Samsara Paradise: Shadow King

I always feel that when fanfic writers write derivative fanfics, they stay too close to the original work. I haven't read so many anime and manga, and the authors are making me a little confused. I didn't know some of the original plot, and I was very confused when I watched it. Suggestions: 1: When introducing the world, the introduction is slightly detailed (or it can be interpreted from the perspective of Pig's Foot, such as marking who is Pig's Foot, how far away it is from the original Pig's Foot's strongest period, etc.) Two: deviate from the main line of the original work, or follow the original line, but clearly avoid the pig's feet and don't take up too much space, otherwise readers will still be confused.

First of all, I would like to thank all my book friends for their support, which has made this book come to this point. I really need to give you a thumbs up to improve my performance day by day! Without everyone's tolerance for my poor writing, childish plot, and data and settings that cannot stand scrutiny, I really admire everyone's good temper! You didn't scold me so much! This book will be recommended tomorrow (the 5th). I also hope that both new and old book friends can be more patient with this book. I will polish the plot as much as possible to make the quality of this book better and better. Regarding the question of whether I will be a eunuch? Everyone has always cared about it, and I also know that there are many fans who have promised not to be eunuchs but still had their wonderful stories cut in half one day. But I still want to make a promise to everyone: "Reincarnation Paradise: King of Shadows", as my first novel, will repay your companionship in a complete form. Zhao Zijin's journey will not stop at any of the plots in the early, middle and late stages of the paradise. In order to make everyone relax, let me reveal a little bit. In my outline, the protagonist and the shadow soldiers will re-enact an extremely grand battle in the later stage. The participants in the battle are of high status, and it is a major event that everyone will be familiar with. Finally, the book club group has been established. Welcome everyone to join the group!

Are you good at naming names? Renhua Festival! ! ! !

People were still burning, so they rushed to send me away in the comment area... Are those guys who shouted "Qaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay" to their brains, or do they really have no other words to describe me and won't write it?

Start revising from scratch. You can read the new article marked with (new). Some errors have been corrected and some plots have been enriched.

A world has been written in the first six chapters. The origin of the protagonist has not been explained, and the origin of the amnesia ability has not been explained. In the seventh chapter, it is said that the world will be left in four hours and then it returns to the real world inexplicably. The name has been changed and cannot be linked to the previous one. Summary: Send one

Due to various aspects of my work and life, I don't have much time to update this book. I would like to apologize to all the book friends. I will try my best to publish a chapter in two or three days. But don't worry, this is my first book. No matter how bad the data is, no matter how unfavorable it is, I will finish it and will never cut it. Finally, I would like to ask weakly, is there any book lover who wants to be the operating officer of this book?

I don't understand. I'm not familiar with it. Could you please give me something familiar?

Very well written! But why do I feel like there are so few readers? I can hardly find paragraph reviews. Does QQ Reading have a book recommendation function? In addition, I feel that the protagonist's own combat capabilities are a bit hard to describe. As for machinery... Do you want a laser sword or something like a laser sniper rifle? (I'm just talking)

What kind of silly stuff are you writing about? The first world was all background introduction. After the first world ended, it was said that the next one would start in four hours. I was very anxious at first, but then I suddenly returned to reality and stayed there for three days, and even got a cat? The name of the protagonist has also changed. At first it was called Lu Ming, but after returning to reality it became Zhao Zizhao. I thought I made a mistake, so I skipped to the back to see if it was still called this name?