Under One Person: I, Zhang Sanfeng's Template for the Opening
by Strong Crab
About This Novel
Zhang Daoyan traveled to the world under one person and became the senior brother of Zhou Sheng of Wudang Mountain. He awakened Zhang Sanfeng's template at the beginning. As long as he plays Zhang Sanfeng, he can continue to become stronger. Super comprehension, Tai Chi, Tai Chi Sword, Nine Yang Magic... It coincided with the 80th birthday party of the old man of the famous Lu family. On that day, outstanding disciples from various sects witnessed the fear of being dominated by Zhang Daoyan. Wang Ai: "I just want to be a chubby guy, I don't want to be a chubby girl!" Lu Ci: "I thought our Lu family's Ruyi Jin was already extremely mysterious, but this Tai Chi turned out to be even more magical!" Lu Jin: "I'm so stupid, really. I only knew that Zhang Zhiwei from Longhu Mountain could make people cry with one slap, but I didn't know that senior brother Zhang Daoyan from Wudang Mountain could also hit people hard." "I~ don't take it seriously at all!" Heavenly Master Zhang Jingqing was extremely pleased: "Now that evil disciple Zhang Zhiwei has finally met his match!" Later, the Ninjas from Bihe Mountain invaded the Dragon Kingdom, and Zhang Daoyan, a Taoist priest from Wudang Mountain, became a shadow that they could not overcome. There was also the Jiashen Rebellion. Thirty-six thieves were surrounded by the world. Zhang Daoyan fought back many crazy sects with one punch and one sword. Faced with other people's accusations against him, Zhang Daoyan just stood there, smiled and said: "Everyone should value peace."
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Official(5)Scraped 8d ago
Goodbye, author. I've read Chapter 22 and I really can't stand it anymore. I'll give you a three-star rating before leaving. The previous two stars won't change. This time, the three-star rating is an encouragement to you. I hope the author will put more effort into character description and fighting scenes. The characters can be drawn more fully, instead of being completely tool-like NPCs like they are now. And when fighting, try not to be too wordy. I know that the author wants to improve the protagonist's character, but in the eyes of readers, this is actually a very blunt act of pretentiousness.
This way of writing by the author is really disgusting. The author is always present when he writes about the protagonist fighting with other people. Others do not think highly of the protagonist and think that the protagonist will lose, and then reverse this cliché and disgusting feeling. Who else will read it now, and they don't know what the author's thoughts are.
The protagonist can win against anyone. It's fine if you challenge someone who is strong, but what are you doing taking your time with someone who is so much weaker than you? I don't understand what you are writing. Can't you just slap someone who is weaker than you? Write that many words? There is no need at all, it is purely about hydrology.
It can be said that if you, the author, continue to write in this way, this book will also be messy. I've read a little bit of the author of your last book, but I've only read two chapters and I know that you either have poor grades or will definitely fail. I suggest the author go back and read the suggestions given by readers in the comment section of his previous novel. Usually the failure points of novels are mostly the same. Anyway, what has been said here, it is your own business whether to listen to your suggestions or not.
I've read Chapter 10 and I really can't stand it anymore.
Let's not talk about other things, Zhou Sheng was able to understand Fenghou Qimen at least, and he wrote like a follower. Will Zhang Huaiyi beat Zhang Zhiwei? There is no opponent yet. The way you write it, it sounds like the Four are the most powerful organizations in the alien world. There are all kinds of pretense and slaps in the face throughout the whole process. In what era are you still writing about the pretense and slaps, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger?
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Official(5)Scraped 8d ago
Goodbye, author. I've read Chapter 22 and I really can't stand it anymore. I'll give you a three-star rating before leaving. The previous two stars won't change. This time, the three-star rating is an encouragement to you. I hope the author will put more effort into character description and fighting scenes. The characters can be drawn more fully, instead of being completely tool-like NPCs like they are now. And when fighting, try not to be too wordy. I know that the author wants to improve the protagonist's character, but in the eyes of readers, this is actually a very blunt act of pretentiousness.
This way of writing by the author is really disgusting. The author is always present when he writes about the protagonist fighting with other people. Others do not think highly of the protagonist and think that the protagonist will lose, and then reverse this cliché and disgusting feeling. Who else will read it now, and they don't know what the author's thoughts are.
The protagonist can win against anyone. It's fine if you challenge someone who is strong, but what are you doing taking your time with someone who is so much weaker than you? I don't understand what you are writing. Can't you just slap someone who is weaker than you? Write that many words? There is no need at all, it is purely about hydrology.
It can be said that if you, the author, continue to write in this way, this book will also be messy. I've read a little bit of the author of your last book, but I've only read two chapters and I know that you either have poor grades or will definitely fail. I suggest the author go back and read the suggestions given by readers in the comment section of his previous novel. Usually the failure points of novels are mostly the same. Anyway, what has been said here, it is your own business whether to listen to your suggestions or not.
I've read Chapter 10 and I really can't stand it anymore.
Let's not talk about other things, Zhou Sheng was able to understand Fenghou Qimen at least, and he wrote like a follower. Will Zhang Huaiyi beat Zhang Zhiwei? There is no opponent yet. The way you write it, it sounds like the Four are the most powerful organizations in the alien world. There are all kinds of pretense and slaps in the face throughout the whole process. In what era are you still writing about the pretense and slaps, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger?
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