
Create the First Holy Place in the World
by Nine Siming
About This Novel
Xiao Feng, Sun Wukong, Ye Fan... The characters have been successfully transformed... The world of Zhetian, the world of Journey to the West... The world has been successfully embodied... The virtual has been transformed into reality, and everything has been embodied. My purpose is very simple, to make this world no longer monotonous and to make the world more exciting. Create the first holy place in the world.
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Official(256)Scraped 21d ago
If you like someone, you don't have to love them; but the prerequisite for loving someone is that you must like them. Like can easily turn into love, but after falling in love, it is difficult to say that you like someone again. Because liking is tolerant; but love is selfish. Like is a relaxed and indifferent state of mind. But love is too heavy. Once love is spoken, it becomes a vow, a commitment. "Hold your hand and grow old together", just eight words contain so much ups and downs! When you stand in front of the person you love, your heartbeat will speed up; But when you stand in front of the person you like, you only feel happy; When you make eye contact with the person you love, you will be shy; But when you make eye contact with the person you like, you will only smile; When you talk to the person you love, you find it difficult to speak; But when you talk to the person you like, you can speak freely; When the person you love cries, you will cry with her; But when the person you like cries, you will comfort her skillfully; when you don't want to love someone anymore... You have to close your eyes and hold back the tears... But when you don't want to like someone anymore... You just need to cover your ears. In the same topic, someone also replied: "Like is a light love, love is a deep liking....
I wonder if it will be a eunuch. Let's raise it first! They are old friends! I still want a role. I wonder if the author still remembers me?
If you don't want eunuch ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ, can you update a few more chapters every day?
............................................................ What novel will be published next? Can I give you some spoilers?
There is something wrong with the settings
The author's setting is poisonous. For example, I don't know what the author thinks about Fighting Saint versus Titled Douluo. "Seeing the gods and not breaking" in Dragon Snake Romance corresponds to the realm of creation, but it corresponds to the top of the sky, which is the fighting master in Dou Po. The great fighting master condenses the fighting spirit into armor, which means that the fighting spirit is solid. Dou Ling, Dou Qi is solid, forming a sea urchin, Dou Qi possesses spirituality, Fighting King, fighting spirit turns into wings, soars into the sky, breaks away from the gravity of heaven and earth, Douhuang, one man forms an army, and has the ability to overwhelm rivers and seas. Douzong, initially controls space and can create space locks. Dou Zun can travel through space and create space storms (one to nine stars, one to nine turns, third-level semi-saint) Dou Sheng can open up a space for people to live in. Six-star Dou Sheng can move space. The peak bloodline of Dou Sheng begins to mutate. The Dou Emperor is above the heaven and the earth. The space between his hands and feet is shattered. His true body is ten thousand feet long. (However, it is impossible for the Dou Emperor to belong to the same level as the Dou Sheng. The original book says that even the ten thousand Dou Saints at their peak cannot injure the Soul Emperor who has just reached the emperor realm.) Celestial Immortal, (the Great Emperor of Red Dust, legend, god, man of the universe is this), the Celestial Immortal is perfect, possessing the physical body can destroy the power of the universe. Note: I'm confused, why do many settings have to be perfect, and the author has to create a poisonous setting by himself? If you want to just make a simple and mindless novel, that's fine, but you are not just being brainless.
Does this system help the host or other people? Damn it. Giving people the feeling of putting the cart before the horse
Does this system help the host or other people? Damn it. Giving people the feeling of putting the cart before the horse
Written to the author, the protagonist Tai Cai
Is the strength of this protagonist too low? The other protagonists, not to mention Hongmeng, have been rising steadily for a few years, so the strength of this protagonist should be improved! Moreover, the protagonist's strength is low and there are few scenes. Let alone being with the great god of the three realms. There are no scenes at all in the current few chapters.
concrete order
Write down the world or characters you want to embody. At the same time, it can also open up your imagination. For example, you can express your thoughts freely about how you want to embody this world, change the plot, change the characters, or anything else.
The force value is too low
The quasi-emperors are all existences that destroy heaven and earth, which gives people the feeling that fantasy is written as low-level martial arts.
What the hell
You don't have the strength to fight against powerful people. Even the neutral people in this book are brainless and have no trump card at all. They are so arrogant even if they were slapped to death by others.
This book has collapsed
The early reading was good and quite interesting, but the description of the activities used too many words, too detailed and cumbersome. The activities are necessary, and the pig's feet and the sect are the main ones. The result is just the opposite. The chapters of the activities are basically skipped, and there are too many concrete characters. The author's writing style and ideas can't handle such a large scene, which makes the book feel very messy, with a little here and there. In short, this book has been written by the author!
