
Pirate: as a Celestial Dragon, I Am Too Handsome
by Fried Junhua
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He traveled to Mariejoia and was reborn as an out-and-out Celestial Dragon. After witnessing the darkness of the pirate world with his own eyes, Lockleon was determined to change everything. But looking at myself in the mirror, ugly and fat... "It's better to lose weight first and wait until you become more handsome."
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Official(7)Scraped 7d ago
The Celestial Dragons are a very good subject, at least no one has written it well so far that I have read.
You don't even look at what's under your butt, what are the Celestial Dragons? You are a ruler, and false kindness is an idiot in the eyes of slaves and Dracos. Slaves will only consider this kind of goodwill without deterrence as cowardice. In the eyes of Dracos, you are a big fool. The unstable factors of rule are not those Dracos who are just eating and waiting to die. It is better to kill them. If you are not human inside and outside, you can only perish. It is very annoying to see. Please write about the Celestial Dragons. First, you should substitute yourself into the Celestial Dragons. At the very least, you should do things that benefit others and yourself, rather than the suffocating stupid behavior. Half of your book has been scrapped. It is a good choice to re-open a new one. If I continue to write about the Celestial Dragons, I will at least have experience. The biggest drawback of this book is that the protagonist does not assume his role at all. It is too abrupt in the eyes of the Celestial Dragons and others. The Celestial Dragons are also human beings and can be won over. It's like a big booger on a piece of white paper, really disgusting.
Write as well as possible
Maybe you think the Celestial Dragons deserve to die! But from the perspective of the Tianlong people, many people deserve to die! Imagine that I am a descendant of the 20 rulers of the kingdom 800 years ago, and I rule the whole world. You think what I do is terrible, but you can imagine what those people do in reality. I just treat people as slaves, while others treat them as livestock and consumption. Goods, I am just a human being, and they will be used as experimental subjects, drugs, and medicines. What they do are all human labor, and they are all slaves, but they will never be dismembered, eaten, or nourished. Everything they do is within the scope of imagination and cognition, but what about reality? Unimaginable hell, peeling skin and cramps, killing human beings in front of them, leaving their bodies alive, freezing and removing their bones. You can imagine that the Tianlong people only treat people as slaves and feudal lords, but in reality, they treat people as animals. The range of irregular human beings is hundreds of times different.
Is there anything written by the author himself that you don't read?
If you don't know how to write about the Celestial Dragons, don't write about it! Traveling through time and becoming a top noble in a huge organization, with a golden finger, you don't want to be the leader, but you can practice yourself and go to sea? Wouldn't it be enough to set up a devil fruit that bewitches people or a devil fruit that controls people and is 100% loyal? If you can't write, don't write.
Among the many books about the Celestial Dragons, this one is relatively poor.
Of course, it is much better than those who directly write and become pirates. They dig their own roots. They are really stupid. It depends on how it is written in the later stage. There is nothing interesting in the early stage, so it is basically written according to the mainstream of the Tianlong people.
Although it was too toxic before, the author's level has improved a bit, and at least he has a sense of immersion.
This chapter feels much better than before, and there is still progress. I hope there are more things that will benefit myself and the Celestial Dragons. Everything about the protagonist is based on the Celestial Dragons. As a Celestial Dragon, he has been at the top of the world from the beginning. What the protagonist has to do is not to overthrow himself, but also to fight against the protagonist group, and then step forward Step up the layout, reduce the threat to the world government, win over the Five Old Stars and the top leaders of the Draco Navy, increase their influence, and finally replace the Five Old Stars, slowly accumulate strength, form their own power industry, and reform the Draco people internally. Every politician is an old Yinbi, and finally overthrow Im. For example, if Tiger invades Mariejoia and frees the slaves, you can capture Tiger while most of the slaves are liberated, improve your status among the Celestial Dragons, and then slowly start to take power, such as the Revolutionary Army, the Celestial Dragon traitors, the Yonko, the Shichibukai, etc. As a time traveler, you must give full play to your own advantages, not only your own precognitive ability but also your special status.
