A Check-in Journey Starting from Douluo
by Never Again
About This Novel
Check in to the Martial Soul Awakening Hall in Holy Soul Village and obtain the Martial Soul [Tianhuang Halberd] and [Chaos Holy Dragon] Old Jack shouted: "It's impossible. Your parents' martial arts are just sickles and hoes. How can your martial arts be so strong?" Check in to Shrek Academy and get [Yi Jin Jing] [Heavenly Halberd Technique] Comparing with the gods with a mortal body! Check in the Ice and Fire Eyes, get it? ? ? Check in to the Wuhun Hall and get it? ? ? Check in... From then on, Chu Yun relied on the punch-in system to embark on the road to dominate the world!
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Official(19)Scraped 7d ago
The author gives some suggestions
I hope to torture Tang San, but I don't want to blindly criticize him. Those who hate Tang San without brains are so written that it makes me tired to read them. The protagonists I wrote are obviously more selfish, but they have no brains. I also hope that there will be a story about leaving Shrek in the middle and a completely self-created plot.
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😳Thank you everyone for your recommendation votes
author
Are you suppressing the protagonist's level too much? After five years from the protagonist's level 30 to Shrek, the level only rose seven levels. Look at the original work, Tang San rose to level 29 in five years, which is more than four times the level of the protagonist. Don't mess around with this kind of behavior.
suggestion
I hope the author can think of some self-created soul skills. Tang San can do it. I believe the author can do it too. Come on!
Author, let me give you some advice
When you write about Shrek Academy, you can sign in to gain some influence and so on, so that you have a backing and confidence, but this backing cannot be too hard. For example, you can write three titles, five Contras, and ten Soul Saints. As for the name of the force, I have already thought of it for you. It can be called Yuntian Temple.
Check-in building
Check in, check in, check in, check in
The author has a novel that I recommend to you. It's pretty good. You can learn from it. I'm also a Douluo fan named (Douluo's Destiny Modification System). You can read it. I think it's pretty good. It's not as disgusting as the original. Tang San in this novel has a very upright outlook on life and is not selfish. You can read it. You can also learn from it and write a novel about Tang San, who has a very upright outlook on things.
I hope the author will update soon
I hope the author will update it soon
Come on, author, don't stop updating🙄
This book is okay, it can be regarded as a breath of fresh air among Douluo fans in the mudslide.
suddenly thought
If Tang San didn't awaken his martial spirit at the beginning, would he be useless? I find this opening to be quite interesting, but I haven't been able to find anything similar.
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Official(19)Scraped 7d ago
The author gives some suggestions
I hope to torture Tang San, but I don't want to blindly criticize him. Those who hate Tang San without brains are so written that it makes me tired to read them. The protagonists I wrote are obviously more selfish, but they have no brains. I also hope that there will be a story about leaving Shrek in the middle and a completely self-created plot.
Oh, please support me
😳Thank you everyone for your recommendation votes
author
Are you suppressing the protagonist's level too much? After five years from the protagonist's level 30 to Shrek, the level only rose seven levels. Look at the original work, Tang San rose to level 29 in five years, which is more than four times the level of the protagonist. Don't mess around with this kind of behavior.
suggestion
I hope the author can think of some self-created soul skills. Tang San can do it. I believe the author can do it too. Come on!
Author, let me give you some advice
When you write about Shrek Academy, you can sign in to gain some influence and so on, so that you have a backing and confidence, but this backing cannot be too hard. For example, you can write three titles, five Contras, and ten Soul Saints. As for the name of the force, I have already thought of it for you. It can be called Yuntian Temple.
Check-in building
Check in, check in, check in, check in
The author has a novel that I recommend to you. It's pretty good. You can learn from it. I'm also a Douluo fan named (Douluo's Destiny Modification System). You can read it. I think it's pretty good. It's not as disgusting as the original. Tang San in this novel has a very upright outlook on life and is not selfish. You can read it. You can also learn from it and write a novel about Tang San, who has a very upright outlook on things.
I hope the author will update soon
I hope the author will update it soon
Come on, author, don't stop updating🙄
This book is okay, it can be regarded as a breath of fresh air among Douluo fans in the mudslide.
suddenly thought
If Tang San didn't awaken his martial spirit at the beginning, would he be useless? I find this opening to be quite interesting, but I haven't been able to find anything similar.
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