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Official(256)Scraped 21d ago
If you like someone, you don't have to love them; but the prerequisite for loving someone is that you must like them. Like can easily turn into love, but after falling in love, it is difficult to say that you like someone again. Because liking is tolerant; but love is selfish. Like is a relaxed and indifferent state of mind. But love is too heavy. Once love is spoken, it becomes a vow, a commitment. "Hold your hand and grow old together", just eight words contain so much ups and downs! When you stand in front of the person you love, your heartbeat will speed up; But when you stand in front of the person you like, you only feel happy; When you make eye contact with the person you love, you will be shy; But when you make eye contact with the person you like, you will only smile; When you talk to the person you love, you find it difficult to speak; But when you talk to the person you like, you can speak freely; When the person you love cries, you will cry with her; But when the person you like cries, you will comfort her skillfully; when you don't want to love someone anymore... You have to close your eyes and hold back the tears... But when you don't want to like someone anymore... You just need to cover your ears. In the same topic, someone also replied: "Like is a light love, love is a deep liking....
I wonder if it will be a eunuch. Let's raise it first! They are old friends! I still want a role. I wonder if the author still remembers me?
If you don't want eunuch ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ, can you update a few more chapters every day?
............................................................ What novel will be published next? Can I give you some spoilers?
There is something wrong with the settings
The author's setting is poisonous. For example, I don't know what the author thinks about Fighting Saint versus Titled Douluo. "Seeing the gods and not breaking" in Dragon Snake Romance corresponds to the realm of creation, but it corresponds to the top of the sky, which is the fighting master in Dou Po. The great fighting master condenses the fighting spirit into armor, which means that the fighting spirit is solid. Dou Ling, Dou Qi is solid, forming a sea urchin, Dou Qi possesses spirituality, Fighting King, fighting spirit turns into wings, soars into the sky, breaks away from the gravity of heaven and earth, Douhuang, one man forms an army, and has the ability to overwhelm rivers and seas. Douzong, initially controls space and can create space locks. Dou Zun can travel through space and create space storms (one to nine stars, one to nine turns, third-level semi-saint) Dou Sheng can open up a space for people to live in. Six-star Dou Sheng can move space. The peak bloodline of Dou Sheng begins to mutate. The Dou Emperor is above the heaven and the earth. The space between his hands and feet is shattered. His true body is ten thousand feet long. (However, it is impossible for the Dou Emperor to belong to the same level as the Dou Sheng. The original book says that even the ten thousand Dou Saints at their peak cannot injure the Soul Emperor who has just reached the emperor realm.) Celestial Immortal, (the Great Emperor of Red Dust, legend, god, man of the universe is this), the Celestial Immortal is perfect, possessing the physical body can destroy the power of the universe. Note: I'm confused, why do many settings have to be perfect, and the author has to create a poisonous setting by himself? If you want to just make a simple and mindless novel, that's fine, but you are not just being brainless.
Does this system help the host or other people? Damn it. Giving people the feeling of putting the cart before the horse
Does this system help the host or other people? Damn it. Giving people the feeling of putting the cart before the horse
Written to the author, the protagonist Tai Cai
Is the strength of this protagonist too low? The other protagonists, not to mention Hongmeng, have been rising steadily for a few years, so the strength of this protagonist should be improved! Moreover, the protagonist's strength is low and there are few scenes. Let alone being with the great god of the three realms. There are no scenes at all in the current few chapters.
concrete order
Write down the world or characters you want to embody. At the same time, it can also open up your imagination. For example, you can express your thoughts freely about how you want to embody this world, change the plot, change the characters, or anything else.
The force value is too low
The quasi-emperors are all existences that destroy heaven and earth, which gives people the feeling that fantasy is written as low-level martial arts.
What the hell
You don't have the strength to fight against powerful people. Even the neutral people in this book are brainless and have no trump card at all. They are so arrogant even if they were slapped to death by others.
This book has collapsed
The early reading was good and quite interesting, but the description of the activities used too many words, too detailed and cumbersome. The activities are necessary, and the pig's feet and the sect are the main ones. The result is just the opposite. The chapters of the activities are basically skipped, and there are too many concrete characters. The author's writing style and ideas can't handle such a large scene, which makes the book feel very messy, with a little here and there. In short, this book has been written by the author!
















