Douluo: Becoming a God Begins by Choosing Hex

Why don't you take this book off the shelves and make some changes. Yu Xiaogang, the trash in the original novel who didn't break through to level 29, can fucking overwhelm the protagonist. Why should he? Holy shit. That is to say, a person who is born with half-level soul power has cultivated his soul power to level 29 when he is the same age as the protagonist, or at least a little older. The protagonist is only level 25 after taking the defeat. It is not that he cannot become a villain. Think about it, your neighbor had sex every day when he was a child, and now he holds you down and beats you, making you have sex. Do you feel better? Do you really have anything good to look at? There is no need to make the protagonist so miserable. Even if you were someone else, you wouldn't be so disgusted. The plot is too vicious. Just think about it, what if one day your elementary school classmate who only deserves to eat your farts every day now mocks you every day. How do you feel when I see you every day? What do you think? It stands to reason that after the 6 years are over, there should be benefits after the magical power is over. In the end, he was still an idiot and couldn't beat his peers. Then why did you give this plug-in to him? Purely negative returns. The protagonist feels aggrieved today, will feel aggrieved tomorrow, and will feel aggrieved again the day after tomorrow. He should stop being the protagonist and just be a supporting actor. What do you plan to write next? Hurry up and ask him to get the fairy grass to improve the quality of his martial soul. He cannot be defeated by others of his own age, cannot be defeated by anyone at the same level, and cannot be defeated by anyone. So what is he worthy of doing? That original Chen Rongrong. What level is he among his peers? It's just an average level, no special skills, no special equipment, no self-created soul skills. There is no soul bone, no super-life soul ring. If you can't show his level, don't let him pin down the protagonist and beat him. He can barely fight back. Oh, he almost killed the protagonist in a sparring match. The protagonist who only knows how to write like this is a loser. The best among his peers can beat you into a fool. Then it's really frustrating for you as the protagonist. Let's put it plainly, when does your protagonist start showing off, when does he start showing off in front of others? Think about yourself, it's equivalent to writing a novel for 6 years, and you can only get half of the money for perfect attendance. Ah, I can't support myself, I have to look at you every day. Anyone can show off in front of you. You have been practicing for 6 years and think you have perfected your magical skills. But what's the result? It's still a roadside thing, brother, think about it, can you bear it?

Please ask the adoptive fathers to read it. If you want to keep a book, you can also use your little hands to turn to the last page. Please. The follow-up reading of the new book issue is really important. If the follow-up reading is too low, the book may be rejected.