
Elf: Leisure Player
by Chant
About This Novel
In the finals of the Global Trainer Competition, Luo Cheng threw his Poké Ball helplessly. "Bang~" As the Poké Ball opened, a arrogant-looking Mook Eagle stared at the trainer and Pokémon opposite him in the sky. The trainer and Pokémon on the opposite side hugged each other and trembled under Mukhawk's sharp eyes. "I really just want to have a leisurely adventure with my friends~" Luo Cheng said:
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Official(13)Scraped 9d ago
The author's writing is very good, but I still have some flaws in the plot.
For example: Asuka's attitude towards the protagonist. She is obviously the King of Flying. Logically speaking, he is very powerful, but he still has some arrogance about himself. There is no way that just because the protagonist plays the game well and provides some good ideas, she will lick him like a dog. . . I don't know how to say this, anyway, I just feel like it's not right. There is a gap in status, strength and experience. Even if there is a gap, it's just a matter of respecting the protagonist (probably?). (When I know about licking dogs, I feel that I will only lick the person I want to lick if the person I want to lick is several times more perfect than myself, unless Asuka is a beauty control) And that crow whose name comes from nowhere. He said that the protagonist's temperament is very good, so he came to follow the protagonist. I didn't feel that the protagonist's temperament was very good, he just felt normal. And that Ma Huagang is similar to Asuka, there is a huge gap in identity and status. [There may be more later, but I haven't read that many yet. I hope the author can work hard to write better in the future]
book review
Author: Who is the heroine of this book? Is it a single heroine or multiple heroines?
A very good book
Why are there no comments, not even recommendation votes?
I can't understand it a bit, the title and content are always off topic
I don't know what Arrival wrote. The content is indeed leisurely, but this is too leisurely🤗
It's starting to feel a little abrupt
After reading some Pokémon fanfics, I personally feel that if you want to become an excellent trainer in reality, you should generally read two parts. One is nurturing and the other is fighting. Cultivation is the training of Pokémon by trainers, such as using various energy cubes and nutrients, cultivating Pokémon towards certain specialties, and learning various skills to form a combat system. However, the protagonists M'kel and Murk Crow were both picked up, and there was no special training. Murk Crow joined the team late, and M'kel had been picked up long ago. As a result, the protagonist didn't even know the skills, and relied on the two elves to train themselves to beat all the opponents in the game. It felt too abrupt. However, it is not impossible that the protagonist picks up some elves with good talents at the beginning. At this time, the protagonist will have to work hard on fighting. Many elves with good talents have their own arrogance. Why choose you? You must show your excellence in combat. Most of them are tactical thinking based on the experience of animation and games. For example, using Bulbasaur to learn crazy plants and then opening the tree world like Naruto Senju Hashirama and so on. As long as the imagination is reasonable, Pokémon can be completed. They are the creatures that can create miracles. But the protagonist said that he showed amazing training talent in the game, but I didn't feel that it was particularly obvious. All the battles in the first round are basically carried out in one wave. Generally speaking, you avoid when you say you want to dodge, you hit when you say you hit, and you say fatal when you say it is fatal. This reflects more of the excellence of cultivation, that is, level suppression, but this is what the elf has practiced by himself and has nothing to do with the protagonist. It feels that the protagonist is of no use. It seems that another person can do it. Personally, I feel that the author may want to reflect the protagonist's excellent fighting thinking at the beginning, with various skill combinations and so on, but I personally didn't feel it. It felt like the first round was all a mindless crushing.
Night showdown Male protagonist: "Big rock snake, collision" Heroine: "Blastoise, Bubble" Male protagonist: "Big rock snake, continuous collision" Female protagonist: "Blastoise, water cannon"
Having more female protagonists is worth five stars, very good
The author writes very well. Keep up the good work!
I especially like to read PM articles. I have been short of books recently, so this is my savior. Faster and faster, I will give you all my recommendation votes. 😍
The background, realistic reflections, etc. Are all very good, but straight men must be fake, because there is no such emotional straight man in the world, and they cannot even judge the obvious form. Some such people have low emotional intelligence but are not straight men. The author must understand
The King of Heaven is already equivalent to the highest power and power of the country. The rights of the King of Heaven and so on in this book are a bit childish and poisonous. It is all the fault of the author. In addition, the instructions are just the name of the elf + the moves. Why are there so many words? You can decide for yourself whether it is poisonous or not.