Author, when will you update?
Is this a Celestial Dragon? I'm afraid it's not a dog licking, it's a slave who's licking it
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Official(7)Scraped 7d ago
The Celestial Dragons are a very good subject, at least no one has written it well so far that I have read.
You don't even look at what's under your butt, what are the Celestial Dragons? You are a ruler, and false kindness is an idiot in the eyes of slaves and Dracos. Slaves will only consider this kind of goodwill without deterrence as cowardice. In the eyes of Dracos, you are a big fool. The unstable factors of rule are not those Dracos who are just eating and waiting to die. It is better to kill them. If you are not human inside and outside, you can only perish. It is very annoying to see. Please write about the Celestial Dragons. First, you should substitute yourself into the Celestial Dragons. At the very least, you should do things that benefit others and yourself, rather than the suffocating stupid behavior. Half of your book has been scrapped. It is a good choice to re-open a new one. If I continue to write about the Celestial Dragons, I will at least have experience. The biggest drawback of this book is that the protagonist does not assume his role at all. It is too abrupt in the eyes of the Celestial Dragons and others. The Celestial Dragons are also human beings and can be won over. It's like a big booger on a piece of white paper, really disgusting.
Write as well as possible
Maybe you think the Celestial Dragons deserve to die! But from the perspective of the Tianlong people, many people deserve to die! Imagine that I am a descendant of the 20 rulers of the kingdom 800 years ago, and I rule the whole world. You think what I do is terrible, but you can imagine what those people do in reality. I just treat people as slaves, while others treat them as livestock and consumption. Goods, I am just a human being, and they will be used as experimental subjects, drugs, and medicines. What they do are all human labor, and they are all slaves, but they will never be dismembered, eaten, or nourished. Everything they do is within the scope of imagination and cognition, but what about reality? Unimaginable hell, peeling skin and cramps, killing human beings in front of them, leaving their bodies alive, freezing and removing their bones. You can imagine that the Tianlong people only treat people as slaves and feudal lords, but in reality, they treat people as animals. The range of irregular human beings is hundreds of times different.
Is there anything written by the author himself that you don't read?
If you don't know how to write about the Celestial Dragons, don't write about it! Traveling through time and becoming a top noble in a huge organization, with a golden finger, you don't want to be the leader, but you can practice yourself and go to sea? Wouldn't it be enough to set up a devil fruit that bewitches people or a devil fruit that controls people and is 100% loyal? If you can't write, don't write.
Among the many books about the Celestial Dragons, this one is relatively poor.
Of course, it is much better than those who directly write and become pirates. They dig their own roots. They are really stupid. It depends on how it is written in the later stage. There is nothing interesting in the early stage, so it is basically written according to the mainstream of the Tianlong people.
Although it was too toxic before, the author's level has improved a bit, and at least he has a sense of immersion.
This chapter feels much better than before, and there is still progress. I hope there are more things that will benefit myself and the Celestial Dragons. Everything about the protagonist is based on the Celestial Dragons. As a Celestial Dragon, he has been at the top of the world from the beginning. What the protagonist has to do is not to overthrow himself, but also to fight against the protagonist group, and then step forward Step up the layout, reduce the threat to the world government, win over the Five Old Stars and the top leaders of the Draco Navy, increase their influence, and finally replace the Five Old Stars, slowly accumulate strength, form their own power industry, and reform the Draco people internally. Every politician is an old Yinbi, and finally overthrow Im. For example, if Tiger invades Mariejoia and frees the slaves, you can capture Tiger while most of the slaves are liberated, improve your status among the Celestial Dragons, and then slowly start to take power, such as the Revolutionary Army, the Celestial Dragon traitors, the Yonko, the Shichibukai, etc. As a time traveler, you must give full play to your own advantages, not only your own precognitive ability but also your special status.
Author, when will you update?
Is this a Celestial Dragon? I'm afraid it's not a dog licking, it's a slave who's licking it









