Dou Po: Golden Finger Chooses Three Out of Five, and Tianhu Starts!

I hope not to include Lan Yanran. The main reason is that Xiao Zhan is too good to the protagonist. Nalan Yanran slaps Xiao Zhan in the face in front of so many people. It is disgusting to include Lan Yanran. To be honest, there are so many female characters in the fight. Nalan Yanran is really useless What's the bright spot, and the other party is here to step on your face, I will give you a gift in a moment, as long as you don't accept Lan Yanran, the two from the Yunlan Sect, Yun Yun can only say that it is not disgusting, Nalan Yanran is just disgusting.

I just read a lot of fics. A common problem among fics is that the protagonist is far ahead in terms of realm and so on. Then, even the talented female protagonist in the original novel has become a flower vase and her realm cannot keep up. I want to see how the author can improve their realm. I feel that if I do this well, I can be better than many fics. Turning the talented into vases, even in the wide world, different heroines can choose different sub-professions. For example, Xun'er can become a spiritual formation master, Qing Lin is a natural battle formation master, etc., So that the future forces will not lack any profession, and they are all around them, allowing them to diversify their battles 1. I'm wondering if the protagonist should have a time talent in the middle and later stages to create a secret realm with 10 times the speed, so that the heroines can keep up; 2. Or the time it takes to repair the Sky Tomb [six times faster] can make it appear all the time. When the time comes, it can be placed at the core of the plane [such as the position of the Plane Fetus in Tianxuan Continent], so that there is no shortage of energy, and it can also quickly improve the realm; 3. Or rationally arrange opportunities or inheritance. After all, in ancient times, there were hundreds of emperors in the same era. In the middle and later stages, arrangements should also be made for the heroines, and the realm of the heroines should also be mentioned. Don't let the protagonists fight against the emperors by then. , The heroine is still in Dou Zun, Dou Zong, etc., Let them help the protagonist in the world, even in Dou Qi Continent, help protect the Tao, etc. When the time comes, go to the ancient tribe and help the protagonist to support the scene haha, don't fight alone, form a Dou Qi Continent girl group, we are duty-bound; 4. The protagonist can make elixirs to help improve his realm. After all, when he arrives at the academy, he should fight against the emperor and be at least a seventh-level alchemist. He can make elixirs to quickly improve the realm of the heroines. It is still necessary to repair the Sky Tomb. When the time comes to the Great World, many people will need to transform their spiritual power. With the Sky Tomb's six times speed, the alliance members can complete the transformation within one or two years, and can connect the Dou Qi Continent and the Great World. But don't Dou Qi Continent is moved to the Great Thousand World, so as to avoid assimilating the laws of Dou Qi Continent to the laws of the Great Thousand World. Dou Qi Continent has a characteristic that all other continents do not have, which is the bloodline of Dou Emperor. If someone becomes Dou Emperor, his blood relatives and descendants will be in the realm. It will skyrocket [This will lead to the rapid rise of the super power that the protagonist establishes in the Great Thousand World in the future, quickly catching up with several major ancient tribes in the Great Thousand World, and being surrounded by reliable people from the same continent]. Don't assimilate the rules. When the time comes, you will occupy a super continent. Fighting Qi For those who ascended from the mainland, if the protagonist has a time talent, they will assimilate spiritual power in the time secret realm built by the protagonist. If the sky tomb is repaired, the sky tomb will be used as a transfer station. The Dou Qi continent will ascend and the sky tomb will transform spiritual power to the super continent occupied by the protagonist.

I hope you won't accept Yafei. I don't know what use Yafei has except as a vase.

I started testing the waters at 0 o'clock today. I beg all readers to follow up and read it. Thank you with fists in arms. In addition, if you have any other questions about the heroine and the plot, you can ask me here. I will see them all and will reply when I see them.

Read the reviews before reading the book. You can look forward to the future (I read the heroine part. Yun Yun is a dead ringer in the heroine plan. If you don't like this, you can leave it. If you can accept it, it's no problem. Personally, I can barely accept it. To be honest, Yun Yun's character and behavior in the original work are really unpleasant. Especially the incident with the Yun Lan Sect immediately ruined my goodwill. I said that I could either help Xiao Yan or the sect, or not help both. In the end, I was like a loser in both directions. That is to say, now that I have read more books, a person with Yun Yun's character and behavior is no longer a poisonous point for me.)

