What Do I Play

What Do I Play

by Star-chasing Light

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3Kwords2chapters
Latest:
Ch. 2Imperial Bloodline
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About This Novel

It is a cool novel, but it will bring you a different experience. In this novel with mythical beasts as the background, the male protagonist embarks on the road to becoming a god step by step. Of course, it will not be smooth sailing. Every choice determines the final answer, and I look forward to watching it.

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1. I feel that the plot is a bit cliche, but there is not much new idea. 2. The word is too long. I hope it can be expanded more. Just For example This way. 3. Speaking symbols, it is recommended to add these two [""] For example: I [how] said: "[what I said]" He [how] said: "[He said speaking]" How am I, "[What I said]" 4. I knew too much at the beginning, that is, the weakest and strongest things [Mortals - Gods] were told in the first chapter. There are various worlds 5. Use less foreshadowing, otherwise not many people will read it unless you write hundreds of thousands of words. 6. The start was a bit dull.

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