
Douluo: Platinum Star
by Writerxfmcjl
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Official(2)Scraped 14h ago
I'm so sleepy after reading 2 lines, the writing is so bad, the author obviously doesn't read jojo and writes it hard
From a pure third-party perspective, I feel that the author is not too old and there are too many typos. What else is there to say that Platinum Star has diamond and time attributes? It is hard-written without reading the original work, and all the words are paraphrased. It feels like everyone is a shoddy mini-game NPC. The author can first learn how to write a composition, settle it down, and then write it.
Not bad, author. Paint Star Platinum a little stronger. Just be able to control your own destiny.
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Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 14h ago
I'm so sleepy after reading 2 lines, the writing is so bad, the author obviously doesn't read jojo and writes it hard
From a pure third-party perspective, I feel that the author is not too old and there are too many typos. What else is there to say that Platinum Star has diamond and time attributes? It is hard-written without reading the original work, and all the words are paraphrased. It feels like everyone is a shoddy mini-game NPC. The author can first learn how to write a composition, settle it down, and then write it.
Not bad, author. Paint Star Platinum a little stronger. Just be able to control your own destiny.









