
I Choose a New Ability Every Seven Days
by East Reflects West And Goes Against
About This Novel
[Invincible, semi-daily] Feng Guyuan gets a weekly selection system, and he can get a special ability every week. Week 1, Option 1: Indestructible Body, Option 2: Dark Summoning Choose the Dark Summoning Technique to summon the three-headed hell dog from the gate of hell, which will bite anyone who disobeys. Week 2, Option 1: Invisibility, Option 2: Hell's Red Black Flame Choose the red and black flames of hell, the strange red and black flames, burning everything in the world. Week 3, option 1: ever-changing, option 2: thunder power Choose thunder powers, control thunder and lightning, and create thunder... Looking at the combined abilities, Feng Guyuan spread his hands helplessly: "I don't want to be invincible! But even if I am invincible, what can I do?"
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Official(38)Scraped 15d ago
good
But there is a poisonous point, that is, the lack of official power
This is not a matter of spraying or not!
The main reason is that the logic you wrote does not conform to the logic at all. It is only suitable for reading as a mindless article.
Everyday life is easy, and the main character is, disaster-ridden, wherever you go, disaster will always follow you?
If you don't know how to write about a killer, don't write about it.
A killer, a world-class killer, but you write him like a gangster
If you can't take it in, what the hell?
What the hell, it seems like I am writing prose, my body and soul are scattered.
suggestion
There are a lot of poisonous points, the identity of the killer is too bad, and the author didn't write it well. (To sum up, it seems to be a short article at the moment. You don't need to read the following obscene words.) The main reason why the author is poisoned is the series of content developed with the protagonist's identity as a killer. The abilities in the article are all okay, but unfortunately, the identity of the killer was not written well (I repeat). If the author has a next book, I really don't recommend writing this thing. |But, to be honest, if you think about it the other way around, even if you abandon the identity of the protagonist as a killer, you will still be criticized by readers. The reason is that the writing is very simple.
bye
It's not suitable for someone like me ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Rating
Community(0)
Official(38)Scraped 15d ago
good
But there is a poisonous point, that is, the lack of official power
This is not a matter of spraying or not!
The main reason is that the logic you wrote does not conform to the logic at all. It is only suitable for reading as a mindless article.
Everyday life is easy, and the main character is, disaster-ridden, wherever you go, disaster will always follow you?
If you don't know how to write about a killer, don't write about it.
A killer, a world-class killer, but you write him like a gangster
If you can't take it in, what the hell?
What the hell, it seems like I am writing prose, my body and soul are scattered.
suggestion
There are a lot of poisonous points, the identity of the killer is too bad, and the author didn't write it well. (To sum up, it seems to be a short article at the moment. You don't need to read the following obscene words.) The main reason why the author is poisoned is the series of content developed with the protagonist's identity as a killer. The abilities in the article are all okay, but unfortunately, the identity of the killer was not written well (I repeat). If the author has a next book, I really don't recommend writing this thing. |But, to be honest, if you think about it the other way around, even if you abandon the identity of the protagonist as a killer, you will still be criticized by readers. The reason is that the writing is very simple.
bye
It's not suitable for someone like me ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
War Commander Without TribulationReview
Warmaster Wujie came to support, and the boss's new book is hot🔥🔥🔥😘😘😘
