Based on my many years of experience reading fandoms, the early stages of upgrading are too fast. The author should prepare to lower the level, and then talk about how many levels to absorb the strange fire. I suggest you don't do it. This is a poisonous point and will dissuade a lot of people. There is a vast world behind it. Then, if the author can write emotional scenes well, he can add some daily life. , Dou Po can find strange fires that are not specifically described in the original work to absorb, or find ancient ruins, which contain ancient soul attack fighting skills. Now the writing is about the protagonist's physical fight. In fact, if you want to write about almighty, without the soul attack inheritance, there is a body, a fighting skill, and a soul. This three cultivations of spirit, energy, and spirit are omnipotent.

So far, it seems that the author has written well, and the emotional drama is also very comfortable to watch. However, there are too few chapters. I will come back to read it after I have saved up to 100 chapters.

1. I feel that the earth-level intermediate body fighting skills are too rubbish. Shunpo feels no different from the original Xuan-level explosive step. This earth-level intermediate is too ridiculous. I feel that it can at least be teleported to qualify as an earth-level intermediate. 2. The attack is too single. It is just the hot punch from the beginning to the end. What I like is that the fighting skills are not too good. There is no need to practice a lot of Xuan level fighting skills. But the bad point is that from the beginning to the end, it is just punching to the flesh, and it is still short distance. After watching too much, it feels that there is no strength at all. It is no different from fighting in the fighting spirit stage. Look at the Ice King, I don't know if he is strong or not, Xuanbing Longxiang Is it really handsome, or from a distance? Now I feel that the protagonist uses all physical strength. After cultivating the fighting spirit, it is the same as without cultivating. There is no special effect attack [long-range], and there is no weird attack [soul, this is a bit over the standard, it will be fine later, look at the Immortal Rebellion King Lin Jijing's consciousness, the word "death" is really handsome], and there is no weapon attack [weapon, determine the protagonist's character early] Type of weapon. If you don't like a ruler, let's choose a gun or a sword. After choosing a sword, there is the Heavenly Emperor Sword in the world. You can be original when choosing a gun. Finally, the gun can be cultivated as a life magic weapon and turned into a peerless holy object. It is also very handsome. Don't use a whole glove as a weapon😎😎😎]. Then as long as it is a sparring competition and does not involve life and death, you can compare the body with those who cultivate the body, and practice Pharmacists compete in refining medicine, compete with those who are good at weapons, and the funniest thing is competing in soul attacks with soul clans😎, and the earth-level intermediate body skill Shunpo is so bad, I believe you even if you say it is yellow-level body skill, it just speeds up, and then fights hand-to-hand, it gives people the impression that the protagonist cultivates the body, and does not know anything else, and there is no difference between fighting between Dou Wang and Dou Qi.

I would like to ask you a very sincere question here. In your long career of reading online articles, is Xiao Yan one of the most charismatic characters? In other words, do you like Xiao Yan? I like to watch Dou Po, and I also like to read Dou Po fandom. There are very few authors who write that the protagonist becomes Xiao Yan himself. Why? Because Xiao Yan is a very charming person. In other words, I don't think someone like me can do Xiao Yan well. Xiao Yan has almost always been in adversity in his life. Even in the world, he still shoulders his own mission. Persevere and forge ahead despite setbacks. So I hate fan writing that replaces Xiao Yan. The only exception is the one called "There's something wrong with my heroine". Because although the protagonist in this book has innate intelligence advantages, he still needs to risk his life and even faces a greater crisis than the original protagonist. I like writing it this way. Big brother, you are replacing Emperor Yan. You can't do worse than him, even if you don't do better than him. Sorry, I don't like this book. So I want to ask everyone, why do you like this kind of book?

Dou Di's inheritance is a bit lame, and how could Yao Lao not see the skills you use to train your body? There are a lot of loopholes. I hope they can be corrected.