Super God Starts from Pioneering

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First of all, this is a typo. 🙄 Secondly, the storyline needs to be carefully considered. Although it is relatively compact, currently it does not take advantage of Zhou Kai's six consecutive championships. Zhou Kai can play for someone, but after the system is added, he directly relies on the system, which is a bit confusing. A book has to explain the personality of the protagonist. What happens after Zhou Kai fails seven times in a row and walks away free and easy? Suddenly there is an emotional line that has nothing to do with the plot. Something like this can be a small breaking point. A girl of 17 or 18 years old meets by chance in the game. The protagonist pretends to be cool and then tells him that you are not good enough for me, girl. Furthermore, since it is the No. 1 Player who has to do something, but this thing is not done well and the later players appear abruptly without any excessiveness. The first copy of Desert Shadow has no highlights at all, and the special code fails. Who gets the reward after the failure? (Complain about that Zhao Yun, and sacrifice other trash fish that have no sense of presence and are superfluous.) Finally, writing the system flow in this way neither highlights the awesomeness of the system nor the personality of the protagonist. It is a bit of a one-pot rhythm. Maybe the author wanted to set the stage, but in the end he lost the watermelon and failed to pick up the sesame seeds, which was quite embarrassing. In fact, my personal opinion is that the first dungeon can highlight the power of Zhou Kai's six consecutive championships, and then crush a wave of newbies to gain qualifications and exchange for glory coins. After all, you said at the beginning that you should be the first to reach the novice city. For example, the first person to arrive at the novice city is the strongest, and then he deceives a wave of other novices. Isn't it good for him to pretend to be B perfectly? But you end up having an innate advantage by defeating monsters, but it was wasted and nothing was accomplished. It really gives me a headache. You can completely let Zhou Kai swipe a wave of novice monsters and pretend to be the best in economy. The system text is to be fun. If the cheat you open is to be beaten, then it will definitely be an immortal rhythm in the end. (I have discussed this cheat with Dizi a lot, but it is difficult to control in the later stage, so it can only be invincible😕😕.) In the end, getting the first economic ranking can not only open up the equipment purchase system, but also allow you to slap your face in the real world. After all, you have launched the recharge system without explaining anything. I have to write a separate article to complain about your skills, which are so complicated that I can't remember any of them. This is really embarrassing. 😓😓 There is one thing that the author may not understand about the pleasure of system flow. It is pleasure, and it is crushing like a domineering president. After all, Zhou Kai has the privilege of playing for others in the league. There is no reason why the protagonist No. 1 Player cannot defy the odds. It is obvious that you have the ability to travel between games and reality, and it cannot be wasted. However, the structure and rules of the game world are not explained here at all, which is obviously a huge failure. (At least you have to explain the rules of the game, such as being killed, locked up in a dark room, being dominated, etc. 🤗.) In the end, you summarized it in one sentence, getting rid of the story in your heart. (For example, the chapter "You Are a Good Guy" was extremely wasteful, and in the next chapter there was an inexplicably blocked love line.) Let's talk about your fight with the girl who got the book of shadows for no reason, but in the end you still relied on the system. You are so coquettish that you are trying to catch the king, so why can't you use your Kaihuang skills to make me remember that Zhou Kai can also rely on himself and have his own strengths? In the end, someone just gave a spirit beast as a gift. The spirit beast could have been a surprise. The protagonist would be the first to get the spirit beast, or skin it directly to make armor. After all, it ignored physical defense, so why did they just give it away properly? What you wrote is that people use it to deceive and deceive people, and the special code is a level 17 boss (the special code is a level 17 to deceive a level 6 person and lose the protagonist's aura. This is not how to use it.) Forget it if I run away, I thought it would be fun to stay as the heroine, but in the end I became a tailor-made mercenary boss, and even had my special code to be crushed... (Author Yu Jie Control?) In the end, I felt that there were too many complaints and I couldn't write any more. Anyway, these are my personal opinions, so don't blame me if you don't like it. Come on and update, the road is long. 🤞

As for the book, overall it's okay to read. Leave it to pass the time

I found this book, but I was actually looking for other novels. Have you heard of the book Son of Light? This is the work of the Third Young Master of the Tang family. I searched for Son of Light at that time, and then scrolled down and saw the character in your book. There is a Son of Light in it, and it happens to be the kind of book about game competition that I like, so I must follow it to the end.

I have given you all my recommendation votes these days. Am I not level two? There are only two recommendation tickets every day. I have given you two recommendation tickets. It will be the same in the future. I bet that it will become popular in the future. Now I will leave my name here first.

This book is pretty good. Can I update it here? ←_←

Modern romance, well, you can write it, or you don't have to write it, because romance doesn't attract boys now. For games like this book, well, you know 😄, you can write the kind where the male protagonist is handsome, like Long Aotian, it's best to be modern. , In ancient times and now, it is not very popular, it is funny, there is no funny novel (´｡･v･｡｀) You can write the kind that is all-inclusive, all-round, and the kind of light novel is also good (≧∇≦*) Anyway, the kind of history Don't write anymore. I originally wanted to write about history. However, I had to search for a lot of information, and the adaptation was not random. Some people would make random comments below. The most successful one of this kind of history is probably Yashe. One article at a time is fine, but it's better to have a main plot. Of course, I mainly like light novels, such as heroes, which I have long since stopped being, the retired life of the king of martial arts, the city lord and so on. ... Wait I mainly like SF light novels, what he writes, wow, it's so, so good (✪▽✪) because he has adapted comics and fan art, and they have also drawn some pictures of the protagonists themselves. Of course, this is not forced, after all, that I prefer to watch the kind that is modern, and the content is not modern romance. After all, I am not a rotten girl. What I like to watch is the kind that is very good, or very enjoyable to watch. Long Aotian, the male protagonist, of course, it is up to you whether you listen to my suggestions or not. You are actually not bad! ^Ω^It's just a bit boring Of course, the name of the novel is the most important. Unless your novel is very good and is on the homepage, otherwise it is best not to use traditional Chinese characters, otherwise you will regret it. For the kind of novel that is often searched, it is best to use the name. Otherwise, for example, I want to search for some novels, but I can't find the ones I like, just because of their names.