
Picked up an Alien on the Road
by Shiva Shadow
About This Novel
"I come from the distant Nebula M78 and was ordered to inspect the Earth. Ugly human being, if you help me, I will give you everything. Because I am omnipotent." The green native dog spoke with cold and domineering lines, but wagging his tail. Hao Youming looked at the green dog he picked up and fell into deep thought. Does it turn out that the legendary alien looks a lot like a green dog? Isn't it an insult to nature to look so ugly? Also, isn't the M78 Nebula the hometown of Ultraman? The game starts with a dog, and it's a chicken-soup story. It's a little refreshing, mainly through watering. Click on the dragon-slaying alien dog to give it away. If you are a brother, come and collect it!
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Official(7)Scraped 1d ago
High, really high, I picked up an alien on the road. 😘
I just like to read sand sculptures, let's make sand sculptures together
Immature tips
I read a lot, but then my desire to pursue it gradually faded away. After reading the full text again, I came to the following thoughts as a reader. The author's writing style is great. Nowadays, when novels are popular, you can even see some sentences that are obviously very philosophical. So I think it's totally fine to write a novel in terms of writing style. The problem lies in the overall plot connection and the author, what kind of story do you want to write? At the beginning, when Green Dog said that it would investigate human anecdotes, I thought that this book would be in the form of a unit, using anecdotal branches one after another to slowly build a large human fantasy framework. But suddenly a ghost catcher appeared Okay, fantasy and paranormal are very similar in nature, so using the identity of a ghost hunter to bring out anecdotes is also an interesting way. I am also looking forward to the following developments. But an even stranger funeral parlor came out But when I thought about it carefully, the funeral parlor was supernatural and fantastic enough, and a place like this complemented the Ghost Hunters perfectly. When I saw this, I thought that the preparations for it had been long enough, and the anecdotal drama that I had been longing for was about to begin. But no The protagonist suddenly left his job and went to the mountains to find a big black moth with blue blood. At this point, the development of the story finally became fantastic and suspenseful, and occasionally there were some small supernatural beings. But the story of alien civilization wandering on the earth can no longer be said to be an earthly curiosity. Although the matter of catching giant moths is forcibly related to ghost hunters, it still has nothing to do with the funeral parlor. At this point, the story has completely deviated from its main line, and it can also be said that all the foreshadowing has been wasted. After all, it may be that the author has not thought about what kind of story he wants to write, otherwise he would not let the protagonist linger in different scenes. But if you think about it carefully, with nearly 300,000 words, he has not accomplished one thing yet. It's a pity According to the author's writing style, if there is a through-line and a fast-paced story series, I think it will have a better result.
I read a bit, the writing is good, but the main line is too long.
I'll give you six chapters of recommendation tickets Gan Gan Gan Gan Gan
So funny hahahahahahaha
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Community(0)
Official(7)Scraped 1d ago
High, really high, I picked up an alien on the road. 😘
I just like to read sand sculptures, let's make sand sculptures together
Immature tips
I read a lot, but then my desire to pursue it gradually faded away. After reading the full text again, I came to the following thoughts as a reader. The author's writing style is great. Nowadays, when novels are popular, you can even see some sentences that are obviously very philosophical. So I think it's totally fine to write a novel in terms of writing style. The problem lies in the overall plot connection and the author, what kind of story do you want to write? At the beginning, when Green Dog said that it would investigate human anecdotes, I thought that this book would be in the form of a unit, using anecdotal branches one after another to slowly build a large human fantasy framework. But suddenly a ghost catcher appeared Okay, fantasy and paranormal are very similar in nature, so using the identity of a ghost hunter to bring out anecdotes is also an interesting way. I am also looking forward to the following developments. But an even stranger funeral parlor came out But when I thought about it carefully, the funeral parlor was supernatural and fantastic enough, and a place like this complemented the Ghost Hunters perfectly. When I saw this, I thought that the preparations for it had been long enough, and the anecdotal drama that I had been longing for was about to begin. But no The protagonist suddenly left his job and went to the mountains to find a big black moth with blue blood. At this point, the development of the story finally became fantastic and suspenseful, and occasionally there were some small supernatural beings. But the story of alien civilization wandering on the earth can no longer be said to be an earthly curiosity. Although the matter of catching giant moths is forcibly related to ghost hunters, it still has nothing to do with the funeral parlor. At this point, the story has completely deviated from its main line, and it can also be said that all the foreshadowing has been wasted. After all, it may be that the author has not thought about what kind of story he wants to write, otherwise he would not let the protagonist linger in different scenes. But if you think about it carefully, with nearly 300,000 words, he has not accomplished one thing yet. It's a pity According to the author's writing style, if there is a through-line and a fast-paced story series, I think it will have a better result.
I read a bit, the writing is good, but the main line is too long.
I'll give you six chapters of recommendation tickets Gan Gan Gan Gan Gan
So funny hahahahahahaha















