The Fragrance of Medicine Fills the Countryside

Thoughts after viewing After reading this book, I feel that this book is very story-telling, the plot is very good, ups and downs, and very readable! I am just giving a few suggestions to the author here. The beholder has different opinions, but the author may not necessarily adopt them! 1. There are a bit too many character descriptions in this book, especially the description of expressions, which makes people feel weird! We are not writing an essay, we are writing a novel! We can't just overstate the numbers. 2. Golden Key: The heroine has a golden key to a space, so do we Not surprising, every protagonist has a golden key, mainly Every time the heroine opens the space, she takes it out directly without hiding from everyone, and no one questions it, as if it is a matter of course? Do people know that you have a golden key? If people don't know that you have a space, the things you take out of thin air Now, wouldn't everyone be surprised? I suggest the author either give an explanation to avoid everyone when the heroine takes things from the space, or just say that everyone knows that the heroine has a golden finger! This way readers won't feel that everyone inside is a fool😑 The author, please don't think too much. It's just some suggestions. If there are any, you can change them, if not, you can encourage them! Finally, I wish the author great success with his new book and better results! 😹😹😹

This post only represents my personal opinion. Friends are welcome to discuss and communicate with each other. I also hope that friends who come in to read will support the big book. Okay, let's get to the topic. Story background The heroine Su Chenjin was a case-handling expert and medical expert in the ancient Tang Dynasty. She had intelligence and keen observation, and was famous for repeatedly solving strange cases. Her decisive and ruthless case-handling methods made her deeply appreciated by the emperor. However, because Su Chenpa's handling of the "Mysterious Coffin" case accidentally involved the interests of Uncle Yang, she was raided by his men. When she woke up again, she had traveled to modern times in 1993, a country called "Xinhua Country", and was reborn in Sujiazhuang and lived here for eighteen years. Su Chenpa's accidental time travel also brought disaster and blessing to the heroine. She had a "portable space" that contained various tools for handling cases and treatments in her previous life. This also laid a solid foundation for Su Chenpa's future medical investigation journey. [Main story line] In the background, we learned that Su Chenpa has integrated into all aspects of life after traveling through time and has settled down. Through my reading and understanding, this work is a farming novel based on medicine and detective work, with a love element at the same time. Of course, the current plot mainly revolves around the development of the plot after sister-in-law Jiang Yue gave birth to God's will. Su Chenpa accidentally discovered that Jiang Yue's daily necessities were poisoned and wanted to kill the mother and daughter. Su Chenpa then launched a series of investigations and finally succeeded in learning the truth in the latest chapter. It was very satisfying and the truth will never be absent. Based on the novels I have read about this type of novel, most of them involve the female protagonist working hand in hand with the male protagonist to solve various weird cases and promote the plot by treating various complicated and difficult diseases. Finally, it describes that the country of Xinhua has encountered a major medical crisis, which needs the protagonists to solve. After completion, they can retire and return to their hometown, and the male and female majors will become righteous and enjoy the happiness of family. Of course, these are just personal assumptions. After all, his level is far beyond mine. Different opinions are welcome to exchange. [Highlights of the work] ①Elements from ancient times to modern times ②Personal charm of the heroine ③The romantic emotional exploration of the male and female protagonists ④The special background of the 1990s ⑤The combination of medicine and detective work Thinking about the plot Everyone has plots that they like to watch and plots that they find boring. When I watched this work, I was already an adult version of the heroine. Although there is nothing wrong with it, I actually felt that what I wanted to watch was when an ancient person had consciousness and memory. Will interesting things happen when he comes to this world? Will he be no different from ordinary children or will he be as old-fashioned as an adult? Haha, maybe I want to know what it would be like for an adult to have a child's body. Also, the heroine Su Chenpa is an ancient person. I hope that the subsequent plot can recall the ancient plot, or have the opportunity to guest star in the ancient plot to satisfy the story of ancient and modern times. Of course, this is only my personal imagination. [Personal suggestion] After all, I still watch less female videos, and I still have some thoughts after watching them. After all, the styles of male videos and female videos are very different. Of course, this is just my personal idea, which may be different from most people. Please bring it up, I want to discuss it with everyone. First of all, I found that one of the characteristics of female videos is that they particularly like to describe eyes. Whenever the male protagonist appears, he will always focus on describing the eyes of the male protagonist, not just the male protagonist. In the first ten chapters of this work, whether it is the male protagonist, the female protagonist, or a supporting role, the author really describes a lot of eyes, and it seems to have a fixed template, the look of the eyes + a large paragraph of modifying sentences (please see the picture below for details) [Image] [Image] As shown in the picture, the eyes are described first, and then a large paragraph of qualifying sentences is added. This kind of plot accounts for a large proportion in the first ten chapters, and there are as many as four or five plots in more than one chapter. I don't know if it is Dada's style. In short, such a plot seems a bit redundant and wordy to me as a reader, and if there is too much content, it will make people feel a little uncomfortable. I'm sorry, Daddy. , Can I say that this kind of description is a bit awkward (laughing and crying), but after the tenth chapter, there are a lot less plots like this, and the reading is much smoother than before. I have made great progress, and I started to focus on describing the plot. At first, I thought that your previous creation was just a waste of words (laughing sideways). In fact, the main reason is that there are too many modifying descriptive sentences behind the expression in the eyes. The expression in the eyes alone is fine, really (laughing and crying) Secondly, in addition to the excessive descriptions of eye modification, there are also various other descriptions, such as the picture below. [Image] [Image] After describing the shoulders, chest, mouth, etc., You have to add a few qualifying and descriptive sentences later. It's not bad, because the description of the expression is indispensable to the entire storyline. It is very important for the character's personality and characteristics. However, too much description will make people feel that your portrayal is too deliberate and looks awkward. The big feet and lightness make people feel "watery", but these are also described a lot in the first ten chapters. The subsequent plot can be seen to have made a better progress, and it began to focus on the plot itself. There are less descriptions of these additional expressions, and I feel more comfortable. After all, a long paragraph of modifying descriptive sentences still looks very strange. Of course, I am not scolding you by saying so much. I love tiger oil so much, so why would I let it go? These are all my personal opinions. I think what I said is wrong and pushed me hard! At the same time, I also hope that friends who have seen this post of mine will take a look at the work. It is very beautiful. The author is still a new author. Please be more patient with me and let us see the growth and progress of Da. How about being a nurturing reader? Come on, I love tiger oil! [TOPIC]

