I Created the World of Cultivating Immortals
by Ayeye
About This Novel
A game about cultivating and building immortals, actually takes players through time? I was selected into the lowest plane, and with the cultivation system of the immortal plane, I not only have to practice hard and strive to be a role model, but also secretly shoulder the responsibility of constructing the plane. Alas, other people who travel through time can still be ordinary people no matter how bad they are, but I was born a beggar. You want me to slowly play it as a leisure and development game? Don't be kidding, these must be used as the basis for assessment. Quarterly assessment, annual assessment, if you are not careful, it will be wiped out. Only by completing the ultimate goal can you get the qualification to travel back alive and 100 million yuan. You ask me about challenge time? Indefinitely! Now... The game begins!
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Official(11)Scraped 1mo ago
I'm already the master of the plane, and you're giving me a reward of 100 million? The mission has no time limit and no punishment, so why do I do the mission when I am at the peak of my life? Has the author finished junior high school?
Why can't Meng Tianlai absorb the castable spiritual energy? Is it because this plane is a first-level plane and too low-level, so he can't absorb it? Or is it because there is something wrong with the body of the person he traveled to?
To be honest, the reward for this task is not worth it. Of course, this is just my opinion. After all, the task is definitely not something that can be completed in three or two days. It may take a lot of time, and Meng Tianlai should be very tired during this period.
This of yours is too much like creating a super fantasy
You are too much like creating a super fantasy, and the protagonist you wrote is not domineering at all, and your protagonist is too unfair. They are said to be selfless, but the protagonist you wrote feels that he is always on the side of the good people, and does not give benefits to the hostile side. Alas, the more I read, the more angry I get.
The subject matter does not match the article.
It just doesn't feel like creating a fantasy world. It's more like the protagonist was slapped in the face by a certain system. You need to write about farming. Or behind the scenes. None of them match. The first sense will tend to be pretentious. For a reward of 100 million. To be honest, I'd rather not reply. Wouldn't it be nice to be king and dominate in another world? Here's what the author looks like.
Isn't this just creating a super fantasy? ? ?
What's the difference? They're made from the same mold.
Get on the couch! Haven't watched it yet
After reading for a long time, I still don't understand what the author wants to express! So messy
This writing is so messy! I really don't enjoy reading it! The author has no outline?
Character names are always wrong. There are some things that were not explained clearly at the end, but at least there was no eunuch.
This... Can you be a little creative and create a super fantasy version? ?
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Official(11)Scraped 1mo ago
I'm already the master of the plane, and you're giving me a reward of 100 million? The mission has no time limit and no punishment, so why do I do the mission when I am at the peak of my life? Has the author finished junior high school?
Why can't Meng Tianlai absorb the castable spiritual energy? Is it because this plane is a first-level plane and too low-level, so he can't absorb it? Or is it because there is something wrong with the body of the person he traveled to?
To be honest, the reward for this task is not worth it. Of course, this is just my opinion. After all, the task is definitely not something that can be completed in three or two days. It may take a lot of time, and Meng Tianlai should be very tired during this period.
This of yours is too much like creating a super fantasy
You are too much like creating a super fantasy, and the protagonist you wrote is not domineering at all, and your protagonist is too unfair. They are said to be selfless, but the protagonist you wrote feels that he is always on the side of the good people, and does not give benefits to the hostile side. Alas, the more I read, the more angry I get.
The subject matter does not match the article.
It just doesn't feel like creating a fantasy world. It's more like the protagonist was slapped in the face by a certain system. You need to write about farming. Or behind the scenes. None of them match. The first sense will tend to be pretentious. For a reward of 100 million. To be honest, I'd rather not reply. Wouldn't it be nice to be king and dominate in another world? Here's what the author looks like.
Isn't this just creating a super fantasy? ? ?
What's the difference? They're made from the same mold.
Get on the couch! Haven't watched it yet
After reading for a long time, I still don't understand what the author wants to express! So messy
This writing is so messy! I really don't enjoy reading it! The author has no outline?
Character names are always wrong. There are some things that were not explained clearly at the end, but at least there was no eunuch.
This... Can you be a little creative and create a super fantasy version? ?
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