdom increased significantly, he created the method of cultivating immortals, and even went to another world. However, he stopped updating it halfway through, so you copied it correctly, right?