I am the author of this book, a veteran author among the new ones. This is a farming novel, a novel about two-way secret love. I want to write about a different feeling, the breath of life in the fireworks of the world. When you open this book, you will find that it is the story of your life and mine. Writing is not easy, I cherish it very much. This year, I am accompanying you in Reading.

The heroine travels from ancient times to the present, possesses medical skills to solve crimes, and has a golden finger. It is full of fun and worth watching😹😹😹

Let me also talk about my feelings after reading it. This is the first time I read a book about a female channel. I wonder if all female channels are like this. They often start to describe their eyes, and then everyone is moved by it. In some places, there is a long series of parallel sentences, such as his steps, his hands, his breathing, his eyes, and his steps. Turning the page again shows her back, her steps, her surgical gown and so on. However, the flaws in this book do not hide its flaws, and there are also good parts. For example, the heroine's superb medical skills and personal charm, the plot from ancient time travel and rebirth to modern times, and the romantic interaction between Xiao Jin and Gu Xinliang are all well described. Moreover, the heroine also has a good golden finger and a portable medical space. At the beginning, she saved her sister-in-law who suffered from hemorrhage due to childbirth. Through this operation, the male and female protagonists became connected and the subsequent plot unfolded.

Traveling in reverse, from ancient times to the present, a doctor with a portable space inherits medical skills and saves the common people. It takes medical skills as the main line and assists in investigating the case at the same time. The combination of the two elements is very interesting.

A great time-travel farming story with a light and interesting plot, worth reading.

After reading Nine Zero, I feel that the author's writing is smooth, the content of the book is vivid and rich, the plot is reasonable, and the description is delicate. It is worth reading.

This is a period and life story that spans the past and present. It looks relaxed and interesting, and it is worth recommending!

Ancient doctors travel through the 1990s, giving you a different feeling. The writing is delicate and worth watching.