Douluo: Guns Suppress the Tianhe River, and Embers Cut Off the Divine Sky!
About This Novel
Under the bright sun, the young genius who bowed his head became the laughing stock of the whole family overnight. At the Po Zhi Clan's martial arts arena, Bai Chenxiang broke off her engagement in front of everyone, saying heart-breakingly: "Brother Jin, you have a blunt spear and a useless soul, how can you compete with me?" The clan elder sneered and expelled: "The soul power has not improved in six years, I will destroy the clan and leave no useless people!" Yang Jin shouldered the bladeless mysterious spear and disappeared into the setting sun. The sarcasm behind him is like a knife-- "Awakening the vision and worshiping with thousands of spears? I'm afraid I've stolen someone else's destiny!" "No matter how good your marksmanship is, blunt weapons without edge are still a joke!" On the top of the cliff, the young man sharpened his spear with his blood and tempered his sword with his soul! "The martial soul has no edge? Then I will use my spine as a whetstone and my life as a stone - to grind out a god-killing edge!" When the dark black gun body was soaked in the blood of the Star Beast, the first ray of cold light from the tip of the gun tore through the long night-- The soul power that had been dormant for six years suddenly broke through, and the gunfire shattered the clouds in the sky! He finally realized: This spear is not blunt, but a god-killing weapon that has not been sharpened; this soul is not useless, it is the evil energy of ten thousand soldiers sealing the Dantian! Five years later, in the continental soul master competition arena. The genius of the Po clan was shot to death, and the elder's eyes were about to burst: "Yang Jin! How dare you kill your own clan?!" The mysterious spear clicked on the ground, and the Shura banner danced. Yang Jin glanced at the high platform, his voice chilling to the bone: "This shot is a thank you for expelling me back then." Turning his eyes to look at the trembling snow-white figure on the VIP table: "Bai Chenxiang, you said blunt guns are not worthy of standing side by side--" "Today, I will fight for you with this blood, is that enough?!" When the tip of the meteorite spear pierces the door of the divine world Qian Renxue's divine armor shattered, the Rakshasa halberd broke, and all the gods in the sky knelt down under the light of their spears! Yang Jin stepped on his body and climbed to the sky, pointing his gun at the sky: "The so-called god's position is nothing more than the remains that have not been severed by a gun!" "
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Official(16)Scraped 4d ago
I don't want to read it after reading this introduction. It's such a piece of shit. The author has a problem with his head. He either broke off the engagement or lost his sense of family. How could he drive people away when there aren't many people in the pozi clan? You idiot, I'm sure he won't be able to finish it.
Lackey
Another wasteful start. This mode is not popular now. There is only one Xiao Yan.
The content is very interesting, but it is very passionate from the first chapter, so the content could be softened appropriately. Otherwise, it will feel a bit boring after watching it for a long time. The emotions can be richer and some branch lines can be developed, so that the sense of immersion will be stronger.
I hope I can continue writing. This is actually quite good, but the introduction may not be very good, but the content is quite good.
Super rubbish, rubbish, rubbish, and this kind of novel
Why are they all starting with rubbish? I've found a lot of new books and they all start with rubbish. What's so interesting about them?
Seven Snake Coil Spear Techniques, Hundred Birds Chao Feng Live God-killing Spear, Amazing Shot, Star Shattering Dream Spear Technique, Ice Soul Cold Star Spear Technique, Five Dragon Spear Techniques, Purple Flame Soul-Eating Spear Technique, World-Destroying Spear Technique, God-killing Thirteen Spear Moves, Inherited Shura God, Chaos God Thunder, Thunder Soul Refining Technique, Nine Heavens Thunder Movement Technique, Three Thousand Thunder Movements, Thunder Body, Reincarnation Eye, Northern Ming Divine Technique, Nine Yin Divine Technique, Beiba Six-in-one Spear, Six-in-One Spear, Shocking Dragon Transformation, Eight-Move Spear Technique, Flame Three-Pointed Spear Nine Flame Spear, God Killing Thirteen Spear Moves, Luo Family Spear, Zhao Family Spear Technique, Huo Family Spear Technique, Jiang Family Spear Technique, Hongmen Spear Technique, Qi Family Spear Technique, Ma Family Spear Technique, Yang Family Spear Technique, Gao Family Spear Technique, Seven Exploration Snake Coil Gun, Overlord Marksmanship Seven Explorations of the Snake Coil Marksmanship, Hundreds of Birds Facing the Phoenix, Live God-killing Spear, One Amazing Shot, Star Dream-Breaking Spear Technique, Ice Soul Cold Star Spear, Five Dragon Spear Techniques, Purple Flame Soul-Eating Spear, World-Destroying Spear Technique, Thirteen God-killing Spear Moves, Immortal Grass, Ice Dragon and Fire Dragon Five Dragon Spear Techniques, Formation-Breaking Overlord Spear, Dragon Soul Spear, Star Dream-Breaking Spear Art, Ice Soul Cold Star Spear Ice soul cold star gun overlord marksmanship
This book has many shortcomings. For example, the pace is too fast, and many characters are seriously inconsistent. Most of the plot is about fighting, and there is no sense of substitution. The characters' emotions are too simple and not rich enough. Overall, the content is still very exciting, especially the battle process, but it is not good to write this for a long time. Some daily life plots should be added.