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Official(13)Scraped 9d ago
The author's writing is very good, but I still have some flaws in the plot.
For example: Asuka's attitude towards the protagonist. She is obviously the King of Flying. Logically speaking, he is very powerful, but he still has some arrogance about himself. There is no way that just because the protagonist plays the game well and provides some good ideas, she will lick him like a dog. . . I don't know how to say this, anyway, I just feel like it's not right. There is a gap in status, strength and experience. Even if there is a gap, it's just a matter of respecting the protagonist (probably?). (When I know about licking dogs, I feel that I will only lick the person I want to lick if the person I want to lick is several times more perfect than myself, unless Asuka is a beauty control) And that crow whose name comes from nowhere. He said that the protagonist's temperament is very good, so he came to follow the protagonist. I didn't feel that the protagonist's temperament was very good, he just felt normal. And that Ma Huagang is similar to Asuka, there is a huge gap in identity and status. [There may be more later, but I haven't read that many yet. I hope the author can work hard to write better in the future]
book review
Author: Who is the heroine of this book? Is it a single heroine or multiple heroines?
A very good book
Why are there no comments, not even recommendation votes?
I can't understand it a bit, the title and content are always off topic
I don't know what Arrival wrote. The content is indeed leisurely, but this is too leisurely🤗
It's starting to feel a little abrupt
After reading some Pokémon fanfics, I personally feel that if you want to become an excellent trainer in reality, you should generally read two parts. One is nurturing and the other is fighting. Cultivation is the training of Pokémon by trainers, such as using various energy cubes and nutrients, cultivating Pokémon towards certain specialties, and learning various skills to form a combat system. However, the protagonists M'kel and Murk Crow were both picked up, and there was no special training. Murk Crow joined the team late, and M'kel had been picked up long ago. As a result, the protagonist didn't even know the skills, and relied on the two elves to train themselves to beat all the opponents in the game. It felt too abrupt. However, it is not impossible that the protagonist picks up some elves with good talents at the beginning. At this time, the protagonist will have to work hard on fighting. Many elves with good talents have their own arrogance. Why choose you? You must show your excellence in combat. Most of them are tactical thinking based on the experience of animation and games. For example, using Bulbasaur to learn crazy plants and then opening the tree world like Naruto Senju Hashirama and so on. As long as the imagination is reasonable, Pokémon can be completed. They are the creatures that can create miracles. But the protagonist said that he showed amazing training talent in the game, but I didn't feel that it was particularly obvious. All the battles in the first round are basically carried out in one wave. Generally speaking, you avoid when you say you want to dodge, you hit when you say you hit, and you say fatal when you say it is fatal. This reflects more of the excellence of cultivation, that is, level suppression, but this is what the elf has practiced by himself and has nothing to do with the protagonist. It feels that the protagonist is of no use. It seems that another person can do it. Personally, I feel that the author may want to reflect the protagonist's excellent fighting thinking at the beginning, with various skill combinations and so on, but I personally didn't feel it. It felt like the first round was all a mindless crushing.
Night showdown Male protagonist: "Big rock snake, collision" Heroine: "Blastoise, Bubble" Male protagonist: "Big rock snake, continuous collision" Female protagonist: "Blastoise, water cannon"
Having more female protagonists is worth five stars, very good
The author writes very well. Keep up the good work!
I especially like to read PM articles. I have been short of books recently, so this is my savior. Faster and faster, I will give you all my recommendation votes. 😍
The background, realistic reflections, etc. Are all very good, but straight men must be fake, because there is no such emotional straight man in the world, and they cannot even judge the obvious form. Some such people have low emotional intelligence but are not straight men. The author must understand
The King of Heaven is already equivalent to the highest power and power of the country. The rights of the King of Heaven and so on in this book are a bit childish and poisonous. It is all the fault of the author. In addition, the instructions are just the name of the elf + the moves. Why are there so many words? You can decide for yourself whether it is poisonous or not.


















