The Dragon Clan: Drawing the Sword to Pull the Falling Cherry Blossoms

The ending gives me a question, what kind of bullshit ending is that? The hero and heroine are getting married. Did they wake up or not? Nothing happened. Author, you will be a bachelor for the rest of your life. That's what I said.

It's getting more and more ridiculous... The plot is getting more and more outrageous as it goes on. I want to tell the author that Chu Zihang's choice when he was 15 years old was to run away. If you insist on writing that he stayed and fought for his life, I won't say anything. But Deadpool has already surrounded them and the two of them are still fighting each other. And Deadpool shouldn't have gone straight to it. Where are you watching the excitement? Are you a crowd? ? Odin has almost made a few people belch. Why are you talking nonsense? It can only be said that it feels like you are using too much force. In addition, your equivalent exchange relies on Chu Tianjiao's 50% dragon bloodline to exchange for the Eye of Odin and the spiritual elements accumulated for thousands of years? I can only say that this setting is awesome. In the end, Lu Mingfei was in the same class as Chen Wenwen and Su Qiangwei in Lanzhuang Middle School. It was in high school. Before writing a fanfic, read the original work carefully.

When I write about the Dragon Clan, I write about the Dragon Clan well, and I wrote more than 10 chapters about basketball. Then why are you writing a dragon fanfic?

Isn't the author Eri Yi good? Why not choose painted pear clothes?

It was well written, but I thought it was written about Lu Mingfei. When I saw it, I thought it was to save Eli Yi for Lu Mingfei. If that's the case, it would be perfect. But you created a time-travel protagonist, and Lu Mingfei's role is very small, so the appeal is greatly reduced😙😙. The bad boy is the character with the strongest sense of empathy, and Eri is the most regrettable character.

In fact, there is no direct connection between the number of words per day and the details of the plot design. From a reader's perspective, even if it is not limited to the original work, there are indeed many problems in the plot design. For example, Chu Tianjiao's part is really dragging. The relationship between the three people feels too deliberate. The two brothers are in danger and duel Deadpool to watch and wait for them to finish fighting before running away. There is really a lot to complain about. In terms of details, is a Maybach really broken after running for half a year? Can it still be driven? And the Eye of Odin is so easy to exchange for Chu Tianjiao's bloodline? Then you can replace it with any Deadpool... You have to write it as using the contents of the box in exchange for him not escaping due to other reasons. It is more reasonable. And the part where Odin appears is actually really redundant. It's not that the work cannot have flaws, but there are really many places. In fact, it is very obvious to the senses when reading. I still hope that the author will have some new ideas in the following content.

I haven't watched it for just a few days and you've already finished it for me? ? ?

Why do people always say that I am weak? I have never seen Shui Wen still racking his brains and being exhausted like me. I tested it online and found that my Chinese character typing speed is 5,000 words per hour. If I really need more water, I can do 20,000 words per day.

I think the stories about the supporting characters are very well written, and the supporting characters are also brought to life instead of mainly focusing on the protagonist. People who talk about water may not be used to this type of thing.

Inside the Nibelungen, all the deadpools gathered around, but the two brothers were still fighting each other. I won't go into details, but in the new chapter, they actually thought about giving away their daughter.