The pace is a bit too fast. I'm either fighting or on the way to fight. There are also some characters that don't fit, such as Dugu Bo... In addition to writing about battles, you can also write about daily life, etc. Slowing down the pace can make it better.
This relationship progresses too fast and is a bit too abrupt. You can slow down appropriately and proceed step by step, otherwise the character image will be greatly deviated.
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Official(16)Scraped 4d ago
I don't want to read it after reading this introduction. It's such a piece of shit. The author has a problem with his head. He either broke off the engagement or lost his sense of family. How could he drive people away when there aren't many people in the pozi clan? You idiot, I'm sure he won't be able to finish it.
Lackey
Another wasteful start. This mode is not popular now. There is only one Xiao Yan.
The content is very interesting, but it is very passionate from the first chapter, so the content could be softened appropriately. Otherwise, it will feel a bit boring after watching it for a long time. The emotions can be richer and some branch lines can be developed, so that the sense of immersion will be stronger.
I hope I can continue writing. This is actually quite good, but the introduction may not be very good, but the content is quite good.
Super rubbish, rubbish, rubbish, and this kind of novel
Why are they all starting with rubbish? I've found a lot of new books and they all start with rubbish. What's so interesting about them?
Seven Snake Coil Spear Techniques, Hundred Birds Chao Feng Live God-killing Spear, Amazing Shot, Star Shattering Dream Spear Technique, Ice Soul Cold Star Spear Technique, Five Dragon Spear Techniques, Purple Flame Soul-Eating Spear Technique, World-Destroying Spear Technique, God-killing Thirteen Spear Moves, Inherited Shura God, Chaos God Thunder, Thunder Soul Refining Technique, Nine Heavens Thunder Movement Technique, Three Thousand Thunder Movements, Thunder Body, Reincarnation Eye, Northern Ming Divine Technique, Nine Yin Divine Technique, Beiba Six-in-one Spear, Six-in-One Spear, Shocking Dragon Transformation, Eight-Move Spear Technique, Flame Three-Pointed Spear Nine Flame Spear, God Killing Thirteen Spear Moves, Luo Family Spear, Zhao Family Spear Technique, Huo Family Spear Technique, Jiang Family Spear Technique, Hongmen Spear Technique, Qi Family Spear Technique, Ma Family Spear Technique, Yang Family Spear Technique, Gao Family Spear Technique, Seven Exploration Snake Coil Gun, Overlord Marksmanship Seven Explorations of the Snake Coil Marksmanship, Hundreds of Birds Facing the Phoenix, Live God-killing Spear, One Amazing Shot, Star Dream-Breaking Spear Technique, Ice Soul Cold Star Spear, Five Dragon Spear Techniques, Purple Flame Soul-Eating Spear, World-Destroying Spear Technique, Thirteen God-killing Spear Moves, Immortal Grass, Ice Dragon and Fire Dragon Five Dragon Spear Techniques, Formation-Breaking Overlord Spear, Dragon Soul Spear, Star Dream-Breaking Spear Art, Ice Soul Cold Star Spear Ice soul cold star gun overlord marksmanship
This book has many shortcomings. For example, the pace is too fast, and many characters are seriously inconsistent. Most of the plot is about fighting, and there is no sense of substitution. The characters' emotions are too simple and not rich enough. Overall, the content is still very exciting, especially the battle process, but it is not good to write this for a long time. Some daily life plots should be added.
The pace is a bit too fast. I'm either fighting or on the way to fight. There are also some characters that don't fit, such as Dugu Bo... In addition to writing about battles, you can also write about daily life, etc. Slowing down the pace can make it better.
This relationship progresses too fast and is a bit too abrupt. You can slow down appropriately and proceed step by step, otherwise the character image will be greatly deviated.
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