The Heroine with a Beard is in Bad Shape, and the Protagonist Collapses

★ ★ ★ Samsung -- This book is not as bad as the reviews said. The writing is okay and I can read it. The outline of the female supporting role is also very good, and the idea of ​​a copy of the dream is very good. I added it to my reading list for Samsung. It was the copy by Shen Qingqiu that impressed me. The writing didn't look like it was written by the same person. (Maybe it was my sister who gave me extra points and smiled sideways) What I'm worried about is whether the protagonist's real-life plot writing can keep up with the writing of this dream copy. If there is no copy of this plot, I will give it 1 and a half stars at most. In fact, the previous poisonous points are not too big, but the details and character design are not handled so well. 1. It's just that the author didn't clearly explain the relationship between several female supporting characters in previous lives. Are they purely in love with the party? Or ntl? It makes people feel a little uncomfortable. This is also the poisonous point of many rebirth articles. It would be best if the author could revise the description clearly. 2. The author's villain doesn't quite look like a villain. But based on the subsequent writing style, I feel that this is how the author should have written it, and he should not be able to write it so poorly.